Teacher— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不自然的地方，例如“which let me laugh the subject”不符合英语习惯，建议使用更准确的表达方式，并且避免使用口语化的“and all”。

예시: Yes, my favourite teacher is my high school math teacher. He made complex formulas interesting and was always patient, which helped me enjoy the subject.

제안: 回答较简短，缺少连接词使句子显得不够连贯。建议使用连接词使表达更流畅，同时可以补充更多细节。

예시: Unfortunately, I am not still in touch with my primary school teacher because of time and distance, but I still remember their kindness clearly.

제안: 回答结构较好，但有语法错误，如“when I fail exams”应为“when I failed exams”。建议注意时态一致，并且可以使用更多连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: He not only taught math very well but also boosted my confidence when I failed exams. Moreover, he spent extra time tutoring me and encouraged me never to give up.

제안: 回答中有语法错误，如“admire teacher”应为“admire teachers”，且表达不够自然。建议使用更完整的句子，并且注意冠词和复数形式的使用。

예시: I admire teachers, but to be honest, I would prefer a career in filmmaking because I love the creative industry very much.

× He made complex formulas fun and all, and was always patient which let me laugh the subject.

✓ He made complex formulas fun and was always patient, which made me enjoy the subject.

句中使用了不正确的连词“and all”，应去掉以使句子更通顺；此外，‘which let me laugh the subject’表达不当，应改为‘which made me enjoy the subject’来表达喜欢这门学科的意思。

× Sadly no time and distance made it hard, but I still remember their kindness.

✓ Sadly, no time and distance made it hard, but I still remember their kindness.

句子中缺少逗号，影响理解。虽然时态正确，但为了表达清晰，应在“Sadly”后加逗号。

× He not only taught math very well but also boosted my confidence when I fail exams.

✓ He not only taught math very well but also boosted my confidence when I failed exams.

句中“fail”应使用过去式“failed”，因为描述的是过去发生的事情。

× I admire teacher, but to be honest I'd prefer a career in filmmaking because I love creative industry very much.

✓ I admire teachers, but to be honest I'd prefer a career in filmmaking because I love the creative industry very much.

‘teacher’应为复数形式‘teachers’，表示泛指；‘creative industry’前应加定冠词‘the’以明确特指某一行业。