Teacher— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时应避免语法错误和表达不清，如“my go to teacher and Mr. Lee”表达不完整且不自然。建议使用完整句子直接回答问题，并补充具体细节。

예시: Yes, my favourite teacher is Mr. Lee, who taught me English in second grade. He was very funny and used humor to make learning enjoyable, which really motivated me to improve my English skills.

제안: 回答中出现语法错误和句子不完整，如“about once a year during”缺少后续内容。建议回答时注意句子完整性，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

예시: Yes, I am still in touch with my primary school technology teacher, Mr. Huang. We usually communicate about once a year, mostly through emails or social media.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然，如“during in second school”和“attract me learning English”。建议使用正确的语法结构，并丰富细节说明老师如何帮助自己。

예시: My favourite teacher, Mr. Lee, helped me by making English lessons fun and interesting. Since I didn't like English before, his humor and engaging teaching style encouraged me to enjoy learning the language.

제안: 回答内容直接且清晰，但可以使用更多连接词使表达更流畅，同时避免重复“salary”一词。

예시: Honestly, I don't want to be a teacher because I believe the salary is usually low. Instead, I would prefer to work as a sales assistant since it offers better pay and more opportunities for advancement.

× He used his sense of humor to attract me to learning English.

✓ He used his sense of humor to attract me to learn English.

动词 attract 后面接动词不定式 to learn，而不是动名词 to learning。这里应该用动词不定式形式。

× Additionally, I have been in contact with him about once a year during.

✓ Additionally, I have been in contact with him about once a year.

句子末尾的 during 使用不当，缺少后续内容，导致句子不完整，应去掉 during。

× My favorite teacher was Mr. Lee. He was my English teacher during in second school.

✓ My favorite teacher was Mr. Lee. He was my English teacher during second grade.

短语 during in second school 结构错误，应该用 during second grade 表示“在二年级期间”。

× He used his sense of humor to attract me learning English.

✓ He used his sense of humor to attract me to learn English.

动词 attract 后面应接动词不定式 to learn，而不是动名词 learning。

× However, I would prefer to be a sales assistant because I want to earn higher salary.

✓ However, I would prefer to be a sales assistant because I want to earn a higher salary.

salary 是可数名词，前面需要加不定冠词 a，表示“一份更高的薪水”。