Teacher— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中有语法错误，如“like studied”应为“liked studying”，且句子结构不够自然。建议注意时态一致性和句子流畅性，同时避免冗余。

예시: Yes, I had a favourite teacher in primary school. She was my Chinese teacher, who was very friendly and helpful. I enjoyed her writing lessons because she appreciated my work, which motivated me a lot.

제안: 回答表达清晰，但句子略显重复且结构不够紧凑。建议简化表达，避免重复，同时使用连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: My favourite teacher was my primary school teacher, but I haven't kept in touch with her because she retired after I graduated.

제안: 回答内容具体且相关，但开头重复前文内容，影响流畅性。建议直接回答问题，并使用连接词丰富细节。

예시: My favourite teacher helped me by improving my writing skills and offering encouragement whenever I felt upset, which boosted my confidence.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然，如“like it”和“teaching other”。建议注意语法准确性，句子简洁自然，并使用连接词。

예시: No, I don't want to be a teacher in the future because I already have a job I enjoy. Also, I'm not very outgoing, so teaching wouldn't suit me.

× She likes my writings, so I also like studied in her writing lesson.

✓ She liked my writings, so I also liked studying in her writing lesson.

这里描述的是过去的事情，应该使用过去时态。'likes'和'like studied'都应改为过去时态，且'studied'应改为动名词形式'studying'。

× she was retired after I graduated.

✓ she retired after I graduated.

'was retired'是被动语态，表示被别人退休，通常不这样用。这里应使用主动语态'she retired'表示她自己退休了。

× I already have a job that I really like it.

✓ I already have a job that I really like.

关系从句中不需要重复使用主语'it'，去掉'it'使句子更简洁正确。

× I'm not a friendly and outgoing person and so that I don't enjoy teaching other.

✓ I'm not a friendly and outgoing person, so I don't enjoy teaching others.

'and so that'用法错误，应改为' so'表示因果关系；'other'应为复数形式'others'，表示其他人。