Teacher— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误，如动词时态和单复数形式不正确，且句子较长，缺少适当的连接词，使表达不够流畅。建议注意动词时态一致，使用连接词使句子更连贯，同时避免重复表达。

예시: Yes, I have many teachers I like, but my favourite is my secondary school maths teacher. She is very responsible and kind-hearted. Moreover, she always gives me feedback after class and helps me whenever I need assistance.

제안: 回答较为口语化，使用了俚语表达“a student with a full plate”，可能不够正式。建议使用更正式的表达，并且注意主谓一致，如“them”指代单数老师时应改为“him/her”。

예시: No, I am not in touch with my primary school teacher because I have a busy schedule. Therefore, I don't have much time to keep contact with him or her.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误，如动词单复数形式错误，句子结构不完整且表达不够具体。建议使用完整句子，注意动词形式，并提供更具体的帮助细节。

예시: My favourite teacher helped me in many ways. For example, whenever I needed help, she would assist me immediately. She also helped me solve problems when I faced difficulties.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议使用完整句子，注意主谓一致，避免口语化的“nope”，并清楚表达原因。

예시: Unfortunately, I do not want to be a teacher in the future because I am not patient enough. Although I am responsible, I do not like this profession.

× She is really responsible and kind hearted and she always give feedback after class on my performance and help me when I need help.

✓ She is really responsible and kind-hearted and she always gives feedback after class on my performance and helps me when I need help.

主语是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加-s或-es。这里的"she"对应的动词"give"和"help"应改为"gives"和"helps"。

× I live a busy life so I don't have too much time to keep in touch with them.

✓ I live a busy life so I don't have too much time to keep in touch with them.

此句无主谓一致错误，保持原句。

× When I need help, my teacher always help me at once and when I meet some difficulties she also help me to solve it.

✓ When I need help, my teacher always helps me at once and when I meet some difficulties she also helps me to solve them.

主语"my teacher"是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加-s，"help"应改为"helps"。此外，"difficulties"是复数，指代时应使用复数代词"them"，而不是"it"。

× Unfortunately Nope because I'm a person who are not patient enough and though I am very responsible but I don't like teachers this job.

✓ Unfortunately, nope, because I'm a person who is not patient enough and though I am very responsible, I don't like the teaching job.

关系代词"who"后面的动词应与先行词"person"（第三人称单数）一致，故"are"应改为"is"。此外，句子中缺少逗号，"teachers this job"表达不清，应改为"the teaching job"。