Teacher— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is a bit long and contains some unnatural phrases like 'cool as cucumber' and 'helping nature'. Try to be more natural and concise. Also, avoid idioms that may not fit well. Use clear linking words to connect ideas.

예시: Yes, my favourite teacher was my maths teacher because she was very patient and supportive. She helped me understand difficult concepts, which improved my marks significantly. Besides, she was knowledgeable in many subjects, so I admired her a lot.

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains idioms like 'never miss a boat' which is not used correctly here. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use simple, natural language. Also, use linking words to improve coherence.

예시: No, I am not currently in touch with my primary school teachers. However, I often look for them on social media to learn about their lives. If I get a chance to meet them in person, I would definitely not miss it.

제안: Your answer is confusing and has grammatical errors. Also, the pronouns are inconsistent (she vs he). Try to organise your ideas clearly with correct grammar and use linking words to connect points logically.

예시: My favourite teacher helped me in many ways. For example, she gave me valuable advice about my future and career choices. She understood my strengths and guided me to make the right decisions.

제안: Your answer has some repetition and grammatical mistakes. Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid repeating the same points. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

예시: Yes, I want to be a teacher in the future because it is a respected and proud profession. If I get the opportunity, I will definitely take it. I want to guide others and teach them important life lessons.

× she was cool as cucumber and very helping nature which helped me to achieve my desired goal and my marks

✓ she was cool as a cucumber and had a very helpful nature which helped me to achieve my desired goals and marks

The phrase 'cool as cucumber' requires the article 'a' before 'cucumber' to be grammatically correct. Also, 'very helping nature' is incorrect; it should be 'very helpful nature' because 'helping' is a verb form, while 'helpful' is the correct adjective here. Additionally, 'goal' should be plural 'goals' to match the context of multiple achievements.

× there are many other teachers I like but I prefer her most

✓ there are many other teachers I like, but I prefer her the most

The phrase 'prefer her most' is incomplete; it should be 'prefer her the most' to correctly express the superlative preference. Also, a comma is needed before 'but' to separate the clauses properly.

× Not now, I'm not in touch with my school teacher but on social media I always try to search them and want to know about their lifestyle

✓ Not now, I'm not in touch with my school teacher but on social media I always try to search for them and want to know about their lifestyle

The verb 'search' requires the preposition 'for' when followed by an object. Also, 'them' is used correctly here as it refers to multiple teachers, so no change needed there.

× I never miss a boat if I get a chance to meet them in any place

✓ I never miss a chance if I get an opportunity to meet them anywhere

The idiom 'miss the boat' means to miss an opportunity, so 'miss a boat' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'miss a chance' or 'miss an opportunity'. Also, 'in any place' is better expressed as 'anywhere' for natural English.

× There are many ways in which my favorite teacher helps me like for my future guidance also he helped me a lot and also guided me what is wrong and what is right for my future it

✓ There are many ways in which my favorite teacher helped me, like providing future guidance; he helped me a lot and also guided me on what is wrong and what is right for my future

The sentence mixes present tense 'helps' with past tense 'helped' and 'guided'. Since the context is about past events, all verbs should be in past tense. Also, the sentence structure is unclear and needs punctuation for clarity.

× He also helped me to choose my career because he knows me much better than me in this subject I was

✓ He also helped me to choose my career because he knows me much better than I do in this subject

The phrase 'better than me' should be 'better than I do' to be grammatically correct. Also, the ending 'in this subject I was' is incomplete and unclear; it is corrected to 'in this subject' for clarity.

× I will al also wanted to be a teacher if I get a chance

✓ I have always wanted to be a teacher if I get a chance

The phrase 'will al also wanted' is incorrect. 'Have always wanted' correctly expresses a continuous desire from past to present. Also, 'if I get a chance' is correct conditional usage.

× I will never miss this chance and I wanted to guide a person in my life and give them a good life lesson

✓ I will never miss this chance and I want to guide a person in my life and give them a good life lesson

The sentence mixes future tense 'will never miss' with past tense 'wanted'. To maintain consistency, 'wanted' should be changed to present tense 'want' to express current intention.