Teacher— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear but can be more natural and concise. Avoid repeating 'I have' and try to combine sentences smoothly. Also, use 'favourite' instead of 'favorite' to match Indian English spelling.

예시: Yes, my favourite teacher was Nitishwari, who taught me English during my elementary school years.

제안: Your answer is confusing and unclear. Focus on answering directly whether you are in touch with your primary school teacher. Use linking words to clarify your points and avoid grammatical errors.

예시: I am still in touch with some of my primary school teachers; however, others have moved on with their lives, so I have lost contact with them.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Provide a clear topic sentence and specific supporting details. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

예시: My favourite teacher helped me by teaching me English cursive writing, which improved my handwriting. Additionally, she encouraged me to think simply and reflect on my beliefs.

제안: Your answer is understandable but can be more fluent and grammatically correct. Use linking words to explain your reasons clearly.

예시: No, I don't want to be a teacher in the future because I am more interested in developing my business and communication skills.

× Some of her teachers, I have very good contact with them, but some have moved forward to their life and I think that's the part of their life.

✓ Some of her teachers, I have very good contact with, but some have moved forward in their lives and I think that's part of their lives.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'them' after 'with' which is unnecessary because 'some of her teachers' is already the object. Also, 'moved forward to their life' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'in' and 'life' should be plural 'lives' to match 'some'. The phrase 'that's the part of their life' should be 'that's part of their lives' for natural expression.

× The primary. We was with my teacher taught me English cursive writing.

✓ In primary school, my teacher taught me English cursive writing.

The original sentence is fragmented and ungrammatical. 'The primary.' is incomplete. 'We was with my teacher taught me' is incorrect subject-verb agreement and sentence structure. The corrected sentence clearly states the intended meaning with proper subject-verb agreement and structure.

× Another reason I remember is when she made me religious thoughts and simple.

✓ Another reason I remember is when she taught me religious thoughts simply.

The phrase 'made me religious thoughts and simple' is incorrect. 'Made me religious thoughts' is ungrammatical; the verb 'made' does not fit here. Also, 'simple' is used incorrectly. The correction uses 'taught me religious thoughts simply' to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× No, I don't want to be teacher in future as my I have interest in developing business skills and communication skills.

✓ No, I don't want to be a teacher in the future as I have an interest in developing business skills and communication skills.

The sentence misses the indefinite article 'a' before 'teacher' and the definite article 'the' before 'future'. Also, 'my I have interest' is incorrect; it should be 'I have an interest'. Articles are important for grammatical correctness and clarity.