Teacher— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Keep the answer concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence (which teacher and when), then give one or two specific examples of what they taught you. Use correct tense and reduce repetition. Link ideas with a short connector such as “for example” or “in particular.”

예시: Yes. My favourite teacher was my Class 12 biology teacher, Ms Latika Joshi. She taught me important life skills — for example, she helped me develop discipline and good time management. Because of her guidance, I learned to balance study and rest and to treat elders with respect.

제안: Answer directly and use correct present tense and vocabulary. Give a short reason and, if possible, one brief detail about attempts to reconnect. Avoid irrelevant or awkward phrasing like "getting get married."

예시: No, I'm not. I lost contact with my primary school teachers because many of them moved away after they married and I don't know their current addresses. I tried to find one teacher on social media but couldn't locate her profile.

제안: Be specific: name one or two concrete ways she helped you and give a brief example. Use clear grammar (past tense) and linking words like “for instance” or “as a result.” Keep it to 2–4 sentences maximum.

예시: She helped me become more disciplined and organised. For instance, she gave me a weekly study plan and checked my progress, which helped me improve my grades and manage my time better.

제안: State your position clearly and give one reason with a specific detail. Fix grammar (plural/singular, articles) and avoid absolute phrases like “I have never chance.” Add a short linking phrase such as “because” or “because of” to connect ideas.

예시: No, I don't plan to be a teacher. I want to study abroad and focus on a different career path in international relations, so I don't expect to pursue teaching in the future.

× When I'm in a class 12, I had a favorite teacher, her name is Latika Joshi, she is my biology teacher.

✓ When I was in class 12, I had a favorite teacher; her name was Latika Joshi and she was my biology teacher.

The sentence mixes present and past tenses incorrectly. 'When I was in class 12' refers to the past, so verbs describing that period should be past tense ('was', 'had'). Also punctuation is improved by using a semicolon and conjunction to join clauses. Suggestion: keep tense consistent (use past tense) and separate independent clauses properly.

× She teach me a lot of things, especially discipline and how to maintain time and always respect your elders.

✓ She taught me a lot of things, especially discipline, how to manage time, and to always respect my elders.

The subject 'She' requires third person singular past tense 'taught' not 'teach'. Also parallelism and pronoun reference: 'your elders' should match the speaker's perspective as 'my elders'. 'Maintain time' is unnatural; use 'manage time'. Suggestion: use correct past tense for third person and keep parallel structure when listing items.

× To be honest I'm not in touch with my primary school teacher because all teacher are getting get married and I don't know where they live now so I didn't touch with any primary teacher.

✓ To be honest, I'm not in touch with my primary school teachers because many of them got married and I don't know where they live now, so I haven't been in contact with any of them.

The sentence uses mixed and incorrect tenses and number agreement. 'Teacher' should be plural 'teachers'. 'Are getting get married' is ungrammatical; use past 'got married' for completed action. 'I didn't touch with' is incorrect verb and preposition; use 'haven't been in contact with'. Also add commas for clarity. Suggestion: use plural nouns when referring to multiple people, choose correct tense for completed actions, and use appropriate collocations ('in touch with', 'got married').

× I mentioned earlier my favorite teacher is my biology teacher in class 7 and she taught me a lot of things specially disciplined and life skills and rules regulations and which encourage me a lot and helps me in life to managed.

✓ As I mentioned earlier, my favorite teacher was my biology teacher in class 7 and she taught me many things, especially discipline, life skills, and rules and regulations, which encouraged me a lot and helped me manage my life.

Mixed tenses and incorrect word forms: 'is' should be 'was' to match past context; 'specially disciplined' is incorrect—use 'especially discipline'. 'Rules regulations' needs 'and' between words. Relative clause 'which encourage me' must match past tense 'encouraged'. 'Helps me in life to managed' uses wrong verb forms; use 'helped me manage my life'. Suggestion: keep past tense consistent, use correct noun forms, include conjunctions where needed, and use base verb after 'helped' to indicate purpose.

× To be honest, I do not want to be a teacher in future because I have a different goals and I want to pursue my higher education from abroad so I have never chance to be a teacher.

✓ To be honest, I do not want to be a teacher in the future because I have different goals and I want to pursue higher education abroad, so I will never have a chance to be a teacher.

Errors include article use and tense/modal construction. Use 'in the future' not 'in future'. 'A different goals' mixes article and plural — use 'different goals'. 'Pursue my higher education from abroad' is awkward; use 'pursue higher education abroad'. 'I have never chance' is incorrect; use 'I will never have a chance' to indicate future impossibility. Suggestion: correct articles and number agreement, use natural prepositional phrases and proper future modal construction ('will never have').