Mirrors— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够流畅，语法和表达存在错误，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，使用更自然的表达方式。可以先直接回答问题，然后补充具体时间和原因。

예시: No, I don't often look at myself in the mirror. Usually, I only check my appearance in the morning, in the evening, or before meeting someone important.

제안: 回答内容不清晰，句子结构混乱，建议用简洁明了的句子表达，说明买镜子的原因和用途。

예시: Yes, I bought a large mirror at home so that my mother and I can practice dancing and check our movements conveniently.

제안: 回答不完整且表达混乱，建议直接回答问题并说明原因，避免语无伦次。

예시: No, I usually don't carry a mirror with me because it can be messy. However, if I wear makeup, I might bring a small mirror.

제안: 回答内容不明确且语法错误较多，建议清楚表达文化习俗对镜子装饰的影响，并用连贯的句子说明原因。

예시: No, I wouldn't use mirrors to decorate my room because in China, people believe that having many mirrors at home brings bad luck.

× No, I don't like looking at myself in the mirror and adjusted, adjusted check my visual in the mirror when, uh, in the morning or in the evening or I will go out to see someone important.

✓ No, I don't like looking at myself in the mirror and adjust, adjust check my visual in the mirror when, uh, in the morning or in the evening or I will go out to see someone important.

这里的动词时态应与前面的现在时态保持一致，使用过去式'adjusted'不正确，应改为现在时态'adjust'。

× A mirror in my home is a really large mirror that scam that I can practice dancing with my mother in our home and now we can check our access and convenience conveniently in at home and so I bought.

✓ A mirror in my home is a really large mirror that I can practice dancing with my mother in our home and now we can check our appearance conveniently at home and so I bought it.

句中'scam'用词错误，应删除或替换；'in at home'是错误的介词搭配，应改为'at home'；'check our access'表达不清，应改为'check our appearance'。

× Oh no, I almost don't remember with me because I think it is. Is very messy and uh, if I have some makeup or how to, how to. I have to.

✓ Oh no, I almost don't carry it with me because I think it is very messy and, uh, if I have some makeup or something, I have to.

'don't remember with me'表达错误，应改为'don't carry it with me'；句子不完整，需补充完整表达。

× No, I don't think mirror is dear to decorate our room because in China, which is a, is a SIM card and they told us it is not a it's not It's unfortunate to put many mirrors at home.

✓ No, I don't think mirrors are good to decorate our room because in China, there is a superstition and they told us it is not good to put many mirrors at home.

'mirror is dear'用词错误，应改为'mirrors are good'；'which is a, is a SIM card'表达不清，应改为'there is a superstition'；'it's unfortunate'用词不当，应改为'it is not good'。