Mirrors— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is relevant but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like 'how the face and how my expressions are looking like'. Instead, use clearer expressions and link your ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I look at myself in the mirror quite often because I like to check my appearance and facial expressions to make sure I look presentable.

제안: Try to use correct verb tenses and avoid filler words like 'uh'. Also, simplify your sentences for clarity and coherence. Use linking words to connect ideas.

예시: Yes, whenever I move into a new apartment, I buy a clear mirror for my room. I also use it before important events to check my appearance and boost my confidence.

제안: There are some unclear phrases like 'keeping immortal in my puzzle'. Try to express your ideas clearly and avoid repetition. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

예시: Actually, I don't usually carry a mirror with me. I prefer to check my face in the mirror before leaving home, but I don't often look at mirrors while traveling.

제안: Your answer is a bit confusing and lacks clarity. Try to organize your ideas logically and use linking words. Also, avoid repeating words like 'room' and 'decorating'.

예시: I use mirrors to decorate my ancestral home in my hometown during special events. However, I don't usually keep mirrors for decoration in my current home.

× I like to see my figure through my mirrors.

✓ I like to see my figure through my mirror.

The word 'mirrors' is plural, but the context suggests the student is referring to a single mirror. Using the singular form 'mirror' is appropriate here to match the intended meaning.

× I want to know how the face and how my expressions are looking like.

✓ I want to know how my face and my expressions look.

The phrase 'looking like' is incorrectly used here. Instead, 'look' should be used without 'like' to describe appearance. Also, 'the face' should be 'my face' for clarity and correctness.

× I like to prefer like to bought a new crystal clear mirror in that room

✓ I prefer to buy a new crystal clear mirror for that room

The phrase 'like to prefer like to bought' is incorrect. 'Prefer' is a present tense verb and should be followed by the base form 'to buy' instead of the past tense 'bought'. Also, 'like to prefer' is redundant; 'prefer' alone suffices.

× I like to see my clear face through a mirror to boost my confidence.

✓ I like to see my clear face in a mirror to boost my confidence.

The preposition 'through' is not appropriate when referring to looking at one's reflection. The correct preposition is 'in' when talking about seeing oneself in a mirror.

× Actually, I don't have a habit of keeping immortal in my puzzle like that.

✓ Actually, I don't have a habit of keeping a mirror in my purse like that.

The word 'immortal' is a mispronunciation or typo for 'mirror'. Also, 'puzzle' should be 'purse' as it fits the context of carrying a mirror. Correct pronouns and nouns are essential for clarity.

× Usually I like to prefer watching my face to the mirror before getting out from my home and through the through traveling.

✓ Usually, I prefer to look at my face in the mirror before leaving my home and while traveling.

The phrase 'watching my face to the mirror' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'look at my face in the mirror'. Also, 'getting out from my home' should be 'leaving my home'. The phrase 'through the through traveling' is redundant and incorrect; 'while traveling' is appropriate.

× I don't prefer watching my face through mirrors.

✓ I don't prefer watching my face in mirrors.

The preposition 'through' is incorrect here; 'in' is the correct preposition when referring to mirrors. The plural 'mirrors' is acceptable if the student means multiple mirrors.

× During some events only I have an ancestral traditional home in my hometown where I prefer to buy different kinds of traditional mirrors to adore my rooms that only here I don't have it of keeping the murals in the room for decorating the room.

✓ Only during some events do I have an ancestral traditional home in my hometown where I prefer to buy different kinds of traditional mirrors to adorn my rooms. Here, I don't keep mirrors in the room for decoration.

The sentence has multiple issues: 'During some events only' should be 'Only during some events' for correct emphasis. 'Adore my rooms' should be 'adorn my rooms' as 'adorn' means to decorate. 'That only here I don't have it of keeping the murals' is unclear and incorrect; it is corrected to 'Here, I don't keep mirrors in the room for decoration.' Also, 'murals' is likely a typo for 'mirrors'.