Mirrors— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer needs to be more natural and grammatically correct. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases like "habit of creatures." Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details using linking words for coherence.

예시: No, I don't often look at myself in the mirror because I don't find it necessary. Instead, I prefer spending my time reading books, which helps me feel refreshed and relaxed. However, I do check my appearance briefly before going out.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Be sure to directly answer the question and provide specific reasons or examples. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and avoid vague phrases like "nearest" and "such type of things."

예시: No, I have never bought a mirror myself. Since I am usually busy, I rarely shop for such items. My sister, who is very interested in beauty products, usually buys mirrors, so I don't need to purchase one.

제안: Your response is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Answer directly and clearly, and provide specific reasons. Use linking words to improve coherence and avoid awkward phrases like "Suddenly not" and "carry it."

예시: No, I usually don't carry a mirror with me because my sister, who is very interested in beauty, always has one. Therefore, I don't feel the need to bring one myself.

제안: Your answer shows enthusiasm but lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid vague or incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically and provide specific examples.

예시: Yes, I like to use mirrors to decorate my room because they add a bright and lively touch. For example, last year I decorated my sister's birthday room with mirrors, and she was very happy with how it looked. It also made the room feel more spacious and comfortable.

× No, I don't like to looking myself in the mirrors because it is not my habit of creatures.

✓ No, I don't like looking at myself in the mirror because it is not my habit.

The verb 'like' should be followed by the gerund form without 'to', so 'like looking' is correct, not 'like to looking'. Also, 'looking myself' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'looking at myself'. 'Mirrors' should be singular here as it refers to the general act of looking in a mirror. The phrase 'habit of creatures' is unclear and incorrect; it should be 'my habit' or 'my usual practice'.

× No, I don't like to looking myself in the mirrors because it is not my habit of creatures.

✓ No, I don't like looking at myself in the mirror because it is not my habit.

The verb 'look' requires the preposition 'at' when referring to oneself in a mirror, so 'looking at myself' is correct, not 'looking myself'.

× No, I don't like to looking myself in the mirrors because it is not my habit of creatures.

✓ No, I don't like looking at myself in the mirror because it is not my habit.

The word 'mirrors' should be singular 'mirror' when referring to the general act of looking at oneself, as it is a general statement, not multiple mirrors.

× Most of the times I prefer to spend on reading the books as it is one of my habit of creature and it really helped me to feel refreshed and comfortable.

✓ Most of the time I prefer to spend reading books as it is one of my habits and it really helps me to feel refreshed and comfortable.

'Most of the times' should be 'Most of the time' as 'time' is uncountable here. 'The books' should be 'books' without 'the' because it refers to books in general. 'Habit of creature' is incorrect; it should be 'one of my habits'. Also, 'helped' should be 'helps' to maintain present tense consistency.

× Most of the times I prefer to spend on reading the books as it is one of my habit of creature and it really helped me to feel refreshed and comfortable.

✓ Most of the time I prefer to spend reading books as it is one of my habits and it really helps me to feel refreshed and comfortable.

The verb 'helped' is past tense but the sentence is about a habitual action, so present tense 'helps' is appropriate.

× Most of the times I prefer to spend on reading the books as it is one of my habit of creature and it really helped me to feel refreshed and comfortable.

✓ Most of the time I prefer to spend reading books as it is one of my habits and it really helps me to feel refreshed and comfortable.

'Prefer to spend on reading' is incorrect; the correct form is 'prefer to spend reading' or 'prefer spending'. The preposition 'on' is unnecessary here.

× And I feel that it is a wastage of times to just seen yourself in front of mirror.

✓ And I feel that it is a waste of time to just see yourself in front of the mirror.

'Wastage of times' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'waste of time'. 'Seen' is past participle and incorrect here; the base form 'see' should be used after 'to'. Also, 'in front of mirror' needs the definite article 'the' before 'mirror'.

× And I feel that it is a wastage of times to just seen yourself in front of mirror.

✓ And I feel that it is a waste of time to just see yourself in front of the mirror.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'mirror' when referring to a specific mirror or the general concept of a mirror in this context.

× However, when I have to visit somewhere other times I prefer to.

✓ However, when I have to visit somewhere, other times I prefer to as well.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding a comma and completing the thought improves clarity and sentence structure.

× No, I don't think so that I have ever bought the nearest for myself.

✓ No, I don't think that I have ever bought a mirror for myself.

'Nearest' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'mirror'. Also, 'don't think so that' is awkward; 'don't think that' is correct.

× Because of my busy schedule, I hardly got a time to visit somewhere.

✓ Because of my busy schedule, I hardly get time to visit anywhere.

'Got a time' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'get time'. 'Somewhere' is less appropriate here; 'anywhere' fits better in negative sentences.

× Whenever I visit in a market at a time, I prefer to purchase some necessities things because my sister is is a beauty queen such type of things they prefer to buy it so I don't need to.

✓ Whenever I visit a market, I prefer to purchase some necessary things because my sister is a beauty queen and she prefers to buy such things, so I don't need to.

'Visit in a market at a time' is awkward; 'visit a market' is correct. 'Necessities things' is incorrect; 'necessary things' is correct. The sentence is run-on and needs to be split for clarity.

× Whenever I visit in a market at a time, I prefer to purchase some necessities things because my sister is is a beauty queen such type of things they prefer to buy it so I don't need to.

✓ Whenever I visit a market, I prefer to purchase some necessary things because my sister is a beauty queen and she prefers to buy such things, so I don't need to.

The pronouns 'they' and 'it' are incorrectly used; 'she' and omission of 'it' are appropriate here.

× Whenever I visit in a market at a time, I prefer to purchase some necessities things because my sister is is a beauty queen such type of things they prefer to buy it so I don't need to.

✓ Whenever I visit a market, I prefer to purchase some necessary things because my sister is a beauty queen and she prefers to buy such things, so I don't need to.

'Visit in a market' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'visit a market' without 'in'.

× Suddenly not. I don't like to bring mirrors with myself.

✓ Suddenly not. I don't like to bring mirrors with me.

'With myself' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'with me' when referring to carrying something along.

× I don't like to bring mirrors with myself.

✓ I don't like bringing mirrors with me.

'Like' is followed by gerund form without 'to', so 'like bringing' is correct, not 'like to bring'.

× All such things that she carry it.

✓ She carries all such things.

'She carry it' is incorrect; the verb should agree with the singular subject 'she' as 'carries', and the pronoun 'it' is unnecessary and incorrect here.

× All such things that she carry it.

✓ She carries all such things.

The verb 'carry' must be conjugated as 'carries' to agree with the third person singular subject 'she'.

× So I don't need to be bothered to carry such type of things in my life.

✓ So I don't need to be bothered carrying such things in my life.

'Bothered to carry' is incorrect; the correct form is 'bothered carrying'. Also, 'such type of things' is awkward; 'such things' is better.

× Yes, I really like to decorate my rooms with the help of mirror because it's really given this childish looks to my room like cherry on the cake.

✓ Yes, I really like to decorate my room with the help of mirrors because they really give a childish look to my room, like the cherry on the cake.

'Rooms' should be singular 'room' to match context. 'Mirror' should be plural 'mirrors' if more than one is used. 'Given this childish looks' is incorrect; 'give a childish look' is correct. 'Cherry on the cake' needs the definite article 'the'.

× Yes, I really like to decorate my rooms with the help of mirror because it's really given this childish looks to my room like cherry on the cake.

✓ Yes, I really like to decorate my room with the help of mirrors because they really give a childish look to my room, like the cherry on the cake.

'Rooms' should be singular 'room' to be consistent. 'Mirror' should be plural 'mirrors' if referring to multiple mirrors.

× I vividly remember that last year it was my sister birthday at that time I had decorated the room with the help of mirror and she's really felt delighted and it helped me to feel refreshed and comfortable also because they really.

✓ I vividly remember that last year it was my sister's birthday. At that time, I decorated the room with the help of mirrors and she really felt delighted. It also helped me to feel refreshed and comfortable because of them.

Possessive form 'sister birthday' should be 'sister's birthday'. 'She's really felt' is incorrect; 'she really felt' is correct. The sentence is incomplete and unclear; it needs to be split and clarified. 'Mirror' should be plural 'mirrors' and 'they' refers to mirrors, so 'because of them' is appropriate.