Mirrors— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够连贯，表达含糊且有语法错误。建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免重复和不完整的句子。

예시: No, I don't like looking at myself in the mirror very often because I am not confident about my appearance.

제안: 回答中出现了不相关或不清楚的信息（如“when I bought the mirror, I was bully”），建议回答时保持内容相关且逻辑清晰。

예시: Yes, I have bought mirrors before, but they were for my pets, two turtles, so they could see their reflections.

제안: 回答较为完整，但句子结构稍显复杂且有语法错误。建议使用更自然流畅的表达，并注意语法准确。

예시: No, I usually don't carry a mirror because if I need to check my appearance, I just use my phone's front camera.

제안: 回答表达了观点，但句子断断续续，缺少连贯性。建议使用连接词使表达更流畅，并丰富细节。

예시: No, I wouldn't use mirrors to decorate my room because they make me feel uncomfortable, as if I am constantly being watched.

× I really do not like looking at myself at the mirror.

✓ I really do not like looking at myself in the mirror.

介词“at”用于表示具体的点或目标，而“in the mirror”是固定搭配，表示“在镜子里”。这里应该用“in”而不是“at”。

× That's because I, I'm quite fond of. Hating myself.

✓ That's because I'm quite fond of hating myself.

原句断句不完整，导致句子结构错误。应将两个句子合并，形成完整的句子。

× And. About?

✓ And what about that?

原句不完整，缺少主语和谓语，导致句子不通顺。应补充完整表达。

× And when I bought the mirror, I was bully.

✓ And when I bought the mirror, I was bullied.

“bully”是名词或动词原形，表示“欺负”，此处应使用过去分词“bullied”表示被动语态。

× I do not have a necessity in any situation that I can think of to look at myself in the mirror of whatever.

✓ I do not have a necessity in any situation that I can think of to look at myself in the mirror or whatever.

“of whatever”用法不当，应改为“or whatever”表示“或者什么的”。

× If I need a something like a mirror, I would just use the front camera of my cell phone as that would be.

✓ If I need something like a mirror, I would just use the front camera of my cell phone as that would be.

“a something”是不正确的表达，some或something前不加冠词。

× No, I wouldn't, because. I just want to be with myself.

✓ No, I wouldn't, because I just want to be with myself.

“because”后面应直接跟从句，不能断开。

× And having a mirror, makes me feel like I am being watched by myself, which is quite, unpleasant.

✓ And having a mirror makes me feel like I am being watched by myself, which is quite unpleasant.

主语和谓语之间不应有逗号，形容词“quite unpleasant”中间不应有逗号。