Mirrors— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to reduce hesitation and filler words like 'uh' to make your answer sound more natural and fluent. Also, organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words for coherence. For example, start by stating your general habit, then explain reasons with linking words such as 'because' or 'and'.

예시: Yes, I like looking at myself in the mirror almost every day because it helps me check my appearance. Moreover, I can notice any skin problems and take care of them promptly.

제안: Avoid filler words and try to make your answer more concise and structured. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific details about the mirror to enrich your answer.

예시: Yes, I have bought mirrors before. For instance, I have a moon-shaped mirror in my room which I really like because it helps me apply makeup accurately.

제안: Work on clarity and fluency by avoiding hesitation and unclear phrases. Also, organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words. Be specific about how you use your phone camera as a substitute.

예시: I usually forget to bring a mirror with me. However, I often use my phone's camera as a substitute because it allows me to check my appearance anytime.

제안: Improve sentence structure and clarity by avoiding repetition and filler words. Provide more specific details about how you use mirrors for decoration and use linking words to make your answer coherent.

예시: Yes, I use mirrors to decorate my room. For example, I have several moon-shaped mirrors on the walls which add a unique and stylish touch to the space.

× I think, uh, most of the days I prefer to look at myself in the mirror because I think I can, uh, see my beauty and, uh, and of course, uh, I can see my, uh, problems in my face and I think it's very good to look at yourself.

✓ I think, uh, most of the time I prefer to look at myself in the mirror because I think I can, uh, see my beauty and, uh, of course, uh, I can see my, uh, problems on my face and I think it's very good to look at yourself.

The phrase 'most of the days' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'most of the time' to indicate frequency. Also, 'problems in my face' should be 'problems on my face' because we refer to something visible on the surface of the face.

× Yes, of course. Uh, one of my favorite mirrors that I have in my room is uh, my moon mirror and I like it very much and most of the time I make up in this mirror.

✓ Yes, of course. Uh, one of my favorite mirrors that I have in my room is, uh, my moon mirror and I like it very much and most of the time I do my makeup in this mirror.

The phrase 'make up' as a verb should be 'do my makeup' to correctly express the action of applying cosmetics. Also, 'make up in this mirror' is incomplete and unclear.

× Actually, most of the time I forgot to take a mirror with myself, but umm, I use my camera of my phone instead of mirroring every, uh, word that I want a mirror to see myself.

✓ Actually, most of the time I forget to take a mirror with me, but umm, I use my phone's camera instead of a mirror to see myself.

The phrase 'forgot' should be 'forget' to match the present tense context. 'Take a mirror with myself' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'take a mirror with me'. 'Camera of my phone' should be 'my phone's camera'. The phrase 'mirroring every word that I want a mirror to see myself' is unclear and incorrect; it is better to say 'instead of a mirror to see myself'.

× Yes, I have some moons, uh, mirror mirrors that I decorate my room with this.

✓ Yes, I have some moon mirrors that I use to decorate my room.

The phrase 'moons, uh, mirror mirrors' is redundant and incorrect. It should be 'moon mirrors'. Also, 'that I decorate my room with this' is awkward; the correct phrasing is 'that I use to decorate my room'.