Mirrors— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is natural and relevant but slightly wordy and repetitive. Begin with a direct topic sentence, avoid fillers like “absolutely” plus redundant adverbs, and keep it within 2–3 concise sentences. Add a short reason or brief example using a linking word (e.g., “because” or “so”) to enrich your answer.

예시: Yes, I do. I often check myself in the mirror in the evening because I like to relax and tidy my appearance after a busy day.

제안: Good content but some grammar and phrasing need correction. Start with a clear topic sentence, use correct article/noun forms, and avoid repeating obvious adjectives. Use a linking word to add one brief supporting detail (e.g., why you chose it).

예시: Yes, I bought a rectangular mirror from a shopping mall last month because it was clear and fit well on my dressing table.

제안: The main idea is clear but there are grammar, repetition and coherence issues. Give a direct short answer (e.g., “No, hardly ever”) and then one clear reason using a linking word. Avoid repeating words and use correct verb forms and pronouns.

예시: No, I hardly ever take a mirror with me because full-size mirrors are inconvenient to carry. If I had a small compact mirror, I would take it for quick touch-ups.

제안: Your enthusiasm is good but the response has grammatical errors and redundancy. Start with a direct answer, then give one or two specific reasons or examples using linking words like “for example” or “because.” Correct article and sentence structure.

예시: Yes, I would. I use mirrors in my room because they make the space look larger and reflect light; for example, I have a large rectangular mirror above my dresser that brightens the corner.

× I enjoy looking at myself in the mirror quite frequently, mostly in the evening time after a hectic day.

✓ I enjoy looking at myself in the mirror quite frequently, mostly in the evening after a hectic day.

Redundant word 'time' after 'evening' is unnecessary; 'evening' alone is correct. Keep present simple 'enjoy' which matches habitual action. Grammar Problem Type ID: 6

× Last month I bought a mirror from a shopping mall which was a rectangular shape and it was very convenient and clear.

✓ Last month I bought a mirror from a shopping mall that was rectangular in shape and very clear.

Use 'that' instead of 'which' for essential clause in this context. 'Rectangular in shape' is the correct phrase; remove redundant 'a' before 'rectangular shape'. 'Convenient' for a mirror is odd; 'clear' is fine. Past tense 'bought' is correct. Grammar Problem Type ID: 5

× Hardly ever, because it's not very convenient to carry out any mirror.

✓ Hardly ever, because it's not very convenient to carry any mirror.

Use 'carry' without 'out' when referring to taking something with you. 'Carry out' means to perform an action, so it's incorrect here. Grammar Problem Type ID: 11

× If I had any portable mirror, I I often carry it with myself.

✓ If I had a portable mirror, I would often carry it with me.

This conditional requires 'would' in the main clause (second conditional for unreal present). Use 'a' not 'any' for a single item in this context. 'Carry it with myself' is incorrect; use 'with me'. Remove duplicate 'I'. Grammar Problem Type ID: 12

× Absolutely, I'm a huge fan of decorating my room, particularly I use a mirrors as well as and also other furniture.

✓ Absolutely, I'm a huge fan of decorating my room; in particular, I use mirrors as well as other furniture.

'a mirrors' mixes singular article with plural noun; remove 'a' to make plural 'mirrors'. Simplify connectors: 'in particular' and 'as well as' or 'and also' — use one. Punctuation changed to improve sentence flow. Grammar Problem Type ID: 22

× But my mirror was very beautiful which is rectangular shape.

✓ But my mirror was very beautiful and was rectangular in shape.

Combine clauses with 'and' for clarity. Use 'rectangular in shape' and include 'was' to keep past tense consistent with 'was very beautiful'. Using 'which' here is incorrect because clause is not properly connected. Grammar Problem Type ID: 11