Mirrors— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve clarity and grammar, give a clear topic sentence and one or two supporting details. Avoid wordiness and correct tense/word order: say when and why you look and add a linking phrase. Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

예시: Yes, I often look at myself in the mirror, especially in the morning. I do this to check my hair and clothes so I can start the day with a neat appearance.

제안: Correct vocabulary and pronunciation errors and give a simple, clear statement plus a short detail. Use correct nouns and prepositions (e.g., "mirror", "hung on the wall"). Avoid unrelated or incorrect words.

예시: Yes, I bought a mirror last week. I hung it on the wall in my bedroom so I can check my outfit every morning.

제안: Good basic response and reasons given. Reduce fillers ("uh") and correct vocabulary errors ("Milo" → "a mirror"). Combine reasons with a linking word for coherence and keep concise.

예시: No, I don't usually take a mirror with me because it takes up extra space and it can easily break, so it's not practical.

제안: Provide a complete, grammatical sentence and expand briefly with a linking phrase and a specific reason. Fix vocabulary and sentence fragments (e.g., "I think a mirror").

예시: No, I wouldn't use mirrors mainly as decoration because I think a mirror is a practical tool for checking my appearance rather than an ornamental item.

× Yes, I usually look at myself in the mirror especially. In the morning because I want a good appearance at the start of.

✓ Yes, I usually look at myself in the mirror in the morning because I want to look presentable at the start of the day.

The original contains sentence fragments and awkward adverb placement. 'Especially' is unnecessary and misplaced. 'At the start of' is incomplete; add 'the day'. Use 'look presentable' for natural phrasing. Combine into one complete sentence to fix sentence structure (Present tense is appropriate).

× Yes, I bought a loud Miller last week. Now it is hand on the wall of my mushroom.

✓ Yes, I bought a large mirror last week. Now it is hanging on the wall in my room.

Several errors: 'loud Miller' is incorrect word choice; should be 'large mirror'. 'Now it is hand on the wall' misuses verb; correct is 'it is hanging on the wall'. 'My mushroom' is a misrecognition of 'my room'. Tenses are fine ('bought' past, 'is hanging' present). Fix word choice and verb form for clarity.

× No, I don't like taking Milo with me because it requires extra space and uh, it's easy to break.

✓ No, I don't like taking a mirror with me because it requires extra space and it's easy to break.

'Milo' is incorrect; should be 'mirror'. Also use the article 'a' before 'mirror' (article error but tied to pronoun/word choice). Pronoun 'it' is acceptable after correction. Removing filler 'uh' improves formality.

× No, I don't like to use mirrors to decorate my room because. Think Miller is just a tool for checking myself.

✓ No, I don't like to use mirrors to decorate my room because I think a mirror is just a tool for checking my appearance.

Original has sentence fragment 'because.' and incorrect sentence 'Think Miller...' Missing subject 'I' and wrong word 'Miller' should be 'mirror'. Use 'a mirror' (article) and 'checking my appearance' is more natural than 'checking myself'. Present tense 'don't like' fits context.