Dreams— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Can you remember the dreams you had?
수험생
I I really do, but I can recall a dream I had about a few years ago.
시험관
Do you share your dreams with others? (or are you interested in others' dreams?)
수험생
I always keep my dreams home myself. And I don't really care what other people's dream about, mostly.
시험관
Do you think dreams have special meanings?
수험생
I don't think so, even though people always say dreams have different special meanings, but I would say is just our imagination.
시험관
Do you want to make your dreams come true?
수험생
Yes, absolutely. Most of my dreams are about become becoming successful. I always want to be successful and then.
평가
총점
Part 1
Can you remember the dreams you had?
점수: 65.0제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có sự lặp lại từ "I" và thiếu sự rõ ràng trong việc trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi. Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và trả lời rõ ràng hơn, ví dụ như bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trực tiếp trả lời câu hỏi, sau đó bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể.
예시: Yes, I can remember my dreams quite well. For instance, I recall a vivid dream I had a few years ago about traveling to a beautiful island.
Do you share your dreams with others? (or are you interested in others' dreams?)
점수: 55.0제안: Câu trả lời thiếu sự tự nhiên và có lỗi ngữ pháp, ví dụ như "keep my dreams home myself" không đúng. Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp, đồng thời sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp hơn.
예시: I usually keep my dreams to myself because I prefer not to share them. Also, I'm not very interested in other people's dreams.
Do you think dreams have special meanings?
점수: 70.0제안: Câu trả lời có ý tưởng rõ ràng nhưng cấu trúc câu hơi lủng củng và thiếu liên kết mạch lạc. Bạn nên sử dụng liên từ phù hợp để câu văn trôi chảy hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như thiếu chủ ngữ trong mệnh đề cuối.
예시: I don't think dreams have special meanings. Although many people believe they do, I believe dreams are simply products of our imagination.
Do you want to make your dreams come true?
점수: 60.0제안: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và chưa hoàn chỉnh, ví dụ như "about become becoming successful" và câu cuối không rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và hoàn thiện câu trả lời với các chi tiết cụ thể hơn.
예시: Yes, absolutely. Most of my dreams involve becoming successful in my career. I always strive to achieve my goals and improve myself.
문법
× I I really do, but I can recall a dream I had about a few years ago.
✓ I really do, but I can recall a dream I had a few years ago.
The sentence contains a repeated word 'I' which is redundant and disrupts sentence structure. Removing the extra 'I' corrects the sentence.
× I always keep my dreams home myself.
✓ I always keep my dreams to myself.
The phrase 'keep my dreams home myself' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'keep my dreams to myself', meaning not sharing them with others.
× And I don't really care what other people's dream about, mostly.
✓ And I don't really care what other people dream about, mostly.
The word 'people's' is possessive and singular here, but the intended meaning is plural 'people' as the subject of 'dream'. Removing the possessive form corrects the sentence.
× I don't think so, even though people always say dreams have different special meanings, but I would say is just our imagination.
✓ I don't think so. Even though people always say dreams have different special meanings, I would say it's just our imagination.
The original sentence is a run-on with incorrect conjunction use. Splitting into two sentences and correcting 'is' to 'it's' improves clarity and grammatical correctness.
× Most of my dreams are about become becoming successful.
✓ Most of my dreams are about becoming successful.
After 'about', the verb should be in the '-ing' form. 'Become becoming' is incorrect; only 'becoming' is needed.
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