Dreams— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答は自然ですが、文法の誤り（"I sometimes I remember"）を修正し、より簡潔に表現すると良いでしょう。また、接続詞を使って文の流れを滑らかにすると効果的です。

예시: Yes, I sometimes remember my dreams, but shortly after waking up, the images usually become very vague. Therefore, it is difficult to recall the details unless I think about them immediately.

제안: 回答は内容が具体的で、理由も述べられており良いです。ただし、"the adults"という表現は少し不自然なので、より適切な語彙に置き換えると良いでしょう。

예시: No, I usually don't share my dreams with my friends or colleagues because I think dreams are very intimate and personal. Moreover, many people are not interested in hearing about others' dreams, so I prefer to keep them to myself. However, I am quite curious about the dreams that adults have.

제안: 回答に繰り返しや曖昧な表現（"Uh", "and, and"）が多く、文法的にも不自然な部分があります。より明確で簡潔な表現を心がけ、接続詞を適切に使いましょう。

예시: No, I don't think dreams have special meanings. At first glance, some dreams may seem meaningful, especially when the images are clear and memorable, but I believe they don't hold much significance.

제안: 回答に多くのためらいや不自然な表現が含まれています。文法の誤りもあるため、簡潔で明確な文章を作る練習が必要です。具体的な理由や方法を述べると良いでしょう。

예시: Yes, I want to make all my dreams come true in the future. However, it is very difficult because dreams are often imaginative and hard to realize. Therefore, it is important to plan carefully how to achieve them.

× I sometimes I remember my dreams, but shortly after waking up the images usually become very vague.

✓ I sometimes remember my dreams, but shortly after waking up the images usually become very vague.

The sentence contains a redundancy with 'I sometimes I remember'. The extra 'I' should be removed to correct the sentence structure.

× at the first glance, it seems that there's some meanings in the dreams

✓ at first glance, it seems that there are some meanings in the dreams

The phrase 'at the first glance' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'at first glance'. Also, 'there's' (there is) should be 'there are' because 'meanings' is plural.

× there's some meanings in the dreams

✓ there are some meanings in the dreams

'Meanings' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to agree in number.

× I don't think they are much meanings.

✓ I don't think they have much meaning.

'Meanings' is plural but 'much' is used with uncountable nouns. 'Meaning' is uncountable here, so 'much meaning' is correct.

× I want to make all my dreams have come through in the future.

✓ I want to make all my dreams come true in the future.

The phrase 'have come through' is incorrect here. The correct expression is 'come true' when referring to dreams being realized.

× it's a very imaginable and difficult to realize.

✓ it's very imaginable and difficult to realize.

The article 'a' is incorrectly used before 'very imaginable'. 'Imaginable' is an adjective and does not require 'a' here.

× So how to take the dreams to real target is very important.

✓ So, how to turn dreams into real goals is very important.

The original sentence is awkward and unclear. 'Take the dreams to real target' is not idiomatic. The correction clarifies the meaning and improves sentence structure.