Dreams— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Can you remember the dreams you had?
수험생
Yes, I had a lot of dreams when I was a child. I wanted to become a doctor, a teacher, a policewoman or an astronaut. I admire these professions for their importance and the positive impact they have on the society, so I think this job is very meaningful to me.
시험관
Do you share your dreams with others? (or are you interested in others' dreams?)
수험생
Actually, I usually share my dreams with my best friends because I feel comfortable talking to them about my goals and they always give me support and encouragement. I think on sharing our dreams can help us stay focused and strengthens our friendships.
시험관
Do you think dreams have special meanings?
수험생
Yes, I think dreams have special meanings because they represent our deepest aspirations or goals. For instance, having a clear dream on can gives people motivation to overcome the obstacles and keep pursuing what they love even during difficult times.
시험관
Do you want to make your dreams come true?
수험생
Yeah, I really want to make my dream come true because achieving my goal is very important to me. Although I find it quite challenging since I need to improve my speaking and listening skills and get works experience. But I believe that after working hard on these areas I will be succeed in the future.
평가
총점
Part 1
Can you remember the dreams you had?
점수: 75.0제안: 回答时应避免冗长且重复的表达，且注意语法准确性。例如，“on the society”应为“on society”。建议回答时先简洁回答问题，再用一两句具体细节支持，避免列举过多职业。
예시: Yes, I remember having many dreams as a child. For example, I wanted to be a doctor because I admired how they help people and make a positive impact on society.
Do you share your dreams with others? (or are you interested in others' dreams?)
점수: 70.0제안: 回答中存在语法错误，如“on sharing”应为“sharing”，且“strengthens”主语应为复数形式。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯，同时注意主谓一致。
예시: Yes, I usually share my dreams with my best friends because they support and encourage me. Sharing dreams helps us stay focused and strengthens our friendships.
Do you think dreams have special meanings?
점수: 65.0제안: 回答中有语法错误，如“dream on can gives”应为“dream can give”，且表达不够简洁。建议简化句子结构，使用恰当的连接词，并提供具体例子。
예시: Yes, I believe dreams have special meanings because they reflect our deepest goals. For example, a clear dream can motivate people to overcome obstacles and keep pursuing their passions.
Do you want to make your dreams come true?
점수: 60.0제안: 回答中存在语法错误，如“get works experience”应为“get work experience”，“will be succeed”应为“will succeed”。建议避免句子碎片，使用连接词使句子完整且流畅。
예시: Yes, I really want to make my dream come true because it is very important to me. Although it is challenging since I need to improve my speaking and listening skills and gain work experience, I believe that with hard work, I will succeed in the future.
문법
× I think on sharing our dreams can help us stay focused and strengthens our friendships.
✓ I think sharing our dreams can help us stay focused and strengthen our friendships.
这里“think on sharing”中的“on”是不必要的，正确用法是直接用动名词“sharing”作宾语。另外，主语是复数“dreams”，谓语动词应使用原形“strengthen”而非“strengthens”。
× For instance, having a clear dream on can gives people motivation to overcome the obstacles and keep pursuing what they love even during difficult times.
✓ For instance, having a clear dream can give people motivation to overcome obstacles and keep pursuing what they love even during difficult times.
“having a clear dream on”中的“on”多余，应去掉。动词“gives”应改为原形“give”，因为前面有情态动词“can”。“the obstacles”中的定冠词“the”也应去掉，因为这里指的是一般障碍。
× Although I find it quite challenging since I need to improve my speaking and listening skills and get works experience.
✓ Although I find it quite challenging since I need to improve my speaking and listening skills and get work experience.
“works experience”中的“works”应为不可数名词“work”，表示“工作经验”，不加复数形式。
× But I believe that after working hard on these areas I will be succeed in the future.
✓ But I believe that after working hard on these areas I will succeed in the future.
“will be succeed”是错误的，情态动词“will”后应直接跟动词原形“succeed”，不加“be”。
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