Dreams— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时应避免重复和语法错误，例如“for their importance”应改为“because of their importance”。此外，回答可以更自然简洁，避免冗长。

예시: Yes, I remember many dreams from my childhood. For instance, I wanted to become a doctor because I admire their important role and positive impact on society.

제안: 回答中语法和表达不够自然，如“which made me very touched”应改为“I feel very touched”。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: Yes, I usually share my dreams with my best friends because they always support and encourage me. Sharing dreams helps us stay focused and also strengthens our friendship.

제안: 回答较好，但可以增加更多具体细节和连接词，使表达更丰富和连贯。

예시: Absolutely. I believe dreams have special meanings because they reflect our deepest aspirations and goals. For example, having a clear dream can motivate people to overcome obstacles and continue pursuing their passions, even during difficult times.

제안: 回答内容具体且结构清晰，但可以使用更多连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: Yes, I really want to make my dreams come true because they are very important to me. Although it is quite challenging since I need to improve my speaking and listening skills and gain work experience, I believe that with hard work, I will succeed in the future.

× I wanted to become a doctor for their importance and the positive impact they have on society.

✓ I wanted to become a doctor because of its importance and the positive impact it has on society.

这里的主语是单数的“a doctor”，所以后面的代词和动词也应该用单数形式。原句中使用了复数代词“their”和动词“have”，与单数主语不一致，应该改为单数形式“its”和“has”。

× Yes, I usually share my dreams with my best friends because they always support and encourage me, which made me very touched, and sharing dreams can help us stay focused and strengthen our friendships.

✓ Yes, I usually share my dreams with my best friends because they always support and encourage me, which makes me very touched, and sharing dreams can help us stay focused and strengthen our friendships.

句子中描述的是习惯性动作，应该使用一般现在时态。原句中“made”是过去式，与前后时态不一致，应改为现在时“makes”。