Dreams— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答较为自然且内容相关，但句子结构稍显简单，且缺少连接词使内容更连贯。建议在回答中使用连接词，并丰富细节描述，使表达更流畅和具体。

예시: Yes, I had many dreams when I was a child. For instance, I wanted to become a doctor because I admired their important role and the positive impact they have on society.

제안: 回答内容清晰且有逻辑，但可以通过增加连接词和具体例子来增强表达的连贯性和说服力。

예시: Yes, I usually share my dreams with my best friends because they always encourage and support me. Moreover, sharing our dreams helps us stay motivated and strengthens our friendships.

제안: 回答内容丰富且结构合理，但可以通过使用更多连接词和具体例子来使表达更自然和生动。

예시: Yes, I believe dreams have special meanings since they represent our deepest aspirations and goals. For example, having a clear dream can motivate people to overcome obstacles and continue pursuing their passions, even during difficult times.

제안: 回答内容具体且表达清晰，使用了连接词和细节描述。建议在表达中加入更多情感色彩和具体计划，使回答更具说服力。

예시: Absolutely, I am determined to make my dream come true because it means a lot to me. Although it is challenging, as I need to improve my speaking and listening skills and gain work experience, I believe that with hard work and dedication, I will succeed in the future.

× I wanted to become a doctor because of their importance and the positive impact they have on society.

✓ I wanted to become a doctor because of its importance and the positive impact it has on society.

这里的主语是单数的“a doctor”，所以后面的代词也应该用单数形式“its”和“it”，而不是复数“their”和“they”。

× I really want to make my dream come true because it is very significant for me.

✓ I really want to make my dreams come true because they are very significant for me.

前文提到“a lot of dreams”，这里应保持复数形式“dreams”，对应的代词也应为复数“they”和“are”。