Dreams— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中表达的意思不够清晰，句子结构混乱，且存在语法错误。建议简化句子，直接回答问题，并用连贯的句子表达梦想和计划。

예시: My dream is to become a scientist because I love discovering new things. At the same time, I hope to run a big company that provides useful products and services to people.

제안: 回答不够自然，表达不清晰，存在语法和用词错误。建议用简单明了的句子表达不愿分享梦想的原因，并避免使用不恰当的词汇。

예시: I usually don't share my dreams with others because I worry they might discourage me. I prefer to keep my goals private so I can stay focused and motivated.

제안: 回答较好，表达了观点并给出了具体例子。但可以使用更多连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: Yes, I believe dreams have special meanings because they often reflect our subconscious thoughts and emotions. For example, dreaming about falling might show that we feel insecure or stressed in real life.

제안: 回答不连贯，语法错误严重，表达不清晰。建议简化句子，直接表达想实现梦想的原因，并避免无关内容。

예시: Yes, I definitely want to make my dreams come true because they give me a clear purpose and motivation to achieve my goals.

× My dream is to be a scientist, though I haven't delivered, I'm on the road.

✓ My dream is to be a scientist, though I haven't achieved it yet, I'm on the road.

这里的'ven't delivered'用词不当，应该用'ven't achieved'表示“还没有实现”。'delivered'通常指交付，不适合表达实现梦想。建议用achieve来表达实现目标。

× Meanwhile, I want to be a boss of a big company to offer service and products for people.

✓ Meanwhile, I want to be the boss of a big company to offer services and products to people.

'boss of a big company'前应加定冠词'the'，表示特指。'service'应为复数'services'，因为通常指多种服务。'offer ... for people'应改为'offer ... to people'，介词用法错误。

× No, I don't like to share my dream with others because I consider that they might be disturbed or discouraged by our other opinions.

✓ No, I don't like to share my dream with others because I consider that they might be disturbed or discouraged by other people's opinions.

'our other opinions'用词不当，应该是'other people's opinions'，表示别人的观点。'our'指代不明确且不符合语境。

× I like to put my girls dependent on me so they can focus on the motivated.

✓ I like my girls to be dependent on me so they can stay motivated.

'put my girls dependent on me'结构错误，应该用'like my girls to be dependent on me'。'focus on the motivated'表达不清，应改为'stay motivated'表示保持积极性。

× Yes, I definitely want to dream come true because they give me a clear sense of purpose and motivation, achieving goals, not only. Bring me personal assistant.

✓ Yes, I definitely want my dreams to come true because they give me a clear sense of purpose and motivation, not only achieving goals but also bringing me personal satisfaction.

'want to dream come true'缺少所有格，应该是'my dreams to come true'。句子结构混乱，'achieving goals, not only. Bring me personal assistant.'不完整且不通顺，需重组句子表达完整意思。