Dreams— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your response more concise and clear by avoiding redundancy and improving sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I often remember my dreams when I wake up. I find them interesting and enjoy sharing them with my family and friends because they are memorable experiences.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains repetition and grammatical mistakes. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to explain why you share dreams with close people.

예시: I usually share my dreams only with my friends and family. For example, if I dream about traveling or a trip we are planning, I like to tell them because they can relate to it.

제안: Your answer is vague and contains hesitations and unclear phrases. Try to give a clear opinion and support it with specific reasons or examples, using appropriate vocabulary and linking words.

예시: Yes, I believe dreams have special meanings. For instance, when something positive happens, we often dream about good things, while stressful events can cause unpleasant dreams.

제안: Your answer is repetitive and contains grammatical errors and incomplete sentences. Try to express your ideas clearly and provide reasons why making dreams come true is important, using linking words to organize your answer.

예시: Yes, I always want to make my dreams come true because achieving goals is essential for success in life. Everyone has the ability to work hard and realize their dreams.

× I often remember my dream when I wake up in the morning and it is really interesting to share my dreams with my family and my friends.

✓ I often remember my dreams when I wake up in the morning and it is really interesting to share my dreams with my family and my friends.

The word 'dream' should be plural 'dreams' because the speaker refers to multiple dreams over time, not just one.

× It is really enjoyable and memorable things that happening in my dream that I share with my friends and family.

✓ They are really enjoyable and memorable things that happen in my dreams that I share with my friends and family.

The subject 'things' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is', and 'happening' should be 'happen' to agree with plural subject. Also, 'dream' should be plural 'dreams' to match the context.

× if I saw interesting dream dream about some traveling or something that trip we covered to plan in that time, I prefer to share that dream with my friends.

✓ If I see an interesting dream about some traveling or a trip we planned at that time, I prefer to share that dream with my friends.

The conditional sentence requires present tense 'see' instead of past 'saw'. Also, 'dream dream' is a repetition error. 'Covered to plan' is incorrect; 'planned' is the correct past tense verb. 'An' is needed before 'interesting dream' as it is singular and countable.

× Every person have their ability to prefer to came to your dreams true because it really essential for every human life to become a successful portion that they dream always.

✓ Every person has the ability to make their dreams come true because it is really essential for every human life to achieve the success they always dream of.

'Every person' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' not 'have'. 'Came' is incorrect past tense; 'come' is the correct form after 'to'. 'Your dreams' should be 'their dreams' to match 'every person'. The sentence structure and word choice are improved for clarity and correctness.