Dreams— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and fluent. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words and repetitions, and give one or two specific details (how often or what kind of dreams you remember). Use linking words like 'but' to connect ideas and keep answers within 3–4 sentences.

예시: Yes, I can remember some of my dreams, but only for a short time after I wake up. For example, I often recall the feeling or one vivid scene for about twenty minutes, and then it fades. Because of that, I sometimes keep a notebook by my bed to record anything I remember immediately.

제안: Answer directly and organize ideas: state whether you share dreams, then give specific examples and reasons. Reduce hesitations and incorrect grammar (e.g., 'if my dreams are interesting', 'I share them with'). Use linking words like 'so' or 'because' to explain.

예시: Yes, I often share interesting dreams with my family and friends because they enjoy hearing them. I sometimes post strange or dramatic dreams online to get other people's opinions. I also like listening to others' dreams because they can be surprising or funny.

제안: Give a clear opinion followed by one or two concise reasons. Avoid repetition and pronunciation/word-choice errors ('dreams' not 'Jim/James', 'meanings' not 'means'). Use linking words like 'because' to explain your view and provide a brief example.

예시: No, I don't think dreams have special meanings because they are usually random and based on daily thoughts. For instance, dreaming about falling might just reflect stress from the day rather than a prediction. Believing every dream could make you worry unnecessarily.

제안: Start with a clear statement of your position, then give reasons and a short example. Avoid repeated words and improve grammar: say 'I don't want to make my dreams come true' or 'I prefer not to'. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' to connect ideas.

예시: I don't try to make most of my dreams come true because they are often unrealistic or dramatic. For example, I once dreamed I could fly, which felt exciting but impossible, so I treat such dreams as imagination rather than goals.

× I, I think I can remember the dreams I had, but just about, uh, 20 minutes, uh, I don't know why I can't remember the dreams so clearly, but umm, I just remember a little.

✓ I think I can remember the dreams I had from only about 20 minutes ago; I don't know why I can't remember them clearly, but I only remember a little.

The original sentence has awkward tense and time expression handling. Use 'from only about 20 minutes ago' to indicate time span and replace repeated 'the dreams' with pronoun 'them' for naturalness. Also remove filler words and tighten clause connections. Suggested improvement: Practice forming time expressions with 'ago' and using pronouns to avoid repetition.

× And I think if the if my dreams is interested, I always share my dreams with my family, friends or umm Internet and I.

✓ And I think if my dreams are interesting, I always share them with my family, friends, or people on the Internet.

'Dreams' is plural so the verb must be 'are' (subject-verb agreement). 'Interested' is the past participle and not appropriate; use adjective 'interesting'. Use pronoun 'them' to avoid repetition and say 'people on the Internet' for clarity. Suggested improvement: Match plural subjects with plural verbs and choose correct adjective forms.

× And sometimes I interested in other dreams.

✓ And sometimes I am interested in other people's dreams.

Missing auxiliary 'am' for present simple passive state; 'interested' needs the verb 'be' to form the adjective complement. Also clarify possession with 'people's dreams'. Suggested improvement: Remember adjectives like 'interested' require a form of 'be' (am/is/are).

× MMM dreams are very dramas or.

✓ Some dreams are very dramatic.

'Dramas' is a noun; the correct adjective is 'dramatic'. 'Very dramatic' correctly modifies 'dreams'. Also remove filler 'MMM' and trailing 'or'. Suggested improvement: Learn adjective forms of nouns (drama -> dramatic).

× I don't I don't think Jim has, umm, special means because I if you think James has means, you will you will being affect by your dreams.

✓ I don't think dreams have special meanings because if you think dreams have meanings, you will be affected by them.

Multiple pronoun and word choice errors: 'Jim' and 'James' are incorrect for 'dreams'; 'means' should be 'meanings'; 'being affect' is wrong — correct passive form is 'be affected'; replace repeated 'you will you will' and use 'them' to refer to dreams. Suggested improvement: Keep consistent nouns, use 'have' for possession, and form passive with 'be' + past participle.

× I think it's it's not a good thing.

✓ I think it's not a good thing.

Redundant repetition 'it's it's' is an error in fluency; remove duplication. No tense change needed. Suggested improvement: Avoid repeated words when speaking; self-monitor for stuttering.

× I, I think I, I'm not to make, make my dreams come true because, uh, my dream is usually very dramas or not true.

✓ I don't want to try to make my dreams come true because my dreams are usually very dramatic or not realistic.

'I'm not to make' is ungrammatical; use 'don't want to try to make' to express refusal or lack of desire. 'Dream' should be plural 'dreams' with plural verb 'are'; 'dramas' → 'dramatic'; 'not true' → 'not realistic' is more natural. Suggested improvement: Use modal verbs like 'want to' and verbs 'try to' to express intention; match subject-verb number and use adjectives correctly.

× It it not good. So I think my dream just be a dream. That's fine.

✓ It's not good. So I think my dreams should just remain dreams. That's fine.

Original sentences have tense and modal problems: 'It it not good' duplicates and lacks contraction; 'my dream just be a dream' uses incorrect verb form 'be' where 'should remain' expresses the intended meaning. Use plural 'dreams' to match earlier references. Suggested improvement: Use modal 'should' to give opinions about what ought to be, and ensure verbs are properly conjugated.