Dreams— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cevap daha net ve yapılandırılmış olmalı. İlk cümlede doğrudan soruya yanıt verin (evet/hayır), sonra kısa bir açıklama verin. Bağlaçlar (e.g., "sometimes", "however") kullanarak cümleler arasında akıcılık sağlayın. Ayrıca tekrar ve gereksiz kelime kullanımından kaçının. Örnek olarak olumsuz bir durumu belirtirken net ifadeler kullanın ve en fazla 4-5 cümlede kalın.

예시: No, I usually can't remember my dreams. However, sometimes a scene suddenly comes back to me during the day and it feels familiar. I'm often unsure whether those moments were dreams or real events, which can be a bit confusing.

제안: Cevaplar kısa ve karışık; daha düzenli ve net olun. Önce doğrudan yanıt verin (evet/ hayır), sonra örnek ve sebep verin. "because" veya "so" gibi bağlaçlarla nedenleri bağlayın. Ayrıca dilbilgisi hatalarını düzeltin (ör. 'others' yerine 'other people's'). 2–4 cümle yeterli olacaktır.

예시: If I remember a dream, I usually tell my mother about it because she is supportive. Most of my remembered dreams are nightmares, so I rarely ask others about their dreams or listen to them. I don't consider myself a good listener in that topic.

제안: Cevabınız çelişkili ve tekrarlı; daha tutarlı bir görüş sunun. İlk cümlede net bir görüş (yes/no) belirtin, ardından kısa bir neden verin ve gerekirse bir örnek ekleyin. Gereksiz tekrarları çıkarın ve zaman ifadelerini doğru kullanın ("in the past" gibi).

예시: I used to believe dreams had special meanings, but I don't anymore because I haven't found convincing evidence. For example, when I tried to interpret a dream it didn't match what happened later, so now I take dreams less seriously.

제안: Cevap duygusal ve argo içeriyor; daha kibar ve yapılandırılmış bir ifade kullanın. Önce net bir cevap verin (sometimes/no), sonra sebebinizi kısa ve nazikçe açıklayın. Argo ifadeler yerine uygun sözcükler kullanın. Cümle sayısını 2–3 ile sınırlayın.

예시: Sometimes I would like to make my dreams come true, but not now because many of my remembered dreams are nightmares. Waking up upset from a bad dream makes me less motivated to pursue those dream scenarios.

× I really can't remember if I really wanted to when I get up, but sometimes when I'm doing something I suddenly remember that I saw this moment in the past times.

✓ I really can't remember if I really wanted to when I got up, but sometimes when I'm doing something I suddenly remember that I saw this moment before.

The sentence mixes present and past incorrectly. 'when I get up' should match past 'wanted' so use 'got up'. 'in the past times' is non-idiomatic; use 'before'. Use consistent tense for clarity.

× But I really don't know it's a dream or the reality.

✓ But I really don't know whether it's a dream or reality.

Use of 'it's a dream or the reality' is awkward; 'whether' introduces alternatives and 'reality' does not need 'the'. This fixes pronoun/phrase usage.

× If I remember the dream and most of them actually have nightmares.

✓ If I remember the dream, most of them are actually nightmares.

Original is fragmented and unclear. 'If I remember the dream' should connect to a main clause; 'most of them actually have nightmares' incorrectly assigns 'have' to 'them'. Use 'are nightmares' to describe dreams.

× But yes I always share with my mother and I'm really not interested Others dreams I really don't a listener person but yes.

✓ But yes, I always share them with my mother, and I'm really not interested in others' dreams; I'm not a good listener.

Pronoun 'them' must refer to 'dreams'. Missing preposition 'in' before 'others' and possessive form 'others'' required. 'I really don't a listener person' is ungrammatical; use 'I'm not a good listener'.

× In the past times, yes, I really think about that.

✓ In the past, yes, I really thought about that.

Talking about past beliefs requires past tense 'thought' not present 'think'. Also 'in the past times' is awkward; use 'in the past'.

× But nowadays I really don't think so.

✓ But nowadays I really don't think so.

This sentence is correct in present tense to describe a current belief; no change needed.

× And it is because I don't believe this things anymore and I don't know why.

✓ And it is because I don't believe these things anymore, and I don't know why.

Use plural demonstrative 'these' with plural noun 'things'. Adds comma for clarity.

× Actually I never thought about that.

✓ Actually, I never thought about that.

Add comma after 'Actually' for natural phrasing; sentence is otherwise correct.

× Sometimes yes, but most of Times Now because most of my dreams are kind of nightmare and when I get up this is real ****** me off so I'm not into that.

✓ Sometimes, yes, but most of the time now I don't, because most of my dreams are kind of nightmares, and when I get up it really screws me up, so I'm not into that.

Correct tense and phrasing: 'most of Times Now' -> 'most of the time now'. 'kind of nightmare' -> 'kind of nightmares' (plural). 'this is real ****** me off' is colloquial and ungrammatical; use 'it really screws me up' to convey the idea. Ensure consistent present tense and plural agreement.