Emails— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如“using sending emails”和“proposes”，建议加强语法准确性和词汇选择，避免重复表达，同时注意句子结构的完整性。

예시: Yes, I have been sending emails quite often recently. When I was in China, emails were not a common way to communicate, but after moving to Europe, I had to get used to this more formal method of staying in touch, especially for work and study purposes. This change has helped me improve my professional communication skills.

제안: 回答中有拼写错误（如“spend emails”应为“send emails”），建议注意拼写和表达的准确性，同时可以使用更多连接词使回答更连贯。

예시: Generally, I send emails to my teachers when I have questions after class or want to discuss some ideas in more detail. For example, I might ask for clarification on a topic or share my thoughts about an assignment. In addition, I often send emails to companies to apply for job interviews and submit my CV, hoping to find a good job.

제안: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，如“people use usually prefer”和“which makes it more”不完整，建议加强语法练习，完善句子结构，使表达更自然流畅。

예시: No, sending emails is not very popular in China. In schools and companies, people usually prefer using instant messaging apps like WeChat because they are faster and more convenient for daily communication. For example, WeChat allows users to send voice messages, images, and videos instantly, which makes communication easier.

제안: 回答中存在断句不完整和表达不连贯的问题，建议注意句子完整性和逻辑连贯性，使用适当的连接词，使回答更自然且信息完整。

예시: I think sending emails will become less popular in the future because people tend to prefer faster and more convenient ways of communication, such as instant messaging apps. For example, when I send emails, I have to pay close attention to sentence structure and word choice, which can be quite time-consuming. Therefore, many people might choose instant messaging instead.

× Yes, I have been using sending emails quite often recently.

✓ Yes, I have been sending emails quite often recently.

动词后面不需要同时使用动名词和现在分词，应该直接用现在分词形式sending。

× especially for work and study proposes.

✓ especially for work and study purposes.

单词拼写错误，'proposes'应为'noun'形式'purposes'，表示目的。

× This change help me improve my professional communication.

✓ This change helps me improve my professional communication.

主语是单数，谓语动词应加-s，保持主谓一致。

× Generally, I spend emails to my teachers when I have questions after class or want to discuss some ideas in more detail.

✓ Generally, I send emails to my teachers when I have questions after class or want to discuss some ideas in more detail.

动词使用错误，'spend'不用于发送邮件，应使用'send'。

× hoping to find good job.

✓ hoping to find a good job.

缺少冠词'a'，'job'为可数名词，单数时需加冠词。

× In schools and companies people use usually prefer using instant messaging apps like We Chat because they are faster and more convenient for daily communication.

✓ In schools and companies, people usually prefer using instant messaging apps like WeChat because they are faster and more convenient for daily communication.

副词'usually'位置错误，应放在动词前；'We Chat'应为'WeChat'。

× For example, We Chat allows user to send voice messages, images and videos instantly, which makes it more.

✓ For example, WeChat allows users to send voice messages, images and videos instantly, which makes it more convenient.

'user'应为复数'users'，且句子不完整，补充'more convenient'使句子完整。

× I think sending emails will become less popular in the future because people tend to prefer faster and more convenient ways of communication, such as. Instant messaging apps.

✓ I think sending emails will become less popular in the future because people tend to prefer faster and more convenient ways of communication, such as instant messaging apps.

句子中断句错误，'such as'后不应有句号，应与后文连贯。

× And therefore when people might choose.

✓ Therefore, people might choose other methods.

句子不完整，缺少谓语和宾语，需补充完整表达。