Emails— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，并注意大小写和标点的正确使用。

예시: I don't send emails often because we mainly use WeChat for communication. Emails seem slower compared to instant messaging apps, so I only use them occasionally.

제안: 回答中有明显的词汇错误和语法混乱，建议使用准确的词汇表达具体情况，并保持句子连贯。

예시: I send emails when I need to share large files that can't be sent through instant messaging apps. Also, when collaborating with international partners, emails are more professional and formal.

제안: 回答不连贯且有语法错误，建议用完整句子表达观点，避免断句和词汇错误。

예시: Yes, emails are popular for work in China. However, for daily communication, people mostly use WeChat, which is the most common communication tool.

제안: 回答中有词汇拼写错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议使用准确词汇并简洁表达观点。

예시: I think email will become less popular in the future. Apps like WeChat offer instant and multifunctional communication, so if email doesn't improve, it may be replaced by newer platforms.

× I infrequently send emails as we predominantly rely on We chat for communication compared with Instant. Messaging apps e-mail seems a bit slow so I only use it sometimes.

✓ I infrequently send emails as we predominantly rely on WeChat for communication compared with instant messaging apps. Email seems a bit slow, so I only use it sometimes.

句中“rely on We chat for communication compared with Instant. Messaging apps”中，‘We chat’应为‘WeChat’，且‘compared with’后应接名词短语‘instant messaging apps’，句子结构混乱。应调整为‘compared with instant messaging apps’。另外，‘e-mail’应统一为‘Email’，并且句子应分开，增加逗号和句号使句子更通顺。

× In cases where I need to transmit substantial feels that are too large for instant messaging apps, I rely on a mouse.

✓ In cases where I need to transmit substantial files that are too large for instant messaging apps, I rely on email.

原句中‘substantial feels’应为‘substantial files’，‘feels’是拼写错误。‘I rely on a mouse’语义不通，应为‘I rely on email’。这里涉及词汇错误和搭配错误，需改正。

× Also, when I work on a project together with international partners, emails are more professional for. Formal come.

✓ Also, when I work on a project together with international partners, emails are more professional for formal communication.

句中‘for. Formal come’不符合英语表达，应为‘for formal communication’。‘Formal come’是错误的词组，应改为‘formal communication’以表达正式交流的意思。

× Yes, sending emails in. In China is popular in work. But not communicate. We use prevalent. Communication tool in China as we chat.

✓ Yes, sending emails in China is popular at work, but not for communication. We use WeChat as the prevalent communication tool in China.

原句断句错误，句子不完整且语序混乱。‘sending emails in. In China is popular in work.’应合并为‘sending emails in China is popular at work’；‘But not communicate.’应为‘but not for communication’；‘We use prevalent. Communication tool in China as we chat.’应为‘We use WeChat as the prevalent communication tool in China’。需要调整句子结构和词序。

× I believe emails popularity will diminish in the future.

✓ I believe email's popularity will diminish in the future.

‘emails popularity’中‘emails’应为所有格形式‘email's’，表示‘电子邮件的受欢迎程度’。这里涉及所有格的使用错误，应改正。

× In the long run, apps like We Chat are gradually making e-mail absolute as technology evolves.

✓ In the long run, apps like WeChat are gradually making email obsolete as technology evolves.

‘making e-mail absolute’表达不正确，应为‘making email obsolete’，表示‘使电子邮件过时’。另外‘We Chat’应为‘WeChat’。

× If e-mail can't keep pace with the demand for instant an multifunction communication, it will give way to never platform.

✓ If email can't keep pace with the demand for instant and multifunctional communication, it will give way to newer platforms.

‘instant an multifunction communication’中‘an’应为‘and’，‘multifunction’应为‘multifunctional’；‘never platform’应为‘newer platforms’。这里涉及连词错误、形容词形式错误和名词复数形式错误。