Emails— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时应避免口头语如“umm”和“uh”，使语言更自然流畅。同时，句子结构应更完整，避免语法错误，如“almost use”应为“almost always use”。建议增加连接词，使表达更连贯。

예시: Yes, I often send emails because I work as a saleswoman in a training company. I almost always use email to contact my clients every day since it is very convenient and allows me to access different platforms.

제안: 回答内容较简单，建议增加细节说明，例如说明为何在节日前发送邮件，或者回复邮件的重要性。同时，使用连接词如“because”或“so”使句子更连贯。

예시: I usually send emails before important festivals because I want to show my sincerity to my clients. Also, I reply to important emails promptly to maintain good communication.

제안: 回答较好，但可以使用更多连接词如“however”来增强逻辑性。建议提供更具体的例子或比较，丰富内容。

예시: Yes, sending emails is still popular and considered formal among employees in big or trading companies. However, nowadays, many people, especially in China, prefer using WeChat to communicate because it is faster and more convenient.

제안: 回答中出现了不合适的连接词“Fourthly”，应使用更自然的表达。建议避免列举过多平台名称，改为总结性描述，并提供原因。

예시: In my opinion, sending emails will become less popular in the future because many people prefer using instant messaging apps like WeChat and WhatsApp, which are faster and more convenient for daily communication.

× I almost use e-mail to contact my clients every single day.

✓ I almost use emails to contact my clients every single day.

这里的“e-mail”应使用复数形式“emails”，因为表示多封邮件。英语中表示多次发送邮件时，通常用复数形式。

× As umm, saleswoman working in a training company, I almost use e-mail to contact my clients every single day.

✓ As umm, a saleswoman working in a training company, I almost use emails to contact my clients every single day.

在“saleswoman”前应加冠词“a”，因为这是单数可数名词，缺少冠词属于冠词使用错误，属于动词-ing形式问题的相关语法范畴。

× It's very convenient and e-mail, uh, allows me to log in different platforms.

✓ It's very convenient and email, uh, allows me to log in to different platforms.

动词短语“log in”后应加介词“to”，表示登录到某个平台，缺少介词属于介词使用错误。

× Normally I send emails before some important festivals.

✓ Normally I send emails before some important festivals.

此句无错误，复数形式使用正确。

× Sometimes I need to reply some important emails.

✓ Sometimes I need to reply to some important emails.

动词“reply”后应加介词“to”，表示回复某人或某事，缺少介词属于介词使用错误。

× Yes, I think it's still popular and formal for those people working in big companies or trading companies.

✓ Yes, I think it's still popular and formal for those people working in big companies or trading companies.

此句无错误，复数形式使用正确。

× But nowadays more and more people, especially Chinese, rely on WeChat to connect with others.

✓ But nowadays more and more people, especially Chinese people, rely on WeChat to connect with others.

“Chinese”作为名词时，指中国人，复数形式应为“Chinese people”，更明确且符合语法。

× In my opinion, I suppose sending e-mail will become less popular in the future.

✓ In my opinion, I suppose sending emails will become less popular in the future.

“e-mail”应使用复数形式“emails”，因为表示多封邮件。

× Fourthly, there are lots of platforms to connect with others such as Instagram, WeChat, WhatsApp and other chatting online.

✓ There are lots of platforms to connect with others, such as Instagram, WeChat, WhatsApp, and other online chatting platforms.

“Fourthly”用在此处不合适，且“other chatting online”表达不完整，应改为“other online chatting platforms”，并在列举前加逗号，符合英语习惯。