Emails— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it could be more concise and natural by avoiding redundancy and improving sentence flow. Try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and keep your answer within 5 sentences.

예시: I used to send emails frequently in Japan because it is common for business communication there. However, since moving to London, I prefer using messaging apps like WhatsApp for quicker and more convenient communication.

제안: Your response addresses the question but is somewhat repetitive and could be clearer. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide more specific examples to enrich your answer.

예시: I send emails mainly to colleagues in my Japanese company, especially for important matters such as salary discussions. Since moving to London, I rarely use emails for casual communication.

제안: Your answer is relevant but could be improved by avoiding vague phrases like 'because it is very useful for them to use such tools when they want to.' Try to provide clearer reasons and use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

예시: Sending emails is not very popular among young people in China. Instead, they prefer messaging apps like WeChat and WhatsApp because these apps offer instant communication and many convenient features.

제안: Your answer is clear but could be more natural by avoiding repetition and improving sentence structure. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide a more detailed prediction.

예시: I think emails will become less popular in the future, especially among young people, because messaging apps are more convenient and engaging. Therefore, in the next 10 to 20 years, most people will likely prefer using these apps for communication.

× Before coming to London, I usually used emails to communicate with my colleague and business partners because it is common for Japanese people to use emails for business purposes.

✓ Before coming to London, I usually used emails to communicate with my colleagues and business partners because it is common for Japanese people to use emails for business purposes.

The word 'colleague' should be plural 'colleagues' because the sentence refers to multiple people, which is a singular and plural issue (ID 1).

× Before coming to London, I usually used emails to communicate with my colleague and business partners because it is common for Japanese people to use emails for business purposes.

✓ Before coming to London, I usually used emails to communicate with my colleagues and business partners because it is common for Japanese people to use emails for business purposes.

The noun 'colleague' should be plural 'colleagues' to match the plural 'business partners' and indicate multiple people. This is a singular and plural issue (ID 1).

× I usually use emails when I have to communicate with people in my company in Japan, because after coming to London I don't usually use emails to communicate with others.

✓ I usually use emails when I have to communicate with people in my company in Japan, because after coming to London I don't usually use emails to communicate with others.

No correction needed here as the sentence correctly uses plural 'emails' and 'people'.

× However, if there are important business purposes like a salary, I use emails.

✓ However, if there are important business matters like salary, I use emails.

The phrase 'business purposes like a salary' is awkward; 'business matters like salary' is more appropriate. Also, 'salary' is uncountable here, so 'a salary' is incorrect. This is an incorrect use of quantifiers (ID 14).

× No, I don't think sending e-mail is very popular, especially among young people in China.

✓ No, I don't think sending emails is very popular, especially among young people in China.

The term 'e-mail' should be plural 'emails' to refer generally to the activity of sending emails. This is a singular and plural issue (ID 1).

× Instead, they tend to use messaging apps like WeChat and WhatsApp because it is very useful for them to use such tools when they want to.

✓ Instead, they tend to use messaging apps like WeChat and WhatsApp because it is very useful for them to use such tools when they want to.

No correction needed; the sentence is grammatically correct.

× I believe that sending e-mail will be less popular in the near future because sending emails is not very attractive, especially for young people.

✓ I believe that sending emails will be less popular in the near future because sending emails is not very attractive, especially for young people.

The term 'e-mail' should be plural 'emails' to maintain consistency and correct plural usage. This is a singular and plural issue (ID 1).

× Therefore, I think in the next 10 or 20 years, almost all people use messaging apps.

✓ Therefore, I think in the next 10 or 20 years, almost all people will use messaging apps.

The sentence talks about a future event, so the verb 'use' should be in the future tense 'will use'. This is a future tense issue (ID 7).