Emails— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 答案表达不够自然，存在语法和词汇错误，信息重复且句子结构混乱。建议用一到两句直接回答，再用一到两句补充具体场景，注意时态和冠词，避免重复词汇。可在句子间用连接词（for example, because, so）使逻辑更清晰。

예시: Yes, I send emails quite often, especially since I started university. For example, I usually email professors to submit assignments or ask academic questions, so email has become an important way to contact them.

제안: 回答较明确但语言不够简练，存在语法错误和用词不当。建议先给主题句（when you use email），然后用具体例子支持，使用连接词如 "mainly" 或 "for instance"，并注意动词形式和名词复数。

예시: I mainly use email for formal or academic matters. For instance, I email my tutors to discuss coursework or to submit group assignments and request references from professors.

제안: 观点清楚但表达有语法问题和词汇搭配不当（substitute → alternatives，little red notes → Xiaohongshu）。建议先直接回答，再用两个具体平台作对比，使用连接词（because, such as）并注意单复数和代词一致。

예시: Not really. In China, people prefer instant apps because they are more convenient. For example, many use WeChat for quick messages and Xiaohongshu or other social platforms to share content, so email is used less often.

제안: 回答观点明确但语法与措辞需改进（'that's definitely be' 应为 'it will definitely be'），并可给出更具体的原因或预测。建议用一到两句给结论，再用一到两句解释原因，使用连接词如 'because' 和 'for example'，避免口头语填充。

예시: I think email will become less popular in the future because companies are developing faster, more integrated communication platforms. For example, unified messaging tools can handle chat, file sharing and video calls, which may replace many email functions.

× Yeah, I would say this heavy.

✓ Yeah, I would say this is heavy.

原句缺少连系动词“is”，导致句子结构不完整。建议在主语和表语之间加上合适的系动词，使句子完整清晰。

× I I had this heavy since I become a university student, 'cause my school always ask for students to send e-mail to contact with the professor, like to submit our assignments or.

✓ I have had this habit since I became a university student, because my school always asks students to send e-mails to contact professors, for example to submit our assignments.

原句时态混乱：使用了“had”但后面接“since I become”应为过去式“became”或使用现在完成时“have had”。同时存在单复数和人称一致问题（ask→asks，e-mail→e-mails，professor→professors）。建议将动作发生的持续性用现在完成时表述，并调整动词形式与名词复数。

× my school always ask for students to send e-mail to contact with the professor

✓ my school always asks students to send e-mails to contact professors

短语“ask for students to”用法不自然，通常说“ask students to do something”。“contact with”在此处多余，直接用“contact”即可。建议使用固定搭配“ask someone to do something”和动词“contact + 人”。

× like to submit our assignments or.

✓ for example to submit our assignments.

原句结尾冗长且省略不当。应使用复数“assignments”且补全例子结构。建议不要省略句子尾部，保持完整表达。

× I would say because nowadays we have a lot of alternative of sent emails, so I only use e-mail in some special condition.

✓ I would say because nowadays we have a lot of alternatives to sending emails, so I only use email in some special conditions.

“alternative of sent emails”结构错误，应为“alternatives to sending emails”或“alternatives to emails”。“sent”不应出现在此处；此外“condition”需要复数“conditions”与上下文一致。建议使用动名词短语“to sending emails”或名词短语“to email”。

× For example I need to communicate with my tutors or I need to submit my assignments, especially group assignments I ask for some reference from my professor.

✓ For example, I need to communicate with my tutors or submit my assignments; for group assignments, I ask my professor for some references.

句子中时态需保持一致，原句中表达杂糅且缺少连词与标点使结构混乱。将“ask for some reference from my professor”调整为更自然的“ask my professor for some references”。建议分句并使用恰当介词顺序。

× I would say definitely no because people have a lot of other substitute about sending emails, like people use WeChat or communicate and share some interesting things, little red notes or some other platforms that's much convenient than e-mail.

✓ I would say definitely not, because people have many substitutes for email, like WeChat or Xiaohongshu, which are much more convenient than email for communicating and sharing interesting things.

原句结构混乱，使用了不正确的否定（definitely no→definitely not）和名词单复数（substitute→substitutes）。“about sending emails”搭配不当，且“that's much convenient”语法错误，应为“which are much more convenient”。建议用关系代词引入定语从句并改正比较级形式。

× I would say that's definitely be less popular in the future.

✓ I would say it will definitely be less popular in the future.

原句中“that's definitely be”混用了“that is”和情态/将来结构，应使用“will be”表示将来。建议使用“will be”或“would be”之一，并保持句子一致性。

× One of important reason is a lot of international company try to, uh, create some platform that can make people communicate with other easier and more convenient.

✓ One important reason is that many international companies are trying to create platforms that make it easier and more convenient for people to communicate with each other.

多个问题：应使用“one important reason”或“One of the important reasons”；“company”需复数“companies”；“try to create”在语境中更自然为“are trying to create”表示正在进行；“platform”应为复数“platforms”；“make people communicate with other”中“other”应为“each other”或“one another”，并且“make it easier and more convenient for people to communicate”更自然。建议注意名词单复数、进行时和动词不定式/动名词结构，以及使用“each other”。

× So those things will replace the e-mail.

✓ So those things will replace email.

在此处不需要定冠词“the”加在email前。一般说“replace email”或“replace emails”。建议根据语境去掉“the”。