Emails— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cải thiện ý chính và cấu trúc câu: trả lời trực tiếp, ngắn gọn, tránh lặp từ và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp (ví dụ: "everyday" -> "every day"). Thêm một câu hỗ trợ rõ ràng với chi tiết cụ thể về tần suất hoặc mục đích gửi email và dùng liên từ hợp lý.

예시: Yes, I send emails almost every day because I work as an English teacher. For example, I usually email my director to arrange meetings or submit weekly reports, which helps me keep the administration informed.

제안: Giảm câu ngắt quãng, dùng liên từ mượt mà và sửa lỗi nhỏ (chẳng hạn "the any documents" -> "any documents"). Cố gắng làm ví dụ cụ thể hơn (ai là "everyone"? những tài liệu gì?).

예시: I usually send emails to confirm appointments or meetings. For example, I email my colleagues a day before to confirm the time and attach the agenda and presentation slides so everyone is well prepared.

제안: Giảm sử dụng tiếng lắp (umm, uh) và tránh từ thừa ("everyone", "the"). Nên cung cấp bằng chứng hoặc so sánh ngắn (ví dụ: so với tin nhắn/WeChat) để câu trả lời cụ thể hơn và mạch lạc.

예시: Yes, email is very common in China because it is useful for arranging meetings, confirming times and sending documents. Compared with instant messaging, emails are preferred for formal communication in workplaces.

제안: Sửa ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp ("proud" sai; dùng "more prevalent"), tránh lặp ý và tiếng lắp. Nên đưa lập luận rõ ràng với lý do cụ thể và kết luận ngắn gọn về xu hướng tương lai.

예시: I believe email will remain popular and may become even more widely used because it is convenient and reliable for arranging meetings and sharing documents. However, instant messaging may be used alongside email for quick informal communication.

× It helps me communicate with the administration and.

✓ It helps me communicate with the administration.

The sentence ends with an extra conjunction 'and' with no following clause; remove 'and' to complete the sentence. Use of 'communicate' (base form) after 'helps' is correct; do not add an -ing form here. Suggestion: ensure each coordinating conjunction connects two clauses or items.

× I usually e-mail everyday because I'm an English teacher and I often need to send e-mail to my director to arrange meetings or submit reports.

✓ I usually e-mail every day because I'm an English teacher and I often need to send emails to my director to arrange meetings or submit reports.

Every day is two words when used adverbially. 'e-mail' can be 'email' and when referring to plural or general messages use 'emails' or 'e-mail messages'. Use plural 'emails' because multiple messages are implied. Suggestion: write 'every day' for frequency and use 'emails' for countable plural.

× For example. I e-mail everyone to confirm the time and to share the any documents they need so that everyone is well prepared.

✓ For example, I e-mail everyone to confirm the time and to share any documents they need so that everyone is well prepared.

Use a comma after 'For example' instead of a period to connect the clause. Remove the extra definite article 'the' before 'any documents'—'any' should be used without 'the' in this context. Suggestion: connect introductory phrase properly and do not combine 'the' with 'any' before plural noun.

× in China, sending emails is so prevalent because it allows everyone to umm, arrange the appointment or meetings, confirm the time, uh, and send the documents that they need.

✓ In China, sending emails is very prevalent because it allows people to arrange appointments or meetings, confirm the time, and send the documents they need.

Capitalize sentence start. 'So prevalent' is conversational; use 'very prevalent' for formal clarity. 'Arrange the appointment or meetings' mixes singular and plural and misuses 'the'; use 'arrange appointments or meetings' or just 'arrange appointments'. 'Everyone' is acceptable but 'people' is more natural here. Remove 'that' before 'they need'—it's optional but can be omitted for conciseness. Suggestion: ensure consistent number (appointments/meetings) and remove unnecessary articles.

× In the future, I think sending emails could be so proud, could be more prevalent than nowadays because it's so convenient, which allows everyone to confirm the time.

✓ In the future, I think sending emails could be even more prevalent than it is nowadays because it's so convenient and allows everyone to confirm the time.

'Could be so proud' is incorrect and nonsensical here; 'could be even more prevalent' expresses the intended meaning. Compare with 'than it is nowadays' to provide a clear comparison. Combine clauses with 'and' rather than a nonrestrictive 'which' followed by a noun phrase to improve clarity. Suggestion: use appropriate modal phrasing ('could be more prevalent') and make the comparison explicit.

× Umm, prepare well for the meeting.

✓ People can also prepare well for meetings.

The fragment 'Umm, prepare well for the meeting.' lacks a clear subject and is a sentence fragment after the previous sentence; convert to a full clause that fits context. Use plural 'meetings' or 'the meeting' consistently; here plural generalization works better. Suggestion: avoid sentence fragments in responses; ensure each sentence has a subject and verb.