Advertisement— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，例如“a advertisement”应为“an advertisement”，“sold the couple of cartoon character”表达不准确。建议你使用更准确的词汇和句式，避免语法错误，并且使表达更连贯。

예시: Yes, I remember an advertisement featuring two cartoon characters promoting a nutrition product for elderly people. It was very funny and easy to remember, which made a strong impression on me as a child.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不完整，且缺少具体细节。建议你完整回答问题，使用正确的时态和单复数形式，并补充具体例子使内容更丰富。

예시: Yes, advertising is very common on public transport in Shanghai, especially on the subway and airplanes. For example, last month I saw many ads promoting a nutrition product on the subway.

제안: 回答不完整且表达重复，缺少连贯性。建议你直接回答问题，避免重复，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: I like some advertisements, but it depends on when they appear. For instance, I dislike ads that interrupt TV series because they break the flow of the show.

제안: 回答表达基本清楚，但有语法错误，如“prefer to advertisement”应为“prefer advertisements”。建议注意语法准确性，并使用连接词使表达更自然。

예시: I prefer advertisements that have a clear storyline because they are more interesting and easier for the audience to remember. On the other hand, ads that only describe the product's function are boring.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不流畅。建议你使用完整句子，注意时态和词汇的正确使用，并使句子结构更清晰。

예시: Yes, I often see many advertisements online when I use my phone to listen to music. Usually, if you want to listen for free, you have to watch an ad before the music starts.

× There was a advertisement which sold the couple of cartoon character and it also described a nutrition product for the old man.

✓ There was an advertisement which sold a couple of cartoon characters and it also described a nutrition product for the old man.

冠词使用错误，'advertisement'前应使用'an'而非'a'，因为advertisement以元音音素开头；'the couple of cartoon character'中，'couple of'后应接复数名词，故应为'couple of cartoon characters'。

× And I think it's very funny and because it's very easy to remember the.

✓ And I think it's very funny because it's very easy to remember.

句子中'and because'连接不当，且句尾'the'多余，应删除。建议将'and because'改为单一连词'because'，使句子通顺。

× Yes, it's a common phenomenon in Shanghai, especially on the subway or the flight.

✓ Yes, it's a common phenomenon in Shanghai, especially on the subway or flights.

'the flight'应为复数形式'flights'，因为此处指代一般的航班，不是特指某一航班。

× And I saw many advertisement sold the product.

✓ And I saw many advertisements selling the product.

'many'后应接复数名词，故'advertisement'应改为'advertisements'；'sold'时态和结构不合适，改为现在分词'selling'更符合语境。

× Last month I found there is a nutrition product called.

✓ Last month I found there was a nutrition product called.

时间状语'Last month'表示过去，'there is'应改为过去时'there was'，保持时态一致。

× Sometimes if the advertisement appear in the middle of TV series, I don't like that if the advertisement.

✓ Sometimes if the advertisement appears in the middle of a TV series, I don't like that.

'advertisement'为第三人称单数，动词应加-s变为'appears'；'TV series'前应加不定冠词'a'；句尾多余部分应删除。

× I prefer to advertisement which have a clear story line with it and it's more interesting and admirable for audience to remember it.

✓ I prefer advertisements which have a clear storyline and are more interesting and admirable for the audience to remember.

'prefer to advertisement'结构错误，应为'prefer advertisements'；'story line'合成词应写为'storyline'；'audience'前应加定冠词'the'；谓语动词应与复数主语'accordingly'。

× If the advertisement only to describe the product's function, I think is boring.

✓ If the advertisement only describes the product's function, I think it is boring.

'only to describe'结构错误，应改为动词第三人称单数形式'describes'；缺少主语'it'，应补充完整。

× Yes, there are so many advertisement online when I use my phone to listen to music and I found the advertisement will insert and if you want to free to listen to music you first need to watch the advertisement starting.

✓ Yes, there are so many advertisements online when I use my phone to listen to music, and I found the advertisements will be inserted. If you want to listen to music for free, you first need to watch the advertisements at the start.

'many'后应接复数名词'advertisements'；'advertisement will insert'结构错误，应为被动语态'advertisements will be inserted'；'free to listen'表达不当，应为'listen to music for free'；句子结构混乱，需拆分并调整语序使其通顺。