Swimming— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and fragmented. Try to form complete sentences and avoid unnecessary pauses. Also, provide a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details. For example, you can say why you like swimming and mention your experience with it.

예시: Yes, I like swimming very much because I enjoy water sports. Since childhood, I have been swimming regularly in the private pool at my home, which has helped me improve my skills.

제안: Your answer lacks clarity and has grammatical errors. Try to use complete sentences and link your ideas logically. Also, explain your opinion clearly with reasons.

예시: I think learning to swim can be difficult for those who are not interested. However, for people who enjoy swimming, it is easier to learn because it is a good form of exercise and fun.

제안: Your answer is fragmented and unclear. Use complete sentences and linking words to make your answer coherent. Also, be specific about places and reasons.

예시: In India, people usually go swimming at nearby clubs or outdoor pools. They prefer outdoor pools because they can enjoy the fresh air and swim together with friends, especially during pleasant weather.

제안: Your answer is incomplete and has grammatical mistakes. Try to complete your thoughts and use linking words to compare the two clearly.

예시: There is a big difference between swimming in a pool and swimming in the sea. People feel more comfortable swimming in pools because they are safer. On the other hand, swimming in the sea can be difficult for beginners due to waves and currents.

× since childhood I am. Doing swimming in my. Private pool at my home.

✓ since childhood I have been swimming in my private pool at my home.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'I am doing' which is not appropriate for expressing an action started in the past and continuing to the present. The correct form is present perfect continuous 'I have been swimming' to indicate this ongoing activity since childhood.

× I believe it would be difficult to learn swim.

✓ I believe it would be difficult to learn to swim.

The verb 'learn' should be followed by the infinitive form 'to swim' rather than just 'swim'. This is a common modal verb usage error where the infinitive is required after 'learn'.

× Were not interested in swimming but. Who are interested in it, they can easily learn how to swim because swimming is and good exercise.

✓ Those who are not interested in swimming may find it difficult, but those who are interested can easily learn how to swim because swimming is a good exercise.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper subject and verb agreement. The correction restructures the sentence for clarity and grammatical correctness, properly connecting clauses and using correct articles.

× In India, people usually go for swimming. Add then nearby clubs.

✓ In India, people usually go swimming at nearby clubs.

The phrase 'go for swimming' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'go swimming'. Also, 'Add then' seems to be a typographical error and is removed. The preposition 'at' is used to indicate location.

× And mostly they prefer outdoor pools becauses it. They can enjoy a gloomy weather and swimming together.

✓ Mostly, they prefer outdoor pools because they can enjoy the pleasant weather and swim together.

The original sentence has incorrect conjunction use and awkward phrasing. 'Because' is misspelled as 'becauses'. 'Gloomy weather' is inappropriate for outdoor swimming; 'pleasant weather' fits better. Also, 'swimming together' is corrected to 'swim together' for parallel structure.

× people are more comfort table swimming in the pool because it is safer

✓ people are more comfortable swimming in the pool because it is safer

The word 'comfort table' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'comfortable' to describe how people feel while swimming in the pool.

× In the sea it would be difficult for beginners, especially becaused they are not professionals.

✓ In the sea, it would be difficult for beginners, especially because they are not professionals.

The sentence has a typographical error 'becaused' which should be 'because'. Also, a comma is added after 'In the sea' for clarity.