Swimming— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you like swimming?
수험생
Yes, I love swimming. In fact I love every physical activities and swimming is one of my favorite physical activity. Swimming is a full body exercise and it helps me in relaxing my body and mind.
시험관
Is it difficult to learn how to swim?
수험생
In my opinion, it is fairly easy to learn how to swim. If one is scared of water, then they would have a hard time learning how to swim. But once you get familiar with water, swimming is a fairly easy activity to learn.
시험관
Where do people in your country like to go swimming?
수험생
There are ample of swimming pools in my country. For example, there are swimming pools in schools and in physical centres where people can go and learn swimming and do swimming as a physical activity as well.
시험관
What’s the difference between swimming in the pool and swimming in the sea?
수험생
In my opinion there is a big difference between swimming in a pool and swimming in the sea, because in the pool you generally don't see a very heavy waves and also the water in the sea is salty whereas in pools you generally get fresh water.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you like swimming?
점수: 75.0제안: Try to avoid redundancy and grammatical errors. For example, use singular or plural forms correctly and avoid repeating the same idea. Also, keep your answer concise and natural by limiting it to 3-4 sentences.
예시: Yes, I love swimming because it is a full-body exercise that helps me relax both my body and mind. It's one of my favorite physical activities.
Is it difficult to learn how to swim?
점수: 80.0제안: Your answer is clear but could be improved by using more varied vocabulary and linking words to make it more coherent. Also, avoid repeating the same phrase 'fairly easy' twice.
예시: In my opinion, learning to swim is relatively easy. However, people who are afraid of water might find it challenging at first. Once they become comfortable, swimming becomes much simpler.
Where do people in your country like to go swimming?
점수: 70.0제안: Improve your grammar by using correct expressions such as 'ample' without 'of'. Also, try to provide more specific examples and use linking words to make your answer more natural and fluent.
예시: People in my country usually go to swimming pools located in schools and fitness centers. These places offer opportunities to learn and practice swimming as a popular physical activity.
What’s the difference between swimming in the pool and swimming in the sea?
점수: 78.0제안: Try to use linking words like 'whereas' more effectively and avoid awkward phrasing such as 'don't see a very heavy waves'. Also, be concise and clear in your comparisons.
예시: In my opinion, swimming in a pool differs from swimming in the sea because pools usually have calm, fresh water, whereas the sea has salty water and often strong waves.
문법
× Yes, I love swimming. In fact I love every physical activities and swimming is one of my favorite physical activity.
✓ Yes, I love swimming. In fact, I love every physical activity and swimming is one of my favorite physical activities.
The phrase 'every physical activities' is incorrect because 'every' should be followed by a singular noun, so it should be 'every physical activity'. Also, 'one of my favorite physical activity' should be plural 'activities' because 'one of' refers to a member of a group, so the group noun should be plural.
× There are ample of swimming pools in my country.
✓ There are ample swimming pools in my country.
The phrase 'ample of' is incorrect. 'Ample' is an adjective that does not require 'of' after it. The correct phrase is 'ample swimming pools'.
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