Swimming— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cevabınızda dilbilgisi hataları ve anlamsal belirsizlikler var. "and a lot" ifadesi gereksiz ve yanlış kullanılmış. Ayrıca, "once in a month" ifadesi yerine "once a month" daha doğrudur. Cümlenizi daha doğal ve akıcı yapmak için gereksiz tekrarları kaldırmalı ve daha net ifadeler kullanmalısınız.

예시: Yes, I really enjoy swimming and I try to go once a month.

제안: Cümleniz karışık ve anlaşılması zor. "learning in course it is making very useful" gibi ifadeler dilbilgisi açısından yanlış ve anlamsal olarak belirsiz. Ayrıca, cümlelerinizde gereksiz tekrarlar var. Daha açık ve mantıklı cümleler kurmaya çalışın ve bağlaçları doğru kullanın.

예시: I don't think it's difficult because I took a course with supportive teachers who made the learning process very easy for me.

제안: Cümlelerinizde dilbilgisi hataları ve anlamsal belirsizlikler var. "We usually go pool" ifadesi yanlış, "We usually go to the pool" olmalı. Ayrıca, "rivers are best way to swim" ifadesi de dilbilgisi açısından hatalı. Cümlelerinizi daha doğal ve akıcı yapmak için doğru edatlar ve çoğul kullanımı üzerinde çalışmalısınız.

예시: People usually go to swimming pools, but when I visit the village, I prefer swimming in the river because it's very enjoyable.

제안: Cümleniz çok karışık ve anlamı net değil. "They putting chemicals" ifadesi yanlış, "They put chemicals" olmalı. Ayrıca, "and admission and admission" ifadesi anlamsız. Cümlelerinizi daha açık ve mantıklı hale getirmek için basit ve doğru cümle yapıları kullanmalısınız.

예시: Swimming pools have chemicals to keep the water clean, but the sea does not. I prefer swimming in the sea because it feels more natural.

× Yes, I like swimming and a lot and in addition I would like to go once in a month.

✓ Yes, I like swimming a lot and, in addition, I would like to go once a month.

The adverb 'a lot' should directly follow the verb 'like' to correctly modify it. Also, 'in addition' should be set off by commas as it is an introductory phrase. 'Once in a month' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'once a month'.

× I think it's not difficult because I think learning in course it is making very useful and very easy to do it.

✓ I think it's not difficult because learning in a course makes it very useful and very easy to do.

The sentence structure is awkward and contains unnecessary repetition. 'Learning in course it is making' is incorrect; it should be 'learning in a course makes'. Also, 'to do it' is redundant here and can be omitted for clarity.

× And second of all, I have supportive teachers a lot they the learning process for process for too much easy for me.

✓ Secondly, I have very supportive teachers who make the learning process much easier for me.

The original sentence is grammatically incorrect and unclear. 'Second of all' is better replaced with 'Secondly'. 'I have supportive teachers a lot' is incorrect; 'a lot' should not be used here. The phrase 'they the learning process for process for too much easy for me' is ungrammatical and should be rephrased to 'who make the learning process much easier for me'.

× We usually go pool, but when I go to the village there is no pool, so I go to the river.

✓ We usually go to the pool, but when I go to the village, there is no pool, so I go to the river.

The verb 'go' requires the preposition 'to' before a place. Therefore, 'go pool' should be 'go to the pool'. Also, a comma is needed after 'village' for clarity.

× And also I love going rivers to be honest.

✓ And also, I love going to rivers, to be honest.

The verb 'going' requires the preposition 'to' before a place. Therefore, 'going rivers' should be 'going to rivers'. Commas are added for clarity.

× In addition, rivers are best way to swim.

✓ In addition, rivers are the best way to swim.

When using superlative adjectives like 'best', the definite article 'the' is required before the noun. So, 'rivers are best way' should be 'rivers are the best way'.

× They putting chemicals in the pool but they cannot put chemicals in the sea and admission and admission.

✓ They put chemicals in the pool, but they cannot put chemicals in the sea or river.

The verb 'putting' is incorrect here; the simple present tense 'put' should be used. The phrase 'and admission and admission' is unclear and likely an error; it is omitted in correction. Also, 'or river' is added for clarity.

× I can say that swimming in the sea or the river it is best way to go because you were really feeling dense sea or river or.

✓ I can say that swimming in the sea or the river is the best way to go because you really feel the density of the sea or river.

The sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'It is best way to go' needs the definite article 'the' and should be 'is the best way to go'. 'You were really feeling dense sea or river or' is incorrect; it should be 'you really feel the density of the sea or river'. The sentence is restructured for clarity.