Swimming— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够连贯，表达不自然，且句子未完整。建议简洁明了地表达观点，并补充具体原因，避免语法错误。

예시: Yes, I love swimming because it helps me cool down in the summer and keeps me healthy.

제안: 回答较好，但有语法错误和表达不够自然。建议注意时态和冠词的使用，句子结构更流畅。

예시: Yes, I think learning to swim can be quite difficult at first because it requires a lot of practice and good body coordination. For example, I started learning when I was six years old.

제안: 回答不完整且表达混乱，缺乏连贯性。建议简洁明了地回答问题，使用连词连接句子，避免重复和语法错误。

예시: People in my country usually go swimming in public pools built by the government or at sports centers in the city.

제안: 回答不完整且有语法错误，表达不自然。建议避免口头语，完整表达观点并使用正确的比较结构。

예시: In my opinion, swimming in a pool is safer than swimming in the sea because pools usually have lifeguards ready to help in case of emergency.

× Yes, I love swimming because this exercise is playing in cold water so especially in summer we won't be very hot after doing the exercise and also it can help me to.

✓ Yes, I love swimming because this exercise involves playing in cold water, so especially in summer we won't be very hot after doing the exercise, and also it can help me.

句中“this exercise is playing in cold water”中，动词形式错误，应使用动名词短语“involves playing”来表达“这项运动包括在冷水中游泳”。动词后直接跟动名词表示动作的内容。

× Yes, I think learning swimming can be quite difficult especially when you are starting out. For example, I began learning swimming in my 6 years old.

✓ Yes, I think learning swimming can be quite difficult especially when you are starting out. For example, I began learning swimming when I was 6 years old.

“in my 6 years old”表达错误，正确表达年龄时应使用“when I was 6 years old”，这里需要用过去时态“was”来描述过去的年龄状态。

× At first it was challenge because it requires a lot of practice and coordination of my body.

✓ At first, it was a challenge because it requires a lot of practice and coordination of my body.

“it was challenge”缺少冠词“a”，应为“a challenge”。冠词错误属于句子结构错误，影响句子完整性。

× Well, citizens will always go to the government, the swimming pool which made which built by the government or it's always in the sports centre of our city or the OR the.

✓ Well, citizens will always go to the swimming pool built by the government, or it's always in the sports centre of our city.

句子结构混乱，重复使用“which made which built”不正确，应简化为“swimming pool built by the government”。同时“the OR the”无意义，应删除。

× Umm, I well, in my opinion, uh, swimming in the pool is more safe and more safer than swimming in the sea because umm, swimming pool always have a have a trainer to uh, ready to rescue the.

✓ Umm, well, in my opinion, swimming in the pool is safer than swimming in the sea because the swimming pool always has a trainer ready to rescue people.

“more safe”和“more safer”重复比较级错误，正确用法是“safer”。“swimming pool always have”主谓不一致，应为“has”。此外，句子不完整，补充“people”使句意完整。