Swimming— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时应避免语法错误和表达不自然的地方，例如“where I can learn”应为“where I could learn”，并且“Maybe I just more like”应改为“Maybe I just like”。此外，回答应更简洁，避免冗长。

예시: When I was a child, I enjoyed swimming and took lessons to learn the skills. However, now I prefer to relax at home rather than swim.

제안: 回答中存在语法和表达错误，如“it just loses skills”不通顺，应改为“it's just a skill you can learn”。同时，句子结构混乱，建议使用更清晰的表达和连接词。

예시: I don't think swimming is difficult to learn because it's a skill that improves with practice. Once you get the basics, you can handle it easily.

제안: 回答中“professional native program”表达不清，应具体说明地点，如“professional swimming pools”。句子结构需调整，使用连接词使表达更连贯。

예시: People in my country usually prefer swimming in professional swimming pools because they offer better safety and cleaner water.

제안: 回答较好，但语法需改进，如“swimming in the sea have”应为“has”。建议使用更多连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: Swimming in the sea is more dangerous than in a pool because of unstable conditions. However, it can be more enjoyable since you can see various sea creatures.

× Maybe I just more like hanging around at my house.

✓ Maybe I just like hanging around at my house more.

句中 'just more like' 的词序不正确，应该将 'more' 放在 'like' 后面，形成 'like ... more' 的结构，表示更喜欢。

× because it just loses skills and as soon as you know it, you practice a bit of time you can absolutely handle with it.

✓ because it is just a skill that once you know it, and practice a bit, you can absolutely handle it.

原句中 'loses skills' 用法不当，应表达“这只是一个技能”，且 'handle with it' 中 'with' 不需要，正确用法是 'handle it'。

× you can absolutely handle with it.

✓ you can absolutely handle it.

动词 'handle' 后不需要介词 'with'，直接加宾语即可。

× swimming in the sea have more unstable factors and it is more dangerous for people.

✓ swimming in the sea has more unstable factors and it is more dangerous for people.

主语 'swimming' 是单数，谓语动词应使用单数形式 'has'，而不是复数 'have'。