Friends— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise.

예시: Yes, I have a friend whom I've known since childhood. We studied together in school and college, and currently, he lives with me in Canada. He works in a trucking company, and we share a house, which helps us stay close.

제안: Your answer is generally relevant but could be more natural and coherent. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid short fragmented sentences. Provide specific examples to enrich your response.

예시: With my friends, I usually share my thoughts and feelings. When we have free time, we like to visit new places and enjoy ourselves. Additionally, we play both indoor and outdoor games, which helps strengthen our friendship.

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific details using linking words. Avoid unnecessary phrases and keep sentences complete.

예시: We often meet at home since we live together. When he is free from work, we also go out to cafes or restaurants. Sometimes, we play cricket together, which is a fun way to spend time.

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant but could be improved by using more natural phrasing and varied vocabulary. Also, try to link your ideas smoothly for better coherence.

예시: Yes, whenever we have free time from work, we like to go to cafes or restaurants to enjoy each other's company and share our thoughts. Additionally, we play games like cricket and football, which help us stay fit and healthy.

제안: Your answer is meaningful but contains hesitations and grammatical errors. Practice speaking confidently and clearly. Structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and specific supporting details, using linking words.

예시: Friends are very important to me because they support me when I feel down or stressed. I share my thoughts with them, and they motivate me in both my job and personal life. We also exchange ideas, which helps me grow.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but could be clearer and more concise. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition. Provide specific reasons to support your preference.

예시: It depends on the situation. If all my friends are available, I prefer spending time with the group. However, if some are busy, I enjoy spending time with one friend because it helps me feel refreshed and motivated.

제안: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and incomplete sentences. Try to express your ideas clearly and fully. Use linking words to connect your points and avoid redundancy.

예시: Yes, I often invite my friends to my home for dinners and parties, especially since our schedules are usually busy. When we get together, we share our thoughts and discuss current topics, including business ideas.

× Where does most of my friends are from my childhood and we study together in college and school and one of them.

✓ Most of my friends are from my childhood and we study together in college and school, and one of them.

The phrase 'most of my friends' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'does'. The original sentence incorrectly uses 'does' which is singular, causing a subject-verb agreement error.

× Where does most of my friends are from my childhood and we study together in college and school and one of them.

✓ Most of my friends are from my childhood, and we study together in college and school. One of them is with me in Canada right now.

The original sentence is a run-on and lacks proper structure. Breaking it into clearer sentences improves readability and grammatical correctness.

× From an He's with me in Canada right now and we live together in the same house right now, his truck, he's in trucking company.

✓ One of them is with me in Canada right now, and we live together in the same house. He drives a truck and works in a trucking company.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Reorganizing the sentence and adding missing verbs clarifies the meaning.

× Most of the time when we free we visit new places and enjoy and we also play indoor and outdoor games.

✓ Most of the time when we are free, we visit new places and enjoy ourselves, and we also play indoor and outdoor games.

The phrase 'when we free' is incorrect; it should be 'when we are free' to use the correct verb form. Also, 'enjoy' needs an object or reflexive pronoun to be complete.

× Which make our relationship more healthy and strong.

✓ Which makes our relationship healthier and stronger.

The relative pronoun 'which' refers to a singular subject, so the verb should be 'makes'. Also, 'healthy and strong' should be comparative adjectives 'healthier and stronger' to describe improvement.

× Are they mentioned before?

✓ As I mentioned before,

The original sentence is unclear and incorrect. The speaker likely means to refer back to a previous statement, so 'As I mentioned before' is appropriate.

× so whenever he free from his work we meet at home.

✓ So whenever he is free from work, we meet at home.

The phrase 'he free' is missing the verb 'is'. Also, 'from his work' is better expressed as 'from work' for natural English usage.

× And we also go outside like for cafe and to eat at restaurant and we also play. Cricket.

✓ We also go out to cafes and restaurants to eat, and we play cricket.

The original sentence is fragmented and awkward. Combining ideas into a coherent sentence improves clarity.

× Yes, whenever we free from work, we go to cafe or restaurant to spend good time together and share our ideas and thoughts.

✓ Yes, whenever we are free from work, we go to a cafe or restaurant to spend good time together and share our ideas and thoughts.

The phrase 'we free' is missing the verb 'are'. Also, 'to cafe or restaurant' requires articles: 'a cafe or a restaurant'.

× Moreover, we also go out to play some games like cricket and football and it also keeps us fit and healthy.

✓ Moreover, we also go out to play games like cricket and football, which also keep us fit and healthy.

The phrase 'some games' is acceptable but 'games' alone is more natural here. Also, 'it' should be 'which' referring to the games, and 'keep' agrees with plural subject.

× Well, I think friends out. How do you spell spell? Well I think friends are very special place in my life because whenever I feel down or stressed I hear my ideas with them and they keep motivate me about my job and life.

✓ Well, I think friends are very special in my life because whenever I feel down or stressed, I share my ideas with them and they keep me motivated about my job and life.

The phrase 'friends out' is unclear and likely a misstatement. 'I hear my ideas with them' is incorrect; it should be 'I share my ideas with them'. Also, 'they keep motivate me' should be 'they keep me motivated'.

× And we also he also shared their ideas with me.

✓ And they also share their ideas with me.

The original sentence has redundant pronouns and incorrect tense. 'He also shared' should be 'they also share' to agree with plural friends and present tense.

× Well it's depends on the situation.

✓ Well, it depends on the situation.

The phrase 'it's depends' is incorrect; 'it depends' is the correct form as 'depends' is the verb and 'it' is the subject.

× If we are together that time we prefer to spend time together.

✓ If we are together at that time, we prefer to spend time together.

The phrase 'that time' needs the preposition 'at' to be correct.

× If other of my friends are busy then I prefer to spend time with one of my friends because spending time with friends helps me to keep myself refresh and motivated.

✓ If other friends are busy, then I prefer to spend time with one friend because spending time with friends helps me keep myself refreshed and motivated.

'Other of my friends' is incorrect; 'other friends' is correct. Also, 'keep myself refresh' should be 'keep myself refreshed'.

× Yes, I often invite my friends at home for dinner and parties becauses in bridge is such a busy schedule.

✓ Yes, I often invite my friends to my home for dinner and parties because I have such a busy schedule.

The phrase 'invite my friends at home' should be 'invite my friends to my home'. Also, 'becauses in bridge is such a busy schedule' is unclear and corrected to 'because I have such a busy schedule'.

× When I invite my friends, we share our thoughts and ideas, and we also talk about current topics and we share our thoughts on business. As well as in.

✓ When I invite my friends, we share our thoughts and ideas, talk about current topics, and share our thoughts on business as well.

The original sentence is fragmented and ends abruptly. Combining the ideas into a complete sentence improves clarity.