Friends— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng cần cải thiện về ngữ pháp, cấu trúc câu và từ vựng để tự nhiên và rõ ràng hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như thiếu từ, sai thì và dùng từ không phù hợp. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn, mạch lạc và có liên kết logic giữa các ý.

예시: Yes, I have a couple of close friends whom I have known for a long time. One of my best friends is someone I studied with in high school. We are like kindred spirits because we share common interests such as playing games and discussing our hobbies. I enjoy spending time with her because she is very friendly and considerate.

제안: Bạn cần cải thiện cách diễn đạt để câu trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Hãy sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh ngắt quãng và thêm các liên từ để câu văn trôi chảy. Ngoài ra, nên cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn về hoạt động bạn làm với bạn bè.

예시: In our free time, we usually catch up near our favorite hangout spot called Fort Ann, which is close to our school. We often go there after school to chat and spend time together.

제안: Câu trả lời có nội dung tốt nhưng cần sửa lỗi phát âm và từ vựng không chính xác như 'drip apart' (phải là 'drift apart') và 'social meteors' (phải là 'social media'). Hãy sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và câu văn mạch lạc hơn để thể hiện ý rõ ràng.

예시: We don't meet face to face at the moment because she lives in Australia. At first, I thought we might drift apart, but luckily we didn't. Although we are far away, we keep in touch a lot through phone calls and social media to maintain our friendship.

제안: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt để câu trả lời rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn. Tránh lỗi sai từ và câu dài không rõ nghĩa. Nên chia câu hợp lý và dùng từ phù hợp với ngữ cảnh.

예시: I don't usually go out with my friend nowadays because she lives far away. However, when we were in high school, we used to meet once a week or even more often. After school, we often went to our favorite place to share stories and talk about our daily lives.

제안: Câu trả lời có ý nghĩa nhưng cần sửa lỗi từ vựng như 'in traverse person' (có thể là 'an introvert person') và 'fillings' (phải là 'feelings'). Hãy dùng từ chính xác và câu văn mạch lạc hơn để truyền đạt ý tốt hơn.

예시: Friends are very important to me because I am an introverted person. I don't usually talk about myself with strangers, so I share my thoughts and feelings with my close friends. Therefore, they mean a lot to me.

제안: Bạn nên sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và câu trúc câu để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Tránh lặp từ và câu không hoàn chỉnh. Dùng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc và rõ ràng hơn.

예시: I prefer spending time with one close friend rather than a group because when I am with a big group, I don't talk much or share my secret feelings. But with a close friend, I feel comfortable to open up.

제안: Câu trả lời cần được sắp xếp lại cho mạch lạc, sửa lỗi từ vựng như 'inconvenience' (phải là 'inconvenient') và 'gas' (phải là 'guests'). Hãy dùng câu hoàn chỉnh và liên kết ý tốt hơn.

예시: In the past, I used to invite friends to my home, but now I don't do it often. I live in a big house with my extended family, including my in-laws, so it can be quite inconvenient to have guests over. Usually, I meet my friends at a nearby cafe which is small, comfortable, and private.

× Yes, I have a couple of close friends who have known for the very long time.

✓ Yes, I have a couple of close friends who I have known for a very long time.

The phrase 'who have known for the very long time' is missing the subject 'I'. It should be 'who I have known' to correctly indicate the subject performing the action. Also, 'the very long time' is unnatural; 'a very long time' is correct.

× One of my best friend is 1 I study with in my high school.

✓ One of my best friends is someone I studied with in my high school.

'One of my best friend' should be 'One of my best friends' because 'one of' requires a plural noun. Also, 'is 1 I study with' is incorrect; it should be 'is someone I studied with' to clarify the meaning and use past tense for a completed action.

× We like kindred spirits because we share a love thing in comments such as playing games and discussing how hobbies we enjoy spending time.

✓ We are like kindred spirits because we share a love for common things such as playing games and discussing hobbies we enjoy spending time on.

The original sentence has awkward phrasing and incorrect word usage. 'Love thing in comments' is incorrect; it should be 'love for common things'. Also, 'discussing how hobbies we enjoy spending time' is unclear and should be 'discussing hobbies we enjoy spending time on'.

× One of my best friend is 1 I study with in my high school.

✓ One of my best friends is someone I studied with in my high school.

Repeated for clarity: 'friend' should be plural 'friends' after 'one of'. Also, 'study' should be past tense 'studied'.

× So in our free time, we usually catch up with each other near our Hangouts. Fort Ann. There is a place with. Also near I was school so we usually go when there to have some kind of talk with each other after. After school.

✓ So in our free time, we usually catch up with each other near our hangout spot, Fort Ann. It is a place near my school, so we usually go there to have some kind of talk with each other after school.

The original sentences are fragmented and have incorrect prepositions and word order. 'Near our Hangouts. Fort Ann.' is unclear; it should be 'near our hangout spot, Fort Ann.' 'Also near I was school' is incorrect; it should be 'near my school'. 'Go when there' should be 'go there'.

× We don't meet each other face to face at the moment because she's now living in Australia, but it's kind of fun is carefully because when we first moved there I thought that we might kind of drip apart, but luckily we didn't.

✓ We don't meet each other face to face at the moment because she's now living in Australia, but it's kind of funny because when she first moved there I thought that we might drift apart, but luckily we didn't.

'Fun is carefully' is incorrect; it should be 'funny'. 'When we first moved there' is incorrect because only she moved; it should be 'when she first moved there'. 'Drip apart' is a wrong phrase; the correct phrase is 'drift apart'.

× Although we're far away, we still keep in touch a lot through phone calls and social meteors to maintain our friendship.

✓ Although we're far away, we still keep in touch a lot through phone calls and social media to maintain our friendship.

'Social meteors' is a mishearing or typo; the correct term is 'social media'.

× I don't usually go out with my friends NASA day because she lives far away from me.

✓ I don't usually go out with my friend nowadays because she lives far away from me.

'Friends NASA day' is incorrect; it should be 'friend nowadays'. 'Friends' is plural but refers to one person 'she', so singular 'friend' is correct.

× However, when we were at high school, we usually meet once a week or even more frequently properly maybe after school we often went to our favorite place to share stories and talk about our daily lives.

✓ However, when we were at high school, we usually met once a week or even more frequently, maybe after school. We often went to our favorite place to share stories and talk about our daily lives.

The verb 'meet' should be in past tense 'met' to match the past time frame. Also, the sentence is long and needs punctuation for clarity.

× Friends are indeed very important to me because I'm in traverse person.

✓ Friends are indeed very important to me because I'm an introvert person.

'In traverse person' is a mispronunciation or typo; the correct phrase is 'an introvert person'.

× I don't talk much about myself with other strangers, so I usually share my talks, my fillings in my emotions. With my friends, my close friend to be exact.

✓ I don't talk much about myself with other strangers, so I usually share my thoughts, my feelings, and my emotions with my friends, my close friends to be exact.

'Talks' should be 'thoughts', 'fillings' is a misspelling of 'feelings'. Also, 'my close friend to be exact' should be plural 'my close friends to be exact' to match context.

× I believe that I prefer spending time with one friends friend rather than a group of friends because.

✓ I believe that I prefer spending time with one friend rather than a group of friends because.

'One friends friend' is incorrect; it should be 'one friend'.

× If I hang out with a big group of people, I will not talk much and I am not going to share a lot of my secret feelings to them.

✓ If I hang out with a big group of people, I will not talk much and I am not going to share a lot of my secret feelings with them.

The preposition 'to' is incorrect here; the correct preposition is 'with' when sharing feelings.

× But when I go with my close friend, I can be able to do that.

✓ But when I go with my close friend, I am able to do that.

'Can be able to' is redundant; use either 'can' or 'am able to'. Here, 'am able to' fits better.

× I'm currently living in a big house with my extended family, including my in-laws, so it can be quite inconvenience to have the gas over there for usually meet my friends at the nearby cafe which is small, comfortable in private.

✓ I'm currently living in a big house with my extended family, including my in-laws, so it can be quite inconvenient to have guests over. I usually meet my friends at a nearby cafe which is small, comfortable, and private.

'Inconvenience' is a noun; the adjective form 'inconvenient' is needed here. 'Gas' is a typo for 'guests'. The sentence is also fragmented and needs restructuring for clarity.