Friends— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and some redundancy. Try to use complete sentences and correct verb forms. Also, avoid repeating similar ideas. For example, say "I have a best friend whom I've known since childhood, and we now study together in college. I often share my problems with him, and he always helps me."

예시: I have a best friend whom I've known since childhood, and we now study together in college. I often share my problems with him, and he always helps me.

제안: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and has grammatical mistakes. Try to organize your ideas clearly and use linking words. For example, "We usually study together at college and at home during free time. Besides studying, we enjoy watching movies and playing football, which we both like a lot."

예시: We usually study together at college and at home during free time. Besides studying, we enjoy watching movies and playing football, which we both like a lot.

제안: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical errors and some awkward phrasing. Use correct prepositions and verb forms. Also, try to be more specific. For example, "We usually meet at each other's homes, where we spend free time sharing our thoughts and helping each other with problems."

예시: We usually meet at each other's homes, where we spend free time sharing our thoughts and helping each other with problems.

제안: Your answer has good content but needs better sentence structure and vocabulary. Avoid repeating "sometime" and use linking words. For example, "Yes, I often go out with my friends during free time. Sometimes we visit the stadium to play football, other times we go shopping in the city or eat at a restaurant."

예시: Yes, I often go out with my friends during free time. Sometimes we visit the stadium to play football, other times we go shopping in the city or eat at a restaurant.

제안: Your answer conveys the message but has many grammatical errors and unclear phrases like "power off." Try to express your ideas clearly and use correct grammar. For example, "In my opinion, friends are very important in everyone's life because we share our problems and support each other during difficult times."

예시: In my opinion, friends are very important in everyone's life because we share our problems and support each other during difficult times.

제안: Your answer is relevant but contains filler words and grammatical errors. Try to avoid fillers and use correct verb forms. For example, "I prefer spending time with my best friend rather than a group because we know each other well and share many things about our studies and the world."

예시: I prefer spending time with my best friend rather than a group because we know each other well and share many things about our studies and the world.

제안: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical mistakes and some redundancy. Use correct prepositions and verb tenses. For example, "Yes, I often invite my friends to my home to play on my PS5. We also watch movies together and enjoy spending time."

예시: Yes, I often invite my friends to my home to play on my PS5. We also watch movies together and enjoy spending time.

× Yes definitely I have friend in my life, best friend in my life since my childhood and nowadays we also study together in college.

✓ Yes definitely I have a friend in my life, a best friend in my life since my childhood and nowadays we also study together in college.

The noun 'friend' is singular and requires an article 'a' before it to be grammatically correct. Without the article, the sentence is incomplete and incorrect.

× I always sharing my problems and difficult situation with my friend and he always helping me.

✓ I always share my problems and difficult situations with my friend and he always helps me.

The verbs 'sharing' and 'helping' are incorrectly used in the present continuous form here. The simple present tense 'share' and 'helps' should be used to express habitual actions.

× Most of the time we are study together in college as well at home in free time.

✓ Most of the time we study together in college as well as at home in our free time.

The phrase 'are study' is incorrect; the correct form is the simple present 'study' to indicate habitual actions. Also, 'as well at home' should be 'as well as at home' for correct prepositional usage.

× Sometime we also watch movies, play football, football together, me and me and my friend lot of interest football game and sometime we also watch the watch match on.

✓ Sometimes we also watch movies, play football together. My friend and I have a lot of interest in football games and sometimes we also watch the football match on TV.

'Sometime' should be 'Sometimes' to indicate frequency. The phrase 'me and me and my friend' is incorrect; it should be 'My friend and I'. 'Lot of interest football game' is incorrect; it should be 'have a lot of interest in football games'. Also, 'watch the watch match on' is unclear and corrected to 'watch the football match on TV'.

× The most of the time we meet at our home, sometime my friend come at my home and sometime I go at her home.

✓ Most of the time we meet at our home, sometimes my friend comes to my home and sometimes I go to her home.

'The most of the time' should be 'Most of the time'. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'My friend come' should be 'my friend comes' to agree with third person singular. 'Come at my home' and 'go at her home' should be 'come to my home' and 'go to her home' respectively for correct preposition usage.

× We always sharing our problems and difficult situation and we help.

✓ We always share our problems and difficult situations and we help each other.

'Sharing' should be 'share' to use the simple present tense for habitual actions. Also, 'difficult situation' should be plural 'difficult situations' to match the plural 'problems'. The sentence is incomplete without specifying whom 'we help'; adding 'each other' clarifies the meaning.

× Yes, definitely I go with my friend in free time.

✓ Yes, definitely I go with my friend in my free time.

The phrase 'in free time' is missing the possessive pronoun 'my' to indicate whose free time it is. Although this is more about preposition and pronoun usage, it relates to modal verb context of expressing habitual action.

× Sometime we visit to stadium to play football together and sometime we also visit to city for shopping and sometime we go for eating something from restaurant.

✓ Sometimes we visit the stadium to play football together, sometimes we also visit the city for shopping, and sometimes we go to a restaurant to eat something.

The preposition 'to' is incorrectly used after 'visit'; 'visit' does not require 'to'. Also, 'go for eating' is incorrect; it should be 'go to a restaurant to eat'. Articles 'the' and 'a' are added appropriately.

× From my opinion and friends are very important in everyone life because we sharing our problem, difficult situation and friend always helping in difficult situation, power off and different things.

✓ In my opinion, friends are very important in everyone's life because we share our problems and difficult situations, and friends always help in difficult situations, offer support and different things.

'From my opinion' should be 'In my opinion'. 'Everyone life' should be 'everyone's life' to show possession. 'Sharing' should be 'share' for simple present tense. 'Friend always helping' should be 'friends always help' to agree in number and tense. 'Power off' is unclear and corrected to 'offer support'.

× I think friends are very necessary in everyone life.

✓ I think friends are very necessary in everyone's life.

'Everyone life' should be 'everyone's life' to indicate possession.

× In my opinion, I prefer to spend time with my best friend as compared to group of friends.

✓ In my opinion, I prefer to spend time with my best friend as compared to a group of friends.

The phrase 'group of friends' requires an article 'a' before it to be grammatically correct.

× we also sharing different things about study and about world.

✓ we also share different things about study and about the world.

'Sharing' should be 'share' to use the simple present tense for habitual actions. Also, 'about world' should be 'about the world' with the definite article.

× Yes, of course I invite my friend at my home and to play together on laptop.

✓ Yes, of course I invite my friend to my home to play together on the laptop.

'Invite my friend at my home' should be 'invite my friend to my home' for correct preposition usage. 'On laptop' should be 'on the laptop' with the definite article.

× we playing together in free time and sometime we also watch movies to sit together and spend our time.

✓ we play together in our free time and sometimes we also watch movies, sit together and spend our time.

'Playing' should be 'play' to use the simple present tense for habitual actions. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'Watch movies to sit together' is awkward; corrected to 'watch movies, sit together'.