Friends— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在重复和语法错误，表达不够自然。建议简洁明了地介绍朋友关系，避免重复词汇，并使用正确的语法结构。

예시: Yes, I have two close friends whom I've known since childhood. We grew up together and share many similar experiences, which makes our friendship very strong.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议使用连贯的句子，明确说明活动内容，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: My friends and I usually chat on social media. We have a group where we discuss our daily lives and college experiences, and sometimes we plan trips together.

제안: 回答表达不够清晰，语法错误较多。建议简洁明了地说明见面时间和原因，避免重复和不完整的句子。

예시: Since we study in different provinces, we usually meet during summer and winter vacations. However, these meetings are quite infrequent.

제안: 回答中语法和用词不准确，表达不够自然。建议使用正确的动词形式和更地道的表达方式。

예시: Yes, I often go out with my friends because they are funny and have many interesting stories and ideas. Talking with them always inspires me.

제안: 回答语法错误较多，表达不完整。建议用完整句子表达朋友的重要性，并具体说明原因。

예시: I think friends are very important in my life because they make me feel comfortable and confident. They also help me appreciate the good things in life.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和用词不当。建议使用正确的表达方式说明偏好，并解释原因。

예시: I prefer spending time with one friend because I am an introvert. It is easier for me to share my thoughts and experiences one-on-one.

제안: 回答非常混乱，语法错误严重，表达不清。建议简洁明了地表达邀请朋友的意愿和原因。

예시: Yes, I would definitely invite my close friends to my home because I enjoy spending time with them in a comfortable environment.

제안: 回答语法混乱且不完整，难以理解。建议用完整句子清楚表达现在和过去见面地点的不同，并说明原因。

예시: Yes, there is a difference. Now that I'm in college, I meet my friends mostly on campus, whereas before we used to meet in our neighborhood.

제안: 回答表达不清晰，语法错误多。建议明确说明适合见面的地方的特点，并用连贯的句子表达。

예시: I think suitable places for meeting depend on the purpose. For private or important meetings, a quiet and comfortable place is better.

× I have two friends who who were umm, we, we grew up each others, and we also have a lot of experience, the same experience and uh, we are the best.

✓ I have two friends who, umm, we grew up together, and we also have a lot of the same experiences, and uh, we are the best.

“each others”用法错误，应该用“together”表示一起成长；“experience”应使用复数形式“experiences”，因为指多个经历。

× we my friend, we usually trade in a social media and we have a trap trap group and we where we discuss our daily lives, our college experience and sometimes we plan trips together for example.

✓ My friends and I usually chat on social media, and we have a group where we discuss our daily lives, our college experiences, and sometimes we plan trips together, for example.

“trade in a social media”用词错误，应为“chat on social media”；“trap trap group”可能是“group”重复错误；“where we discuss”前应有“a group”；“college experience”应为复数“experiences”。

× Because we study in different province, so we just meet each other during the summer and winter vacation.

✓ Because we study in different provinces, we just meet each other during the summer and winter vacations.

“in different province”应为复数“provinces”；“vacation”应为复数“vacations”，因为指多个假期。

× Umm but even that time is too long and we have no we have a long time to determine do not meet each other.

✓ Umm, but even that time is too long, and we sometimes go a long time without meeting each other.

句子结构混乱，表达不清，应调整为“go a long time without meeting each other”表示“很长时间不见面”。

× I love get go out with my friends because they are so funny, they have some so much interesting story and so much interesting ideas to communicate with them and I think I will give some inspire.

✓ I love to go out with my friends because they are so funny; they have so many interesting stories and ideas to share, and I think they inspire me.

“love get go out”用法错误，应为“love to go out”；“some so much interesting story”应为“so many interesting stories”；“give some inspire”应为“inspire me”。

× I think thank friend is very important in my life because friendship it made me feel more comfortable, confident and it will let me know how much I'm thankful and how much to uh.

✓ I think friends are very important in my life because friendship makes me feel more comfortable and confident, and it lets me know how thankful I am.

“thank friend”应为“friends”；“friendship it made”重复主语，应为“friendship makes”；“how much to uh”表达不完整，应删去。

× I prefer to spend time with one friend because I I'm an inner person, so I prefer to check with one friend to express my personal thinking and to share my experience in my daily life.

✓ I prefer to spend time with one friend because I'm an introverted person, so I prefer to chat with one friend to express my personal thoughts and share my daily experiences.

“inner person”应为“introverted person”；“check with one friend”应为“chat with one friend”；“personal thinking”应为“personal thoughts”；“experience”应为复数“experiences”。

× Yes, definitely I would invite my friend to my home because I think if that friend is what I really, really, really like to close, I I must to I will I will go to I want to go hang out with her or he that I want I'm I will.

✓ Yes, definitely I would invite my friend to my home because if that friend is someone I really, really like to be close to, I must and want to hang out with him or her.

“must to I will I will go to I want to go”语法混乱，应简化为“must and want to”；“her or he”应为“him or her”。

× Yes, I think there is have some difference between the my the the friend I met or the friend I meet now because right, I'm in college right now and the relationship in college is did did didn't so much deeper but the.

✓ Yes, I think there are some differences between the friends I met before and the friends I meet now because right now, I'm in college and relationships in college are much deeper.

“there is have some difference”错误，应为“there are some differences”；“friend”应为复数“friends”；“did did didn't”是错误重复，应删除。

× I think it depends on the, how much the meeting is important because I think if you want to, uh, if the meeting is very promising, uh, privacy and then you go, you, you must go to the exact position. Exactly.

✓ I think it depends on how important the meeting is because if you want privacy, you must go to the exact place.

“depends on the, how much the meeting is important”表达不自然，应为“depends on how important the meeting is”；“promising, uh, privacy”用词错误，应为“want privacy”；“exact position”应为“exact place”。