Friends— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to reduce hesitation and filler words like 'uh' and 'umm' to make your answer sound more natural and fluent. Also, structure your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details. For example, start by directly answering the question, then add specific information about your friend and your relationship.

예시: Yes, I have a friend whom I've known since middle school, about ten years ago. She is my best friend, and we share many common interests, which has helped us maintain a strong bond over the years.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains many hesitations. Try to organize your thoughts before speaking and use complete sentences. Also, avoid irrelevant information and focus on what you usually do with your friends. Use linking words to connect ideas.

예시: Currently, my friend and I both work in offices, so we don't have much free time. However, when we meet, we usually go to a cafe to chat and relax together.

제안: Reduce filler words and improve sentence clarity. Use linking words to make your answer coherent. Provide specific details about the places and frequency of meeting.

예시: We usually meet twice a month, often at a cafe or cinema. I enjoy these places because they provide a comfortable environment to spend time together.

제안: Try to use more natural expressions and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific examples of activities you do when going out with friends.

예시: Yes, I often go out with my friends. We usually spend time outdoors, such as going to the mall for shopping or enjoying other activities together.

제안: Clarify your ideas and reduce hesitation. Express your opinion clearly and support it with reasons. Use linking words to connect your thoughts logically.

예시: In my opinion, friends are very important because they share similar beliefs about society and the future. I prefer to spend time with friends who support and understand me.

제안: Your answer is clear but can be improved by using correct grammar and linking words. Explain your preference with reasons and feelings to make your answer more specific.

예시: I prefer spending time with one close friend or a small group because I feel more comfortable. When I am with a large group, I experience social anxiety and find it difficult to enjoy myself.

제안: Improve sentence structure and clarity. Avoid unnecessary words and explain your preferences clearly. Use linking words to connect ideas.

예시: Usually, I prefer spending time outdoors, but sometimes I invite my friends over for a girls' night at my home. We enjoy chatting and watching movies together.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains many hesitations. Organize your ideas logically and use linking words. Provide specific comparisons between past and present meeting places.

예시: Yes, there is a difference. When I was a child, I preferred meeting friends in parks where we could exercise and play. Now, I prefer more relaxed places like cafes where we can talk comfortably.

제안: Reduce filler words and improve sentence flow. Use linking words to compare your preferences with your friends'. Explain why certain places are suitable or not.

예시: I prefer quiet cafes in the city center because they are peaceful and comfortable. However, my friends like going to concerts or cinemas. We often discuss and choose places that suit everyone.

× currently I have uh, uh, friend

✓ currently I have a friend

The noun 'friend' is singular and requires an article 'a' before it to be grammatically correct in English.

× we have, uh, in common part

✓ we have some things in common

The phrase 'in common part' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'have something in common' to indicate shared interests or characteristics.

× His son currently, uh, you know, we, we are both, uh, work, uh, in office

✓ Currently, we both work in an office

The phrase 'His son currently' is irrelevant and confusing here. Also, 'work' should be in base form after 'we both'. The article 'an' is needed before 'office'.

× we don't have, uh, any time, uh, for, uh, spend, uh, together

✓ we don't have any time to spend together

The correct preposition after 'have time' is 'to' followed by the base verb form, so 'to spend' is correct.

× because, uh, we went to a cafe and, uh, have

✓ because we went to a cafe and had a good time

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a proper verb after 'and'. 'Have' should be in past tense 'had' to match 'went'.

× So we'll be doing terrific anytime to, uh, meet, uh, each other

✓ So we'll be happy to meet each other anytime

The phrase 'doing terrific' is unnatural here. 'Happy to meet' is a better expression. Also, 'anytime to meet' is incorrect; 'anytime' should be used without 'to'.

× twice, uh, in a month we meet, uh, each other

✓ twice a month we meet each other

The phrase 'in a month' should be 'a month' when used with frequency expressions like 'twice'.

× we prepare to spend time in outdoor

✓ we prepare to spend time outdoors

The correct adverb is 'outdoors' not 'in outdoor'.

× go to a mall to have a shopping time

✓ go to a mall to do some shopping

The phrase 'have a shopping time' is unnatural. The correct expression is 'do some shopping'.

× their belief, uh, in, uh, in, about, uh, social and uh, the future is, uh, are so important for me

✓ their beliefs about society and the future are very important to me

The pronoun 'their' refers to 'friends' but the sentence is unclear. 'Belief' should be plural 'beliefs'. 'In about' is incorrect; 'about' is sufficient. 'Social' should be 'society' or 'social issues'. Subject-verb agreement corrected to 'are'.

× I prefer to spend time with, uh, the friend

✓ I prefer to spend time with friends

Using 'the friend' is incorrect here; it should be plural 'friends' or 'a friend' depending on context.

× I prefer spend time and wait at one friend

✓ I prefer to spend time and wait with one friend

The verb 'prefer' should be followed by 'to' plus base verb. Also, 'wait at one friend' is incorrect; 'with one friend' is correct.

× I have social anxiety and I can't handle it

✓ I have social anxiety and I can't handle it

This sentence is grammatically correct; no correction needed.

× I usually knew I prefer to spend time in outdoor

✓ I usually knew I prefer to spend time outdoors

The phrase 'in outdoor' is incorrect; 'outdoors' is the correct adverb.

× sometimes I prefer have a girls night in my home

✓ sometimes I prefer to have a girls' night at my home

The verb 'prefer' should be followed by 'to' plus base verb. Also, 'girls night' should be possessive 'girls' night'. 'In my home' is better as 'at my home'.

× I invited my friends and I spend time in front of

✓ I invite my friends and we spend time together at my home

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'Spend time in front of' is incorrect. It should be 'spend time together'.

× I prefer to spend time in, uh, in a park and have a, A and have a exercise and work at which, uh, with each other

✓ I preferred to spend time in a park, exercise, and work with each other

The sentence is confusing and has redundant words. 'Have a exercise' is incorrect; it should be 'exercise'. 'Work at which' is unclear and removed.

× I prefer to have a relaxed time and, uh, justice

✓ I prefer to have a relaxed time and rest

The word 'justice' is incorrect in this context; likely intended 'rest' or 'quiet time'.

× I love a quiet cafe in in middle of town and city in downtown

✓ I love a quiet cafe in the middle of town and downtown

The phrase 'in in middle of town and city in downtown' is redundant and incorrect. 'In the middle of town and downtown' is correct.

× my friends prefer to go to a concert cinema and like that

✓ my friends prefer to go to concerts, cinemas, and the like

'Concert cinema' is incorrect; should be plural 'concerts' and 'cinemas'. 'Like that' should be 'the like' or 'similar places'.