Friends— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: English (Nepal): Tapai ko uttar ma grammar ra sentence structure ma sudhar garnu parcha. Tapai le prashna ko seedha jawab dinu parcha ra spashta ra sanga sambandhit bibaran dinu parcha. Sentence haru lai chhoto ra prabhavit banau, ra anawasyak punaravritti bata bachnu parcha.

예시: Yes, I have a friend whom I have known for many years. We have been close since childhood, and our friendship is very important to me. I always feel grateful to have such a loyal friend. We have shared many memories and continue to support each other.

제안: English (Nepal): Tapai le prashna ko seedha jawab dinu parcha ra spashta ra sanga sambandhit bibaran dinu parcha. Tapai ko uttar ma punaravritti ra asambaddha shabda haru chhuttinu parcha. Tapai le linking words jastai 'usually', 'sometimes', 'because' prayog garera uttar lai ramro banau.

예시: Usually, I chat and gossip with my closest friends. We talk about our past experiences and our future plans. Sometimes, we share our opinions about different topics, which makes our conversations interesting.

제안: English (Nepal): Tapai ko uttar ma grammar ra sentence structure ma sudhar garnu parcha. Tapai le prashna ko seedha jawab dinu parcha ra spashta ra sanga sambandhit bibaran dinu parcha. Linking words jastai 'usually', 'because' prayog garnu ramro hunchha.

예시: We usually meet at a coffee shop near our houses. It is a perfect place for us to relax, share our problems, and laugh together. Meeting there always makes me feel happy and relieved.

제안: English (Nepal): Tapai le prashna ko seedha ra spashta jawab dinu parcha. Tapai ko uttar ma grammar ra sentence structure ma sudhar garnu parcha. Tapai le linking words jastai 'because', 'so' prayog garera uttar lai ramro banau ra bibaran haru specific ra relevant banau.

예시: Yes, we often go out together. Currently, we are planning to visit Mustang because it is a beautiful tourist destination with many mountains and religious sites. I think it will be an amazing experience for all of us.

제안: English (Nepal): Tapai le prashna ko seedha ra spashta jawab dinu parcha. Tapai ko uttar ma grammar ra sentence structure ma sudhar garnu parcha. Tapai le specific ra relevant bibaran haru dinu parcha ra linking words prayog garnu parcha.

예시: Friends are very important to me because I often share my problems with them when I cannot talk to my family. They comfort me and give good advice. For me, friends are like a safe home where I feel secure and supported.

제안: English (Nepal): Tapai le prashna ko seedha ra spashta jawab dinu parcha. Tapai ko uttar ma grammar ra sentence structure ma sudhar garnu parcha. Tapai le linking words prayog garera uttar lai ramro banau ra bibaran haru specific ra relevant banau.

예시: I prefer spending time with a group of friends because we can laugh together and create memories. We also discuss our problems and find solutions as a team. Talking about our goals and life experiences makes me very happy.

제안: English (Nepal): Tapai le prashna ko seedha ra spashta jawab dinu parcha. Tapai ko uttar ma grammar ra sentence structure ma sudhar garnu parcha. Tapai le linking words prayog garera uttar lai ramro banau ra bibaran haru specific ra relevant banau.

예시: Yes, I often invite my friends to my home. My brother also enjoys their company. It is a special occasion for us, and I feel happy and blessed to share joyful moments with my friends.

제안: English (Nepal): Tapai le prashna ko seedha ra spashta jawab dinu parcha. Tapai ko uttar ma grammar ra sentence structure ma sudhar garnu parcha. Tapai le linking words prayog garera uttar lai ramro banau ra bibaran haru specific ra relevant banau.

예시: Yes, there is a difference. When we were children, we met anywhere without thinking about our goals. But now, everyone has dreams and plans, so we choose places that are convenient and suitable for our busy lives.

제안: English (Nepal): Tapai le prashna ko seedha ra spashta jawab dinu parcha. Tapai ko uttar ma grammar ra sentence structure ma sudhar garnu parcha. Tapai le uttar lai logical ra coherent banau, ra bibaran haru specific ra relevant banau.

예시: Some places are suitable for meeting because they are peaceful and comfortable, like a haven. For example, parks with beautiful trees provide a relaxing environment where we can talk and enjoy nature.

× Yes, I have a friends whom I known for a long time.

✓ Yes, I have friends whom I have known for a long time.

The word 'friends' is plural, so 'a' should be removed. Also, 'known' requires the auxiliary verb 'have' to form the present perfect tense. In English, plural nouns do not take the article 'a'.

× Yes, I have a friends whom I known for a long time.

✓ Yes, I have friends whom I have known for a long time.

The verb 'known' is the past participle and needs the auxiliary verb 'have' to form the present perfect tense. Without 'have', the sentence is grammatically incorrect.

× Me and my friends were become not sorry to till now and our friendship like like our friendship is the most important for me and it is the favorite part of me likely like to salute to.

✓ My friends and I have not been apart until now, and our friendship is the most important thing to me; it is my favorite part of life that I like to cherish.

The original sentence has incorrect word order, verb usage, and unclear expressions. 'Me and my friends' should be 'My friends and I' as the subject. 'Were become not sorry to till now' is incorrect; it should express continuity with 'have not been apart until now'. The phrase 'like like our friendship' is redundant and unclear. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Till now we were friends forever.

✓ We have been friends forever until now.

The phrase 'Till now we were friends forever' mixes tenses incorrectly. 'Have been friends forever' expresses ongoing friendship up to the present.

× In the topic of friends, I I usually do it and gossip with my closest friends and we start a conversation conversation from our side world how we how we will become and how how we was like.

✓ Regarding friends, I usually chat and gossip with my closest friends, and we start conversations about our world, how we will become, and what we were like.

The phrase 'I I usually do it' is unclear and redundant. 'Conversation conversation' is repeated. 'From our side world' is unclear and corrected to 'about our world'. 'How we was like' is incorrect; it should be 'what we were like' to describe past states.

× We meet in one coffee shop which was near of our house and coffee and my friends was the best combination and it will always our meat place where we where we were sure the our problems and laugh everything.

✓ We meet at a coffee shop near our house; coffee and my friends are the best combination, and it will always be our meeting place where we share our problems and laugh about everything.

'Near of our house' is incorrect; 'near' does not require 'of'. 'Was' should be 'is' to agree with plural 'friends'. 'Meat place' is a typo for 'meeting place'. 'Where we were sure the our problems' is unclear and corrected to 'where we share our problems'.

× It makes me so happy and so really relief.

✓ It makes me so happy and really relieved.

'So really relief' is incorrect; 'relief' is a noun, but the sentence needs an adjective or past participle 'relieved' to describe the feeling.

× Is we will go, we are planning to some somewhere we want to go and we are planning to going Mustang because Mustang is the one of the best destination for the tourist and new place people because there are the lots of religion and lots of the mountains we see the mountains and otherwise it's so, so, so good.

✓ If we go, we are planning to go somewhere, and we are planning to go to Mustang because Mustang is one of the best destinations for tourists and new people; there are many religions and many mountains to see, and overall it's very good.

'Is we will go' is incorrect; it should be 'If we go'. 'Planning to some somewhere' is incorrect; it should be 'planning to go somewhere'. 'Planning to going' should be 'planning to go'. 'The one of the best destination' should be 'one of the best destinations'. 'The lots of religion' should be 'many religions'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammar.

× Friends are the most important for me because when the topic of problems I can't service my family, but I I usually share with my friends and they always comfort me and they always give me advice.

✓ Friends are the most important to me because when I have problems, I can't always share with my family, but I usually share with my friends, and they always comfort me and give me advice.

'The most important for me' should be 'most important to me'. 'When the topic of problems' is unclear; corrected to 'when I have problems'. 'I can't service my family' is incorrect; likely meant 'I can't always share with my family'. The sentence is clarified and corrected.

× Family family will also but in the Bible matching of the friends friends is like my home and my safe zone that's.

✓ Family is important too, but according to the Bible, friendship is like my home and my safe zone.

The original sentence is unclear and repetitive. 'Family family will also but' is incorrect. The sentence is rephrased for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I prefer to spend time with my friends or group of friends because in a group we should all laugh.

✓ I prefer to spend time with my friends or a group of friends because in a group we can all laugh together.

'Or group of friends' needs an article 'a'. 'Should all laugh' is awkward; 'can all laugh together' is more natural.

× We make the memories and we we see all these other problem and we we came the solution and we talk about the our life memories and what's our goal And it it that things make me so so so.

✓ We make memories, see all these problems, come up with solutions, and talk about our life memories and goals. These things make me very happy.

'The memories' should be 'memories' without 'the'. 'We see all these other problem' should be 'we see all these problems'. 'We came the solution' should be 'we come up with solutions'. 'The our life memories' should be 'our life memories'. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× I invited my friends to my home and my brother reading.

✓ I invited my friends to my home, and my brother was reading.

'My brother reading' is incomplete; it needs auxiliary verb 'was' to form past continuous tense.

× It's a big day for us and my friends will like our family for me and I always and always share with happiness with my friends and it makes me so happy and so blissful for having them that's why.

✓ It's a big day for us, and my friends are like family to me. I always share happiness with my friends, and it makes me very happy and blissful to have them; that's why.

'My friends will like our family for me' is incorrect; corrected to 'my friends are like family to me'. 'Share with happiness' should be 'share happiness'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammar.

× Maybe because, uh, when we are in our childhood, we don't care about our goals, our life and, uh, everything.

✓ Maybe because, when we were in our childhood, we didn't care about our goals, our life, and everything.

Talking about past time 'childhood' requires past tense verbs 'were' and 'didn't care' instead of present tense.

× But in now, umm, uh, everyone have one dream to complete and to achieve something in their life.

✓ But now, everyone has one dream to complete and achieve something in their life.

'Everyone' is singular and requires 'has' not 'have'. 'In now' is incorrect; 'now' is sufficient.

× Some places are like a magical and some places are like a haven.

✓ Some places are magical, and some places are like a haven.

'Like a magical' is incorrect; 'magical' is an adjective and does not need 'a'. The sentence is corrected for proper adjective use.