Friends— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to give a complete sentence that directly answers the question and add a little detail to make your answer more natural and effective. Avoid repeating words unnecessarily.

예시: Yes, I have a friend whom I have known since childhood, and we have been very close ever since.

제안: Start with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to connect your ideas. Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and be more specific about activities you do with your friends.

예시: I usually play video games with my friends, and we also spend time together at school during breaks.

제안: Provide a clear and complete answer directly related to the question. Avoid unclear or incomplete sentences. If you meet friends in multiple places, mention them with linking words.

예시: We often meet at school, but sometimes we also meet at the park or at each other's homes.

제안: Answer directly and clearly, avoid filler words, and use linking words to explain your answer. Be specific about the activities you do when going out.

예시: Yes, we often go out every week, usually with our parents, to places like the park or the cinema.

제안: Answer the question directly with a complete sentence and explain why friends are important to you using specific reasons.

예시: Friends are very important to me because they provide support and make my life more enjoyable.

제안: Give a full sentence as your answer and explain your preference with reasons or examples to enrich your response.

예시: I prefer to spend time with a group of friends because it is more fun and we can do many activities together.

제안: Provide a clear and structured answer with reasons. Avoid repeating phrases and filler words. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

예시: Of course, I would invite my friends to my home because they are close to me, and we can celebrate special occasions like birthdays together.

제안: Answer directly and clearly. Use linking words to explain your opinion and avoid incomplete sentences. Be specific about any differences or similarities.

예시: Actually, there is no big difference because although times have changed, I still meet my friends in similar places like school and parks.

제안: Give a clear and coherent answer using linking words. Explain why some places are suitable with specific reasons and examples. Avoid unclear phrases.

예시: Some places are suitable for meeting because they are comfortable and quiet, like restaurants or parks, while busy streets are not good because they are noisy and crowded.

× I'm actually a kid so I'm mostly playing video games, but we are friends in school too.

✓ I'm actually a kid so I mostly play video games, but we are friends in school too.

The phrase 'I'm mostly playing' incorrectly uses the present continuous tense for a habitual action. In English, habitual actions are expressed using the simple present tense, so 'I mostly play' is correct.

× In can in kindergarten.

✓ In kindergarten.

The phrase 'In can in kindergarten' contains an unnecessary and incorrect word 'can'. The correct preposition is simply 'in' followed by the place, so 'In kindergarten' is correct.

× Get yes every week, uh, we go hang out together with our parents.

✓ Yes, every week, we go hang out together with our parents.

The word 'Get' at the beginning is incorrect and disrupts sentence structure. Removing 'Get' and starting with 'Yes' makes the sentence grammatically correct and clear.

× How important are your friends? Really important. Really important.

✓ They are really important to me.

The response 'Really important' is a fragment lacking a subject and verb. A complete sentence with subject and verb is needed, such as 'They are really important to me.'

× With a with a group of friends.

✓ With a group of friends.

The phrase repeats 'with a' unnecessarily. Removing the repetition corrects the sentence.

× Of course, of course. Why not? Why not? Really, why not? I don't know why not, uh, and I don't know why not. It's like they're your friends. They can come in your house and they can like get up, uh, make a party for the birthday. I don't.

✓ Of course. Why not? I don't know why not. They're your friends. They can come to your house and have a party for your birthday.

The original sentence is repetitive and contains unclear phrases like 'get up' and 'make a party for the birthday.' Correcting these to 'have a party for your birthday' and removing repetitions improves clarity and grammar.

× Actually no, I think because the difference I know the the decades are changing, the years are changing but making friends is not changed yet like.

✓ Actually no, I think the decades and years are changing, but making friends has not changed yet.

The phrase 'making friends is not changed yet like' is incorrect. The present perfect tense 'has not changed yet' is appropriate to express that the action remains the same up to now.

× Look like eating in a street is not a good place for meeting but OK integration streets but look like a game there or look like a restaurant. Look like these are good places.

✓ It looks like eating on the street is not a good place for meeting, but places like a game center or a restaurant are good places.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect with 'street'; 'on the street' is correct. Also, 'integration streets' is unclear and likely incorrect. Clarifying the sentence and correcting prepositions improves understanding.