Friends— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Ответ должен быть более структурированным и грамматически правильным. Избегайте лишних пауз и повторов, используйте простые и понятные предложения.

예시: Yes, I have a friend whom I have known for a long time. For example, my friend Alina is very special to me, and I consider her my best friend forever.

제안: Старайтесь использовать связующие слова для плавности речи и избегайте грамматических ошибок. Расширьте ответ конкретными деталями.

예시: Usually, we go for walks, watch movies at the cinema, or have coffee breaks together. I enjoy these activities because spending time with friends makes me feel relaxed and happy.

제안: Используйте правильные формы глаголов и более четко структурируйте ответ. Добавьте связующие слова для логичности.

예시: We usually meet at the mall because my city is small and there is only one main mall called A1. On weekends, all my friends and I go there to meet and spend time together.

제안: Избегайте лишних пауз и повторов, используйте правильные формы глаголов и более точные выражения. Добавьте связующие слова для связности.

예시: Yes, I often spend time outdoors with my friends because we enjoy it. Sometimes, we go to the cinema to watch our favorite movies. Also, my friend Alina and I like to have matcha coffee and croissants during coffee breaks.

제안: Старайтесь говорить более связно и грамматически правильно. Используйте конкретные примеры и избегайте повторов.

예시: My friends are very important to me because they support me during difficult times. For example, my friend Salina comforted me when my cat died, and I really appreciate her support.

제안: Ответ должен быть более ясным и грамматически правильным. Избегайте незавершенных мыслей и используйте связующие слова.

예시: I prefer spending time with a group of friends because we share happy and funny moments together, creating great memories. However, sometimes it can be noisy with many people.

제안: Ответ должен быть более логичным и грамматически правильным. Объясните причины более четко и избегайте повторов.

예시: I usually don't invite friends to my home because I come from a big family and my house is always busy. However, my friends like Alina, Amina, and Tina often come over when I am at home.

제안: Используйте правильные предлоги и грамматические формы. Сделайте ответ более связным и конкретным.

예시: Yes, there is a difference. In the past, I used to meet my friends at school or near parks close to my home. Now, we usually meet at cafes or shopping malls because these places are more comfortable and fun for us to share memories.

제안: Старайтесь говорить более связно и использовать правильные формы слов. Добавьте больше конкретики и связующих слов.

예시: I think some places are suitable for meeting because they have a special atmosphere. For example, my friends and I like places with quiet music and delicious desserts, which make our meetings enjoyable.

× what's I have known for a long time

✓ who I have known for a long time

The phrase 'what's I have known' is incorrect because 'what's' is a contraction of 'what is' which does not fit here. The correct relative pronoun for people is 'who'. The verb 'have known' is correctly in the present perfect tense to indicate an action continuing up to now.

× my friends Alina, we was, you know, 1 Great

✓ my friend Alina, we were, you know, great

The subject 'we' requires the plural past tense verb 'were' instead of 'was'. Also, 'friends Alina' should be 'friend Alina' if referring to one person. '1 Great' seems to be a typo and should be 'great'.

× she will be my best friend forever

✓ she will be my best friend forever

This sentence is grammatically correct in future tense and needs no correction.

× we usually go for walks, uh, sitting at cinema or go for coffee break

✓ we usually go for walks, sit at the cinema, or go for a coffee break

The verb forms should be parallel. 'Sitting' should be changed to 'sit' to match 'go'. Also, 'at cinema' needs the definite article 'the', and 'coffee break' should have an article 'a'.

× we likes, uh, spending times, uh, with friends

✓ we like spending time with friends

The subject 'we' requires the base form 'like' not 'likes'. 'Spending times' is incorrect; 'time' is uncountable here and should be singular.

× It's makes me feel relaxing and happy

✓ It makes me feel relaxed and happy

The subject 'It' requires the verb 'makes' without 's' after 'It'. 'Relaxing' is an adjective describing something that causes relaxation; here, the feeling is 'relaxed'.

× I'm usually meet each other in the mall definitely

✓ I usually meet each other in the mall, definitely

The auxiliary 'am' is unnecessary with 'usually meet'. The correct form is simple present 'I usually meet'. Also, 'each other' is redundant here and can be omitted or rephrased.

× we have only A1 mall so all my friends in the weekends going to this mall

✓ we have only one mall, so all my friends go to this mall on weekends

'A1 mall' is unclear; 'one mall' is clearer. 'In the weekends' should be 'on weekends'. 'Going' should be 'go' to match present tense.

× and me too and we meeting at this mall

✓ and me too, and we meet at this mall

'We meeting' is incorrect; it should be 'we meet' in simple present tense.

× I'm usually spending time with my friends outdoors because we are like it

✓ I usually spend time with my friends outdoors because we like it

'I'm usually spending' is incorrect; simple present 'I usually spend' is correct. 'We are like it' should be 'we like it'.

× sometimes we are going to the cinema to watch favorite movies

✓ sometimes we go to the cinema to watch favorite movies

Simple present 'we go' is correct for habitual actions, not 'we are going'.

× Maybe, uh, often we are going to coffee break because me and my friends Alina likes matcha coffee and eating the croissant

✓ Maybe, often we go for a coffee break because my friends Alina and I like matcha coffee and eat croissants

'We are going' should be 'we go' for habitual action. 'Me and my friends' should be 'my friends and I'. 'Likes' should be 'like' to agree with plural subject. 'Eating' should be 'eat' to match verb form.

× It's very

✓ It's very good

The sentence is incomplete and needs an adjective to complete the thought.

× All my friends are important for me because they uh, supporting me when I have depressive

✓ All my friends are important to me because they support me when I am depressed

The correct preposition is 'important to me'. 'Supporting' should be 'support' to match tense. 'I have depressive' is incorrect; 'I am depressed' is correct.

× For example, my friend Salina is supporting me when my cat died

✓ For example, my friend Salina supported me when my cat died

The event of the cat dying is in the past, so 'supported' should be past tense to match.

× I love she I love her, sorry

✓ I love her, sorry

'I love she' is incorrect; the object pronoun 'her' should be used.

× I think spending time with a group friends is better than spend time with one friend

✓ I think spending time with a group of friends is better than spending time with one friend

'Group friends' should be 'group of friends'. 'Than spend' should be 'than spending' to parallel 'spending'.

× in a group we all feels happy and funny moments and so umm memories

✓ in a group we all feel happy and have funny moments and memories

'We all feels' should be 'we all feel'. 'Funny moments and so umm memories' is awkward; 'have funny moments and memories' is better.

× But with warm friends it's very noisy and

✓ But with close friends, it's very noisy

'Warm friends' is not a common collocation; 'close friends' is better. The sentence is incomplete but corrected for clarity.

× No, my friends, no, my friends are never sitting at my home because I'm from a big family and and my home don't be alone never

✓ No, my friends never sit at my home because I'm from a big family and my home is never empty

'Are never sitting' should be 'never sit'. 'My home don't be alone never' is incorrect; 'my home is never empty' is correct.

× But I'm being at home all my friends, for example, Alina, Amina, Tina, so

✓ But when I'm at home, all my friends, for example, Alina, Amina, Tina, come over

'I'm being at home' is incorrect; 'when I'm at home' is correct. The sentence is incomplete and needs a verb for the friends' action.

× Yes there is. In the past I used to meet my friends at school or near parks at my home

✓ Yes, there is. In the past, I used to meet my friends at school or near parks by my home

'Near parks at my home' is awkward; 'near parks by my home' is better. Commas added for clarity.

× but now we are meeting from at cave or shopping malls because it's more comfort, comfortable for us and more funny to share the memories

✓ but now we meet at cafes or shopping malls because it's more comfortable for us and more fun to share memories

'We are meeting from at cave' is incorrect; 'we meet at cafes' is correct. 'Comfort' should be 'comfortable'. 'More funny' should be 'more fun'. 'The memories' should be 'memories'.

× I think it's because, uh, some places have special atmosphere because for example, me and my friends like places, uh, who had umm, quiet sound, music, uh, and sweetie desserts

✓ I think it's because some places have a special atmosphere; for example, my friends and I like places that have quiet music and sweet desserts

'Have special atmosphere' needs an article 'a special atmosphere'. 'Me and my friends' should be 'my friends and I'. 'Who had' should be 'that have'. 'Quiet sound, music' is awkward; 'quiet music' is better. 'Sweetie desserts' should be 'sweet desserts'.