Friends— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you have a friend you have known for a long time?
수험생
Riya is my childhood best friend, I know since my birth and we have completed our study at the same time and now also we are friend.
시험관
What do you usually do with your friends?
수험생
My friend and I usually do some shopping at the shopping mall or some sometime go out with them restaurant or playing game or something, chatting with each other on my mobile. There are also some activity like syncing or listening music at my home.
시험관
Where do you often meet each other?
수험생
My friend and I usually met at a cafe or some restaurant to hang out to a coffee, which is a favorite, uh, of both. And sometime we met at the theater because we know entertainment is so good for our health.
시험관
Do you often go out with your friends?
수험생
It depends on how busy we are, if both are free at the weekend so just we meet at the restaurant or cafe area just hanging a cup of coffee and sometime go for a shopping to buy some new clothes.
시험관
How important are friends to you?
수험생
Friends are very important for me because they make make from heart. For example my friend Rhea is my supporter or whenever I need she just help me in any way or any problem.
시험관
Do you prefer to spend time with one friend or with a group of friends?
수험생
I prefer spend time with both if I have a problem so I just hang out with my one close friend so they give me solution but when they are are in a group so I just enjoy with them. They entertain me a lot.
시험관
Would you invite friends to your home?
수험생
Yes, I'm invite my friend at my home. For example, last week I invited my friend from my birthday party. So we just enjoy and make a fun at my home.
시험관
Is there a difference between where you meet friends now and where you used to meet them in the past?
수험생
In the past, my friend and I met at the park nearby my neighborhood, but now from the busy lifestyle I have, me and my friend met at a restaurant or cafe and enjoy a cup of tea.
시험관
Why are some places suitable for meeting while others are not?
수험생
Some places are suitable for meeting because of their nature or convenient how they convenient are. Some places are crowded or very noisy, so they are not preferable for the people.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you have a friend you have known for a long time?
점수: 60.0제안: Your answer needs to be clearer and more grammatically correct. Start with a direct response, then add specific details about your friendship. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure.
예시: Yes, I have a friend named Riya whom I have known since childhood. We studied together and have remained close friends ever since.
What do you usually do with your friends?
점수: 55.0제안: Try to organize your answer with clear sentences and use linking words to connect ideas. Be specific about activities and avoid vague phrases.
예시: My friends and I usually go shopping at the mall or visit restaurants. Sometimes, we play games or chat on our mobiles. We also enjoy listening to music together at my home.
Where do you often meet each other?
점수: 65.0제안: Use correct verb tenses and link your ideas smoothly. Provide clear reasons for your choices to enrich your answer.
예시: We usually meet at a cafe or restaurant to enjoy coffee, which we both like. Sometimes, we go to the theater because watching movies is good for relaxation.
Do you often go out with your friends?
점수: 60.0제안: Improve sentence structure and use linking words like 'if' and 'so' properly. Be concise and clear in your explanation.
예시: It depends on our schedules. If we are free on weekends, we meet at a cafe to have coffee, and sometimes we go shopping for new clothes.
How important are friends to you?
점수: 55.0제안: Clarify your ideas and correct grammar mistakes. Provide specific examples and explain why friends are important to you.
예시: Friends are very important to me because they support me sincerely. For example, my friend Rhea always helps me whenever I face problems.
Do you prefer to spend time with one friend or with a group of friends?
점수: 60.0제안: Use proper sentence structure and linking words like 'because' and 'but'. Be clear about your preferences and reasons.
예시: I prefer spending time with both. When I have a problem, I hang out with one close friend because they give me advice. But when I am with a group, I just enjoy their company and have fun.
Would you invite friends to your home?
점수: 60.0제안: Use correct verb forms and avoid redundancy. Provide clear examples and explain the situation briefly.
예시: Yes, I invite my friends to my home. For example, last week I invited my friends to my birthday party, and we had a lot of fun together.
Is there a difference between where you meet friends now and where you used to meet them in the past?
점수: 65.0제안: Use correct verb tenses and sentence structure. Explain the reasons clearly and use linking words to connect ideas.
예시: In the past, my friends and I used to meet at the park near my neighborhood. However, due to our busy lifestyles now, we meet at restaurants or cafes to enjoy tea.
Why are some places suitable for meeting while others are not?
점수: 60.0제안: Improve sentence clarity and grammar. Use linking words and explain your ideas with specific reasons.
예시: Some places are suitable for meeting because they are convenient and peaceful. On the other hand, crowded or noisy places are not preferable for meetings.
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