Friends— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 문법 오류와 어색한 표현이 많아 자연스러운 문장으로 수정이 필요합니다. 친구와의 관계를 명확히 표현하고, 문장 구조를 간결하게 하세요.

예시: Yes, I have a best friend named Damien. We have known each other since primary school, and our relationship has grown stronger over time because we rarely argue.

제안: 동사의 시제와 단수/복수 일치에 주의하고, 문장을 더 자연스럽고 간결하게 표현하세요. 연결어를 사용해 문장 흐름을 개선할 수 있습니다.

예시: I usually go to a cafe with my friend, and we chat about our daily lives. Sometimes, we share personal stories, which helps strengthen our relationship.

제안: 전치사 사용과 문장 구조를 개선하세요. 구체적인 장소를 명확히 하고, 문장을 자연스럽게 연결하세요.

예시: We usually meet near our houses, for example, at a cafe or a restaurant before having dinner.

제안: 복수형과 관사 사용에 주의하고, 문장을 명확하고 자연스럽게 만드세요. 이유를 설명할 때 연결어를 적절히 사용하세요.

예시: Yes, I often go out with my friends. We like going to the beach because there are many activities, so we enjoy doing things together.

제안: 단수와 복수형 일치, 문법 오류를 수정하고, 문장을 더 자연스럽고 명확하게 표현하세요.

예시: Friends are very important to me because they provide emotional support. When I feel tired or stressed, chatting with them helps me relax.

제안: 문법과 어휘 선택에 주의하고, 문장을 명확하고 자연스럽게 만드세요. 'Ismail'은 오타로 보이며, 적절한 연결어를 사용하세요.

예시: I prefer spending time with one close friend because we can share personal stories. Also, sometimes we have deep conversations, which help strengthen our relationship.

제안: 전치사 사용과 문법 오류를 수정하고, 문장을 더 자연스럽고 간결하게 표현하세요.

예시: Yes, I often invite my friends to my home because we like watching movies. When we are at home, we just watch movies and enjoy delicious food. I think it's a cozy way to spend time together.

제안: 문장 연결을 더 자연스럽게 하고, 접속사를 적절히 사용하세요.

예시: Yes, I think so. We used to meet at school often; however, now we usually meet at a cafe or a restaurant.

제안: 의미 전달이 어렵고 문법 오류가 많습니다. 문장을 명확하고 논리적으로 다시 구성해야 합니다.

예시: I think people usually choose places that are convenient and close to where they live, so some places are more suitable for meeting than others.

× Yes I do have best friend, she's long time relationship with me.

✓ Yes, I do have a best friend; she's had a long-time relationship with me.

The sentence lacks the article 'a' before 'best friend' and uses 'relationship' incorrectly as a noun to describe a person. It should be 'she's had a long-time relationship with me' to indicate duration. Articles are necessary before singular countable nouns.

× She's name is Damien.

✓ Her name is Damien.

The possessive pronoun 'her' should be used instead of 'she's' (she is) to indicate possession of the name.

× We met in primary school since now we don't do argue and we relationship getting stronger.

✓ We met in primary school, and since then we haven't argued; our relationship is getting stronger.

The sentence is awkward and ungrammatical. 'Since now' is incorrect; 'since then' is appropriate. 'Don't do argue' is incorrect; 'haven't argued' is correct. 'We relationship' should be 'our relationship'. Proper conjunctions and verb forms are needed.

× I usually go to cafe with my friend and chat about our daily life or sometimes we chat about our personal story that's make our relationship become more stronger.

✓ I usually go to a cafe with my friend and chat about our daily lives, or sometimes we chat about our personal stories that make our relationship stronger.

'Cafe' needs an article 'a'. 'Daily life' should be plural 'daily lives' to match 'our'. 'Personal story' should be plural 'personal stories'. 'That's make' should be 'that make' to agree with plural subject. 'More stronger' is incorrect; 'stronger' suffices.

× We usually meet near our house. For example in the cafe or in the restaurant before we having dinner.

✓ We usually meet near our house, for example, in a cafe or a restaurant before having dinner.

'The cafe' and 'the restaurant' should be 'a cafe' and 'a restaurant' as they are not specific. 'Before we having dinner' is incorrect; it should be 'before having dinner'.

× Yes, I do often go out with my friend. We like to go to beach and because they have many activity, so we enjoy having activity together.

✓ Yes, I often go out with my friends. We like to go to the beach because there are many activities, so we enjoy doing activities together.

'My friend' should be plural 'my friends' to match context. 'Go to beach' needs 'the beach'. 'They have many activity' is incorrect; 'there are many activities' is correct. 'Having activity' should be 'doing activities'.

× Friend is very important to me because they support my emotional and also when I feel tired or stressed.

✓ Friends are very important to me because they support me emotionally, and also when I feel tired or stressed.

'Friend is' should be plural 'Friends are'. 'Support my emotional' is incorrect; it should be 'support me emotionally'.

× I can reduce stress by have a chat with them.

✓ I can reduce stress by having a chat with them.

After 'by', the verb should be in the '-ing' form, so 'have' becomes 'having'.

× I prefer spending time with one close friend because we can share our personal story.

✓ I prefer spending time with one close friend because we can share our personal stories.

'Personal story' should be plural 'personal stories' to match 'we'.

× Also sometimes we can do deep conversation Ismail help our relationship more.

✓ Also, sometimes we can have deep conversations which help our relationship more.

The sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Do deep conversation' should be 'have deep conversations'. 'Ismail' seems a typo for 'which'. The sentence needs restructuring for clarity.

× Yes, I often invite my friend in my home because we like watching movie.

✓ Yes, I often invite my friends to my home because we like watching movies.

'Invite my friend in my home' should be 'invite my friends to my home'. 'Watching movie' should be plural 'watching movies'.

× So when we at home we just watch movie and having delicious food.

✓ So when we are at home, we just watch movies and have delicious food.

'When we at home' needs 'are'. 'Watch movie' should be 'watch movies'. 'Having delicious food' should be 'have delicious food'.

× I think it's very cozy way to having spending time each other.

✓ I think it's a very cozy way to spend time together.

'To having spending time each other' is ungrammatical. The correct form is 'to spend time together'.

× Yes, I think so. We used to meet at school often, however now we usually meet at a cafe or a restaurant.

✓ Yes, I think so. We used to meet at school often; however, now we usually meet at a cafe or a restaurant.

The sentence is mostly correct but needs a semicolon or period before 'however' and commas for clarity.

× I think depends on the suburb is convenient or not people usually. Ketchup meat at closer place.

✓ I think it depends on whether the suburb is convenient or not. People usually catch up at a closer place.

The sentence is unclear and contains errors. 'Depends on the suburb is convenient' needs 'it depends on whether the suburb is convenient'. 'Ketchup meat' is a mishearing of 'catch up meet'. 'At closer place' needs 'at a closer place'.