Watch— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is understandable but contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to make your sentences clearer and more concise. For example, avoid repeating phrases and improve sentence structure to sound more natural.

예시: No, I don't wear a watch now, but I used to have one as a child. Since I didn't have a phone back then, my parents bought me a watch so I could check the time and contact them if needed.

제안: Your answer is a bit confusing and has grammatical mistakes. Try to organize your ideas clearly and use linking words to connect your points logically. Also, avoid unnecessary repetition and incomplete sentences.

예시: Yes, I have. When I was a kid, my parents gave me a watch so I could check the time and call them at school. I had a phone, but I broke it, and it was too expensive to replace.

제안: Your answer lacks clarity and contains several grammatical errors. Try to use correct vocabulary ('status' instead of 'statues') and structure your sentences logically. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific reasons.

예시: In my opinion, people wear expensive watches to show their status. For example, many businesspeople or professionals wear luxury watches as a symbol of success.

제안: Your answer is understandable but has some unclear phrases and grammatical mistakes. Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid incomplete sentences. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

예시: I don't think wearing a watch is as important as it was in the past because nowadays we can check the time easily on our phones, which we carry everywhere. Therefore, wearing a watch is not necessary for most people.

× No I do not, but I used to own a watch when I was a kid.

✓ No, I do not, but I used to own a watch when I was a kid.

The original sentence is missing a comma after 'No' which is necessary to separate the interjection from the rest of the sentence for clarity and correct punctuation.

× I didn't have my I didn't have any phone so my by my parents bought me a watch to just check my location and be able to call them if it would be required.

✓ I didn't have a phone, so my parents bought me a watch to check my location and be able to call them if required.

The original sentence has repetition ('I didn't have my I didn't have any phone') and incorrect word order ('my by my parents'). The corrected sentence removes repetition and fixes word order for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Have you ever got a watch as a gift?

✓ Have you ever gotten a watch as a gift?

In American English, the past participle of 'get' is 'gotten' when used with 'have'. Using 'got' is common in British English but 'gotten' is preferred in American English for the present perfect tense.

× Yes actually I have. When I was a kid as I said my parents bought me a watch to just check my location and for me to be able to call them in the school because I had a phone but I unfortunately I broke it so it was. Too costly to afford a new phone?

✓ Yes, actually I have. When I was a kid, as I said, my parents bought me a watch to check my location and to be able to call them at school because I had a phone, but unfortunately, I broke it, and it was too costly to afford a new one.

The original sentence has punctuation errors, awkward phrasing, and a misplaced question mark. The correction adds commas for clarity, fixes prepositions ('in the school' to 'at school'), removes unnecessary words, and corrects sentence flow.

× In my opinion people tend to wear expensive watches to just show everyones their statues.

✓ In my opinion, people tend to wear expensive watches to just show everyone their status.

The word 'everyones' is incorrect; it should be 'everyone' as a singular indefinite pronoun. Also, 'statues' is a misspelling of 'status'.

× I have not just said most of the people who are expensive watches are businessman's or just workers who usually also in the sweets.

✓ I have just said that most of the people who wear expensive watches are businessmen or workers who usually also wear suits.

The original sentence has incorrect word forms: 'have not just said' should be 'have just said'; 'businessman's' should be 'businessmen'; 'in the sweets' is a mishearing of 'in suits'. The correction fixes these errors for grammatical accuracy.

× So it just evaluates their statues.

✓ So it just elevates their status.

The word 'evaluates' is incorrect in this context; the intended word is 'elevates'. Also, 'statues' should be 'status'. This correction fixes the vocabulary to convey the intended meaning.

× I think it's not so important as it used to be some decades ago, because nowadays we have our phones and. Just was us everywhere, so we just kind of check the time and our phone rather than talking and worrying watches.

✓ I think it's not as important as it used to be some decades ago because nowadays we have our phones and just carry them everywhere, so we just check the time on our phones rather than wearing and worrying about watches.

The original sentence has awkward phrasing and incorrect word usage: 'Just was us everywhere' is unclear and likely a mishearing of 'just carry them everywhere'; 'talking and worrying watches' is incorrect and should be 'wearing and worrying about watches'. The correction improves clarity and grammar.