Watch— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly and clearly, for example, say whether you wear a watch or not, and why. Avoid repetition and incorrect word usage.

예시: Yes, I usually wear a watch when I go outside because it helps me keep track of time easily.

제안: Your answer has good ideas but needs clearer structure and grammar. Start with a direct answer, then explain why watches are common gifts, using linking words to connect ideas.

예시: Yes, I have received a watch as a gift before. Watches are popular presents because they are both practical for telling time and stylish accessories that enhance a person's appearance.

제안: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and unclear. Try to organize your ideas logically and use linking words. Also, avoid unnecessary repetition and focus on clear reasons why people wear expensive watches.

예시: Some people wear expensive watches to display their wealth and status. They may enjoy owning luxury items that reflect their success, while others prefer modest watches simply to tell the time.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical mistakes and some unclear phrases. Try to speak more fluently and use linking words to connect your ideas clearly.

예시: I think wearing a watch is less important nowadays because most people use their mobile phones to check the time. However, if someone is used to wearing a watch, they can continue to do so for convenience or style.

× I said to wear watch whenever I go outside.

✓ I said I wear a watch whenever I go outside.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'to wear' after 'said'. The verb 'say' is followed by a clause with the base verb or present tense, not the infinitive form. Also, 'watch' needs an article 'a' before it.

× I like to use wear wash.

✓ I like to wear a watch.

The phrase 'use wear wash' is incorrect and unclear. The correct expression is 'I like to wear a watch.' Also, 'watch' requires the article 'a'.

× I said to wear watch whenever I go outside.

✓ I said I wear a watch whenever I go outside.

The noun 'watch' is countable and singular here, so it requires the indefinite article 'a' before it.

× Whenever I have a birthday function or some celebration, I usually prefer to watch as not only it's by means to find out the time but also it's give a adorable look the person who wear it.

✓ Whenever I have a birthday function or some celebration, I usually prefer to wear a watch as not only is it a means to find out the time but also it gives an adorable look to the person who wears it.

Several article errors: 'prefer to watch' should be 'prefer to wear a watch'; 'it's by means' should be 'it is a means'; 'give a adorable look' should be 'gives an adorable look'; 'the person who wear it' should be 'the person who wears it'. Articles 'a' and 'an' are needed before singular countable nouns and adjectives starting with vowel sounds.

× it's give a adorable look the person who wear it.

✓ it gives an adorable look to the person who wears it.

The verb must agree with the singular subject 'it', so 'give' should be 'gives'. Also, 'wear' should be 'wears' to agree with singular 'person'.

× it's give a adorable look the person who wear it.

✓ it gives an adorable look to the person who wears it.

The preposition 'to' is needed after 'look' to indicate the recipient of the look.

× Some of the people who just have a lot of money can buy anything as per their wish, and they would like to prefer anything that is expensive to show other people they possess a lot of money.

✓ Some people who have a lot of money can buy anything they wish, and they prefer expensive things to show others that they possess a lot of money.

'Some of the people' is better as 'Some people'; 'as per their wish' is awkward, better as 'they wish'; 'would like to prefer' is redundant, 'prefer' suffices; 'show other people they possess' needs 'show others that they possess' for clarity and correctness.

× I only I can only answer give this kind of answer.

✓ I can only give this kind of answer.

The original sentence has redundant and misplaced words 'I only I can only answer give'. The correct structure is 'I can only give this kind of answer'.

× For this kind, I always want to use modest type of RC five year.

✓ For this kind, I always want to use a modest type of watch for five years.

The phrase 'modest type of RC five year' is unclear and incorrect. It likely means 'a modest type of watch for five years'. Also, 'RC' is unclear and probably a typo.

× I watch that only means to find out.

✓ I watch that only means to find out the time.

The sentence is incomplete and missing the object 'the time' after 'find out'. Also, 'I watch' is unclear; possibly 'I wear a watch' is intended.

× I think nowadays it's not much important to wear the bus because there are a lot of other devices to find out the watch.

✓ I think nowadays it's not very important to wear a watch because there are a lot of other devices to find out the time.

'wear the bus' is incorrect; it should be 'wear a watch'. Also, 'to find out the watch' should be 'to find out the time'. The pronouns and nouns are misused here.

× For example, we're always, uh, possessing, we're always having mobile phone in your hand.

✓ For example, we always have a mobile phone in our hand.

'Possessing' and 'having' are redundant; 'in your hand' should be 'in our hand' to match the subject 'we'. Also, 'a mobile phone' needs the article 'a'.

× Nowadays, most of the people saw mobile phone and we can find out the time, uh, there and no need of, uh, watch.

✓ Nowadays, most people use mobile phones and we can find out the time there, so there is no need for a watch.

'saw mobile phone' is incorrect; it should be 'use mobile phones'. 'No need of watch' should be 'no need for a watch'. Also, 'most of the people' is better as 'most people'.

× And if you are, if you have a habit of hearing one, then just you can do it.

✓ And if you have a habit of wearing one, then you can just do it.

'hearing one' is incorrect; it should be 'wearing one' referring to a watch. The pronoun placement is also corrected for clarity.