Watch— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat natural but a bit awkward and redundant. Try to respond directly and clearly, for example, say "Yes, I usually wear a watch when I go out." Avoid unnecessary details unless asked.

예시: Yes, I usually wear a watch when I go out because it helps me keep track of time.

제안: Your answer has many grammar mistakes and lacks coherence. Use correct tense and sentence structure. Also, avoid redundancy and use linking words to connect ideas. For example, "I usually don't receive gifts, but on my 20th birthday, my brother gave me a Fossil watch. It is expensive and comfortable to wear, and it looks fancy with my suits."

예시: I usually don't get gifts, but on my 20th birthday, my brother gave me a Fossil watch. It is quite expensive and comfortable, and it looks elegant when I wear it with my suits.

제안: Your answer is repetitive and has grammatical errors. Use linking words to avoid repetition and improve coherence. Also, be specific and accurate with vocabulary. For example, "Some people wear expensive watches as an investment because luxury brands like Patek Philippe and Rolex increase in value over time. Millionaires often buy them for this reason."

예시: Some people wear expensive watches as an investment because luxury brands like Patek Philippe and Rolex tend to increase in value over the years. Therefore, millionaires often purchase them.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to express your ideas clearly and logically using linking words. For example, "I think wearing a watch is important because it helps us be punctual. Being on time is essential for success in life."

예시: I believe wearing a watch is important because it helps us keep track of time and be punctual. Punctuality is crucial for achieving success in life.

× Yes, I wear my watch on the regular basis when I go to the Center for doing the IELTS exam preparations.

✓ Yes, I wear my watch on a regular basis when I go to the center for doing the IELTS exam preparations.

The phrase 'on the regular basis' is incorrect because 'regular basis' is a general expression and should be preceded by the indefinite article 'a' instead of the definite article 'the'. Also, 'Center' should not be capitalized unless it is part of a proper noun. Therefore, 'a regular basis' and 'center' are correct.

× Usually I don't get any gift from anyone but on my twenty 20th birthday my brother gift month a watch the company of Fossil.

✓ Usually I don't get any gifts from anyone but on my 20th birthday my brother gifted me a watch from the company Fossil.

The verb 'gift' is incorrectly used in present tense and as a noun here; it should be the past tense verb 'gifted' to indicate a past action. Also, 'gift month' is incorrect; it should be 'gifted me'. 'The company of Fossil' is awkward; 'from the company Fossil' is better. 'Twenty 20th' is redundant; '20th' suffices. 'Gift' as a noun should be plural 'gifts' when referring to any gifts in general.

× Usually I don't get any gift from anyone but on my twenty 20th birthday my brother gift month a watch the company of Fossil.

✓ Usually I don't get any gifts from anyone but on my 20th birthday my brother gifted me a watch from the company Fossil.

The word 'gift' should be plural 'gifts' when referring to gifts in general. This is a singular and plural issue.

× It is very comfortably and look like a very fancy when I wear with my suits.

✓ It is very comfortable and looks very fancy when I wear it with my suits.

'Comfortably' is an adverb but here an adjective 'comfortable' is needed to describe 'it'. Also, 'look' should be 'looks' to agree with singular subject 'it'. 'Look like a very fancy' is incorrect; 'looks very fancy' is correct. 'Wear with my suits' needs the pronoun 'it' to specify what is worn.

× Some people wear expensive watches as an investment because the luxury watches like Patek, Flip and Rolex is an investment because his rate is increasing every year and year.

✓ Some people wear expensive watches as an investment because luxury watches like Patek, Flip, and Rolex are an investment because their value increases every year.

'Luxury watches' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' not 'is'. 'His rate' is incorrect pronoun usage; it should be 'their value' to refer to watches. 'Increasing every year and year' is redundant; 'increases every year' is sufficient.

× Some people wear expensive watches as an investment because the luxury watches like Patek, Flip and Rolex is an investment because his rate is increasing every year and year.

✓ Some people wear expensive watches as an investment because luxury watches like Patek, Flip, and Rolex are an investment because their value increases every year.

The pronoun 'his' is incorrectly used to refer to watches, which are inanimate objects. The correct pronoun is 'their' to match the plural noun 'watches'.

× From my point of view, it is important because when we wear a watch we are on a time.

✓ From my point of view, it is important because when we wear a watch we are on time.

The phrase 'on a time' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'on time' meaning punctual. The article 'a' is unnecessary here.

× When we do everything on a time, then we go to success.

✓ When we do everything on time, we achieve success.

'On a time' is incorrect; it should be 'on time'. 'Go to success' is an incorrect phrase; 'achieve success' or 'succeed' is correct. The sentence structure is improved by removing 'then' and rephrasing.

× What is important?

✓ That is important.

The question 'What is important?' is out of context and incomplete. The intended meaning is likely 'That is important' as a concluding statement. The sentence structure is corrected accordingly.