Websites— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a direct response with clear sentences and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically and provide specific examples of websites you visit.

예시: I often visit entertainment websites like YouTube because I enjoy watching videos. Additionally, I sometimes browse news websites to stay updated on current events.

제안: Your answer is relevant but has some unclear parts and grammatical mistakes. Try to start with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to explain why you like the website. Also, avoid incomplete sentences.

예시: My favourite website is YouTube because it offers a wide variety of free videos. I mainly use it for entertainment, but sometimes I watch educational content to learn new things.

제안: Your answer has good content but is difficult to understand due to grammar and sentence structure issues. Use clear sentences and linking words to describe the changes you noticed specifically and logically.

예시: Yes, I have noticed many changes on the websites I visit. For example, the video and sound quality have improved significantly. However, there are more advertisements now compared to before.

제안: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons or examples. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

예시: In my country, entertainment websites are very popular because people use them to relax and relieve stress. Additionally, many people visit news websites to learn about current events.

× Well there are many websites that I visit as in daily life we faced loss of problems and we also search about and we met with new things and searched on Internet.

✓ Well, there are many websites that I visit. In daily life, we face lots of problems, and we also search for information and discover new things on the Internet.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'faced' (past tense) instead of 'face' (present tense) to describe a habitual action. Also, 'loss of problems' is unclear and likely a misuse. The sentence is also run-on and lacks proper punctuation. The correction separates ideas into clear sentences, uses present tense for habitual actions, and corrects prepositions for clarity.

× Well there are many websites that I visit as in daily life we faced loss of problems and we also search about and we met with new things and searched on Internet.

✓ Well, there are many websites that I visit. In daily life, we face lots of problems, and we also search for information and discover new things on the Internet.

The phrase 'search about' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'search for'. Also, 'searched on Internet' should be 'searched on the Internet' or 'searched the Internet'. Prepositions must be used correctly to convey the intended meaning.

× But the website that I often visit is watch up name for entertainment.

✓ But the website that I often visit is WatchUp for entertainment.

The phrase 'watch up name' is unclear and seems to misuse pronouns or nouns. The correction assumes the intended website name is 'WatchUp'. Proper nouns should be capitalized and used correctly.

× What moon do you so many websites? My favorite website is.

✓ Why do you visit so many websites? My favorite website is YouTube.

The original sentence 'What moon do you so many websites?' is ungrammatical and unclear. It likely intends to ask why the student visits many websites. The correction restructures the sentence to a clear question and completes the answer.

× YouTube cause here I can watch any kind of video free of cost and most of the time I use it for entertainment purpose and sometimes I use it to learn something new.

✓ YouTube, because here I can watch any kind of video free of cost. Most of the time, I use it for entertainment purposes, and sometimes I use it to learn something new.

The original sentence uses 'cause' informally and runs multiple ideas together without proper punctuation. The correction replaces 'cause' with 'because', splits the sentence for clarity, and uses correct plural form 'purposes'.

× Yes, since I watching since I using this website, there are many changes I noticed on this websites like the quality of videos, the sound of videos as well as before there was not so many ads but these days there are so many advertisement between the videos.

✓ Yes, since I started using this website, I have noticed many changes, like the quality of videos and the sound. Also, before, there were not so many ads, but these days there are many advertisements between the videos.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'since I watching since I using' which is ungrammatical. The correction uses the present perfect tense 'have noticed' to indicate changes over time and corrects plural forms and article usage. Modal verbs are not directly involved here, but tense and verb forms are corrected.

× before there was not so many ads but these days there are so many advertisement between the videos.

✓ Before, there were not so many ads, but these days there are many advertisements between the videos.

'So many advertisement' is incorrect because 'advertisement' is countable and should be plural 'advertisements' when used with 'many'. Also, 'was' should be 'were' to agree with plural 'ads'.

× And they also improve.

✓ And they have also improved.

The original sentence lacks clarity and proper tense. 'Improve' should be in present perfect 'have improved' to indicate changes that have occurred up to now.

× Well, there are many websites, but mostly people like to search about new things.

✓ Well, there are many websites, but mostly people like to search for new things.

The phrase 'search about' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'search for'.

× And the website which is more popular I think about entertainment because people are people want to entertainment their self and legs when they feel stressed.

✓ And the website which is more popular, I think, is about entertainment because people want to entertain themselves and relax when they feel stressed.

The original sentence misuses pronouns and verbs: 'people are people want to entertainment their self and legs' is incorrect. 'Entertain' is a verb, 'entertainment' is a noun. 'Their self' should be 'themselves'. 'Legs' is incorrect; likely intended 'relax'. The correction fixes pronouns, verb forms, and word choice for clarity.