Websites— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够清晰，语法和表达存在较多错误，导致意思难以理解。建议简化句子结构，明确表达访问的网站类型和原因，避免冗余和不相关信息。

예시: I often visit Bass Pro Shops website because it offers a variety of fishing equipment and useful technical information. The prices are usually reasonable, which makes it a good choice for me.

제안: 回答内容混乱，表达不连贯，词汇使用不当。建议直接说明喜欢的网站及原因，使用连贯的句子，并避免无关内容。

예시: My favorite website is Bass Pro Shops because I can find secondhand fishing gear at reasonable prices. It is very useful for my hobby.

제안: 回答表达重复且不完整，语法错误较多。建议简洁明了地说明网站的变化及其带来的便利，避免重复和口语填充词。

예시: Yes, the website has changed from just a website to also having a mobile app, which makes it more convenient to browse on my phone.

제안: 回答不完整且表达混乱，语法错误较多。建议明确指出流行的网站类型，并简要说明原因，保持句子完整和连贯。

예시: Google is the most popular website in my country. Also, many people like to read news articles online, so newspaper websites are very popular.

× I open web visit a website called Bass Pro fishing shops which provides A secondhand sufficient lowers and there was some technical knowledge about the past vision and the prices are usually.

✓ I often visit a website called Bass Pro Fishing Shops which provides secondhand sufficient lowers and some technical knowledge about past versions, and the prices are usually reasonable.

句子中存在单复数错误，如“a website”后面应接单数名词，且“lowers”应为复数形式。需要注意名词的单复数形式与上下文一致。

× I open web visit a website called Bass Pro fishing shops which provides A secondhand sufficient lowers and there was some technical knowledge about the past vision and the prices are usually.

✓ I often visit a website called Bass Pro Fishing Shops which provides secondhand sufficient lowers and some technical knowledge about past versions, and the prices are usually reasonable.

句中“A secondhand sufficient lowers”中冠词使用错误，冠词应根据名词的单复数和特指情况正确使用。

× Bass pro shops is my favorite the website because I can discover some secondhand patient lowers. Allati is a very useful and the prices are usually reasonable until their packaging is.

✓ Bass Pro Shops is my favorite website because I can find some secondhand patient lowers. Also, it is very useful and the prices are usually reasonable, including their packaging.

句中形容词和副词使用不当，如“favorite the website”应为“favorite website”，“Allati”应为“Also”，“until their packaging is”表达不清，应调整为“including their packaging”。

× Yes, Sir, the website had a change it from purely website too as cell phone apps, which it makes it more convenient when browsing uh, by cell phones and because I because it is more convenient and.

✓ Yes, Sir, the website has changed from purely a website to also having a cell phone app, which makes it more convenient when browsing by cell phones because it is more convenient.

句中时态使用错误，“had a change”应改为现在完成时“has changed”，以符合描述最近变化的语境。

× A Google search in website is the most popular on website in my country and news paper website is so so popular because in my home country but everybody like to read the articles online and.

✓ Google Search is the most popular website in my country and newspaper websites are also very popular because in my home country, everybody likes to read articles online.

句中单复数使用错误，如“news paper website”应为复数“newspaper websites”，“everybody like”应为“everybody likes”，需注意主谓一致和名词复数形式。